I really like this story. It's very well written and I enjoy reading it. I don't know if this site has some sort of update alerts system, but if not, would you mind emailing me at spikeandtara_4ever@yahoo.com when you post the next chapter. I would be very greatful if you did. Thanks.
This story is simply brilliant. I notice it has been quite a while since you've updated. I really hope that you will be able to continue this at some time. I really want to know what happens! Good luck!
I love it! Can't wait until it is done.
Love it. I can't wait till the next chapter. Seeing Snape turned into a rabbit was a great touch in chapter one.
Strange as it is, especially considering I really don't care for politics, I'm enjoying your look into the Wizarding government. I can't wait to see how the encounter with Rabastan goes and if it helps them get Lucius.
Nice development. I love the wizard calendar. I wish I had something like that. Of course, I could definitely do without Kingsley's memos. No problem on the lack of Remus, sometimes different parts of the story need to be fleshed out.
Very nice start. I like the fact that Remus and Severus have been made to live together and I think you've done a good job showing the tension that would exist between them. Great job capturing Severus' bitterness.
I like the idea that Keely is now a werewolf and that's why she has to be there. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
it was lovely! keep up the good work! god i sound like a crazed teacher!!
took you bloody long enough!!! well keep updateing k.
Finally! I thought you'd take forever!
Yay! And I thought it was Rodolphus Lestrange. Just a note. ;)
-Mel
Author's Response: Sorry about taking so long, but now that I have a plot written down, I should be able to update more quickly.
Rabastan Lestrange is the brother of Rodolphus and brother-in-law to Bellatrix. The three of them were tried, along with Barty Crouch Jr., for the torture of Frank and Alice Longbottom.(GOF30) All though JK Rowling doesn't specifically name him as the fourth member of the group until OotP6.
lovely update soon
Beautiful! I love it. The rabbit and the shoe-sticking was a riot and I really like Keely. The Imperius threw me off. That was great! -Mel
I love the way the story is starting to develop. This is the best chapter yet. Please update!!
just peachy. update soon please.
I like this, and it seems like a very interresting story. Will be on the lookout for more updates. Snape as a rabbit! Too funny!
Everytime i think of Severus with his shoes glued to the floor, I want to giggle. I like this story and I am looking forward to more. Keely is a very interesting character and I think she will give them both a run for their money! Update soon.
I love the tension between them all. The rabbit bit was a riot. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I stumbled across this by chance and I found it very entertaining. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Lovely story so far. I'm anxiously awaiting more of it. :)
Simply amazing! I had not expected that twist at the end. The entire story was amusing and was not dull at all. (I am mentioning this because I have read stories that start out good, but go horribly wrong.) The nastiness of Snape was right on target. I could see him saying something like that. Note to Self: Make my future Snapes much more evil. I am certainly interested in reading more if there will be more. Danielle (betagirl23@yahoo.com)
Nice characterisation, so far. Locked in Grimmauld Place with two werewolves, poor Snape :) It seems that Dumbledore makes the mistake of imprisoning his man again. The rabbit sceene works as wonderful inroduction of OC, one that hopefully won't become Mary Sue. Good luck with the plotting.
Great beginning, can't wait to see more.
Ooh, good start. I'm intruigued and can't wait to hear more!