[Report This]Date: 08/30/2005 11:22 pm Title: Face to Face
Wow! Three chapters at once for me. What a great present. So, the finally get to meet? I look forwardto seeing how this works out. :)
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2005 05:13 am Title: Voices in the Dark
Another good chapter. Poor Lucius, that man is going to be tormented for a long while unless he lets it out....but thats what our lovely Griffindor is for isn't it Hermoine? (Hermoine: Hmpf) Oh well hopefully you can get her to help him, he is in pain after all and more than just physically. Waiting very nicely for the next installment.
Author's Response: The final chapter is now up. I am so glad you have enjoyed my story.I just hope I can continue putting good fan fictions out there... Not sure I can do any others that are as good as this one was! LOL
[Report This]Date: 08/29/2005 08:08 pm Title: Voices in the Dark
Wow great chapter!! This kind of reminds me of the Phantom Of The Opera. I love it! Do update ASAP!! :D
Author's Response: Final chapter has just been added. I do hope it exceeds your expectations!
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 02:38 am Title: Face to Face
I want a new and improved Lucius for my own! I look forward to seeing more soon, I hope!
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 02:25 am Title: Unexpected Surprises
I wish I could be his guest!!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 01:12 am Title: Face to Face
Short but sweet enough to last for me. Although I do wish I could have read more. Look forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2005 04:18 am Title: Unexpected Surprises
This is one of the Hermione/Lucius that is truly a great story in the making. I have read many where Lucius is a visious bastard and rapes Hermione...but then again he is who he is. But I prefer the ones like this where he is changed but still holds on to some of his previous values. Keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2005 03:37 pm Title: Unexpected Surprises
I LOVE how you are building the story. Perhaps Lucious is worth saving after all. This has the potential of becoming not just another "sex" installment but a really sensitive story of redemption.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! There is more to come, soon, I hope!
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2005 03:42 pm Title: Unexpected Surprises
I never thought of Lucius and Hermione together. I really like this so far. It reminds me of the phantom of the opera.
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2005 03:23 am Title: Hermione Arrives
Yay! Glad to hear some more at last. Interesting angle to persue and you have done the 'tortured soul' thing very well. Keep posting!
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 05:40 pm Title: Unexpected Surprises
Where can I get some of that soap? LOL Great invention. And naughty Lucius, that voyuer. ;) I wonder if he will keep to his idea to let nothing happen?
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2005 06:10 pm Title: Hermione Arrives
Very nice addition. I can definitely see a Lucius deprived of his good looks turning into a recluse. You've done a very good job creating him as a tortured soul. And I can definitely see Hermione being excited by the books. I really look forward to where this is going. :)
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2005 05:10 pm Title: Hermione Arrives
that one was boring.. but please write more soon...
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2005 03:13 am Title: Hermione Arrives
Awww! Is it going to end there? :(
Author's Response: I have written 9 full chapters. I am still working on getting the 10th chapter done. But I can only get so many chapters up at a time. :-( I'm sorry I can't get them ready and up faster!
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2005 09:39 pm Title: Hermione Arrives
Bravo! I just saw this and wanted to say it is wonderful to see the second chapter. You know how much I love this story. ;)
Author's Response: I am so glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2005 10:51 pm Title: Prologue
oh my god that was so touching...
Author's Response: Next chapter is up! Hope you continue to like what you read.
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 11:06 am Title: Prologue
I really like the beginnings of the this story & I do hope that you continue it.
Author's Response: Sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Real Life has been catchingme off guard! Hope you like this next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 06:54 am Title: Prologue
It was nice. Do continue. Nancy Potter
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2005 08:49 pm Title: Prologue
I love OOC Lucius. It's beautifully written and I can't wait for you next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
[Report This]Date: 07/23/2005 09:15 am Title: Prologue
You should continue this. Most definitely. I don't mind an OOC Lucius, as it can be no worse than i feel the OOC Severus in Rowlings HBP, i hate book 6 and to me it seems it was written by a completely different author!!!! This story is a great start, and i am now going to go check out the other chapters on the other sites.
[Report This]Date: 07/23/2005 12:35 am Title: Prologue
A very interesting start!!! Don't worry about the OOC Lucius, I love it when an author plays with the personality of the character we love. I look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2005 01:11 pm Title: Prologue
Good start, lets hear more. Please!
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2005 05:44 am Title: Prologue
HOLY $#@&!!! - That was an awesome start!!!! I am shock at the thought of a half broken, but maybe fixable Lucius. This is truly a great start and I can't wait for you to write more!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2005 06:32 pm Title: Prologue
its a good start mate, i hope u continue it.
[Report This]Date: 07/23/2005 12:58 pm Title: Prologue
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