[Report This]Date: 07/08/2008 02:30 pm Title: Of Friendship, Nerves, and Ridiculous Imaginings
it's really good story.... update it soon :)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2007 02:44 pm Title: Of Friendship, Nerves, and Ridiculous Imaginings
This is a stunnungly well written fan fiction. You have real talent. The improbability of Draco at Grimauld place compelled me to read on. I kept thinking, "How's she gonna dig herself out of this whole?" But you did it, and splendidly too! Draco's reason for converting was very comvincing. The delicacy with which you have developed the DM/HG relationship is very touching and draws the reader in adeptly. You have a talent for plotting, for insight into character and for humor. You made me laugh out loud more than once. The secret passageway and the mirrored room at Grimauld Place were so perfect that, last night while reading OotP again, I keept waiting for some reference to the Mirror and the secret room. I had to force myself to remember that I'd read about them in a fan fiction. Keep writing!!! and PLEASE finish the story! Can Draco find peace without pulling a Barty Crouch Jr.? He has so much in common with HP now, how will he maintain his seperate, fictional, identity? Desperate fans, of YOUR work, want to know ;-) Thanks, P.S. (In reference to a line or two in one of your shorter peices.) Just a personal prefrence, but I prefer things as close to the "C" catagory as you can comfortably write them. You have sooo much talent that, like JKR, you might make a real contribution, if you can help your readers see, acknowledge, and perhaps understand, the difference between the darkness so that so permiates our culture and the light for which we long. Also, if you have a scalpel of a talent, such as yours, why try to drive it home with a sledge hammer. Best.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 02:52 pm Title: Will She Bleed Brown?
aw
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 02:40 pm Title: A Gryffindork and Brain Damaged
deep down draco is a pervert.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 01:42 pm Title: Comforting the Enemy
their relationship seems to be moving fast.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 11:42 am Title: Suspicions Arise
i can't exactly explain why but draco now reminds me of serena van derwoodson (sp?)...it must be his scent. i appreciate the fact that the head boy and girl don't share bathrooms. poor snape!
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 11:27 am Title: Hidden Information
i love the last part. the misspellings are a nice touch. :)
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 11:17 am Title: Blood Bonds
i hope hermione doesn't do anything stupid.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 10:45 am Title: What Kind of Life Have You Known
poor draco.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 10:09 am Title: You've Changed, Draco
stupid impulsive gryffindors. poor draco.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 12:25 am Title: An Interesting Start to Term
ginny is such a vixen.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 12:09 am Title: The Mirror Illusion
ron is such a loser.
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2007 11:53 pm Title: Dear Old Grimmauld Place
ooooooooooooooo. a secret passage way. very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2007 09:14 am Title: Dear Old Grimmauld Place
I hope that you keep updating, I would love to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 05:22 am Title: Of Friendship, Nerves, and Ridiculous Imaginings
02-05-2007 14:40 Rated 10
Great story really enjoying reading it. I normally only read SS/HG so this is proving to be a good change. Update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you were willing to read my story even if you don't usually read DM/HG.
I love SS/HG, too, but I'm not so good at writing it.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 05:21 am Title: Of Friendship, Nerves, and Ridiculous Imaginings
02-04-2007 03:44 Rated 10
Great story so far. I am really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 05:21 am Title: Will She Bleed Brown?
12-29-2006 19:11 Rated 10
This story has been great so far! I loved the Narnia line in the first chapter. It had me laughing hard for some time. I look forward to the next update!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 05:20 am Title: Will She Bleed Brown?
12-19-2006 19:59
Have him insult her in public or something so they will get off of his back...Make it something mean but make sure she knows about it..
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 05:20 am Title: A Gryffindork and Brain Damaged
11-11-2006 08:25 Rated 8
I love the dialogue between Hermione and Draco. It's cute because it shows their age and the akwardness that comes with it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2006 05:38 pm Title: A Gryffindork and Brain Damaged
cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2006 11:44 am Title: Comforting the Enemy
This is great...an original angle, and the progression is very believable! I didn't like what happened at the end of HBP, anyway. Keep up the good work, and you can email me about updates, if you want! :D
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2006 11:43 am Title: Comforting the Enemy
This is great...an original angle, and the progression is very believable! I didn't like what happened at the end of HBP, anyway. Keep up the good work, and you can email me about updates, if you want! :D
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2006 06:18 pm Title: Comforting the Enemy
i really love your story. please keep up the good writing. ^_-
[Report This]Date: 08/29/2006 06:46 pm Title: Comforting the Enemy
i love this fic plz update more and more
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2006 11:25 pm Title: Comforting the Enemy
I usually don't like Draco and Hermione stories, but this is very well written, and the characters seem believable. I hope to read more.