[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 03:29 pm Title: Passion Unleashed
Aw, come on! How can you just leave me hanging like that? Will be counting the minutes til the next chapter comes out. ^^;
Author's Response: Sorry but I thought I'd skip the sex scene a bit. Hope you won't kill me. There's at least some smut in the next chapter but not much. Anyway, it felt better to leave it to the reader's imagination.
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 02:49 am Title: Passion Unleashed
i definatly think thats the best chapter so far. l also think that poor ira is certainly beginning to lose it, hope raven gets her act together and does something soon! mmmmm! making lucius forget!
Author's Response: Thanks, zafania. Yes, making Lucius forget sounds like good fun to me. :-) But then, I'm weird...
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2005 12:39 pm Title: Raven's Secret
i am finding that of all the authors on these sights your stories are the ones that i enjoy the most, please write more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, Zeenzette. I just uploaded the next chapter. I hope it gets validated soon.
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2005 03:04 am Title: Raven's Secret
she's a bit brave! what if she manages to become a raven and can't figure out how to turn back? mr Malfoy might lock her in a cage with blackjack, and then blackjack might get a bit randy-and you know what it's like in prison! or does she fancy balck jack? ok, i'm going to go and take my medication now! oooh look! that nice man has brought me a lovely new white coat that fastens at the back, isn't that sweet?
Author's Response: I know the feeling *g*. Talking of ravens, my cat (called Raven) is sitting on my lap with her head on my left arm, so I can hardly type here... But you are right, Corvinia is of the brave kind.
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2005 08:48 am Title: Tender Poison
that girls confused. i know the feeling, poor thing. lucius is still a git
Author's Response: He is a git, that's why she's confused. :-) We love gits, don't we?
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2005 08:50 pm Title: Tender Poison
yet another spanktacular chappie. i cant get enuff.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, lost soul. Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2005 03:06 am Title: In the Dark
nice panic attack )well not nice for the poor lass, but nicely written. you do speak gibberish don't you? you can understandme even when i don't meke sense?) mind you, maybe i'm pyshcic, but i think i've figured out who the bloke in the chair is - just call me sybil trewlawney(except i don't own quite that many shawls!) next chapter! by the way that was an order, not a request!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Sybil for your patience. *lol* And for your review of course. The bloke in the chair is Father Christmas who came in through the chimney. And you knew that?? *g*
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2005 12:32 am Title: In the Dark
oh what a cliff hanger!..this is absolutely delicious. i can't wait to see what happens next. *grabs a bowl of popcorn eagerly awaiting for the next chapter*
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I hope I'll be able to post the next chapter sooner than this one.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2005 03:30 pm Title: Time to say goodbye
I just saw that one coming. It was a little predictable, but nontheless, Lucius' reaction left me surprised.
Author's Response: Yes, I know it was predictable, but then again... it's very Lucius. ;-) And men always are predictable. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2005 12:10 am Title: Time to say goodbye
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. that was great. i was just waiting for draco to show up. can't really blame the girl, how could anyone resist lucius? i know he's evil... but.. anyway. lovely story. i liked how lucius had her fooled.
Author's Response: Evil and mean...that's how we like them...well, me at least. Can't help it, I'm just a little bit twisted. :-) Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2005 04:15 pm Title: Time to say goodbye
eeh! that lucius is a little tinker, isn't he? or a manipulative bastard, l suppose it depends on how you look at it.
Author's Response: Yes, but we love him that way, don't we? ;-) Evil gits, here we come...
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2005 01:56 am Title: Time to say goodbye
that bastard! i thought it was odd that he would let her go...and now i know why. poor draco...
you have to update soon, i'm completely addicted to this story =)
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'll do my very best.
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2005 10:40 pm Title: Time to say goodbye
wow,i loved it. i cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I hope that I will have another chapter ready for upload soon, I'm a bit busy right now, please be patient. :-)
[Report This]Date: 05/02/2005 10:12 pm Title: Under Suspicion
Figured I'd review since I've been reading this for a while now. I know it's stupid not to give your opinion. Anyways, you're an amazing writer and your description is brilliant. It's nice to find some decent Draco fic writers. Keep it up! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm glad you like my version of Draco, I was a bit nervous about him when I first decided to make him the "good guy"...
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2005 04:41 am Title: Under Suspicion
I have read all these chapters in one sitting and i must say 'YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!" this is the most gripping story I have ever read and I equal it to Chthonia's "Invictus" and Cassandra Claire's "Draco Trilogy". I have never ever reviewed like this nor have I found another story good enough to equal the ones listed above. If you have read those fics, then you should realize that I have given you top top top top top top top praise, Snapeaddict! Brilliant, breathtaking, and supurb! You have managed to take an OFC and make her very believable. She's not a 'hero' or a MarySue in any way. She has angst and trials which are very hard to overcome. I don't think you have put Draco out of canon at all, and your usage of Lucius is very believable. I'm very eager to see where you go with this because it could go so many different ways. Thank you so far for a most outstanding story. I await more chapters! Bravo once again! Cerridwen
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm very flattered. I hope the coming chapters won't disappoint you. I haven't read "Invictus" or the "Draco Trilogy" but it sounds as if I should... :-)
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2005 10:36 pm Title: Under Suspicion
Awsome chapter...how could he not forgive her if she was forced? That wouldnt be her fault...please add more soon!!!!
Author's Response: It's a guy thing...pride. :-) Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2005 08:30 am Title: Under Suspicion
loved the idea of stonehenge as a wizard museum!
Author's Response: I'd really like to see the place for that matter...Wizard Stonehenge, I mean. I've seen Muggle Stonehenge. :-)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2005 09:57 pm Title: Celestial Delights
i luved it! i luved it! i luved it!
i wonder what would happen if Draco ever found out about all her doings? hmm
i luved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, lost soul. I have a lingering suspicion that Draco would freak completely...
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2005 01:11 pm Title: Celestial Delights
i liked somnabulistic insouciance, but i'm not sure i could say that after a bit of lucius waccy baccy. poor celeste, nothing sadder than a cast off courtesan, and nothing more jealous it seems than one who fears she is soon to be cst side, is she a camille? or is she going to cause trouble?
Author's Response: I think I couldn't even say it without...*slur* Celeste won't cause trouble, the poor woman. Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2005 01:04 pm Title: Nocturnal Visitors
Oh dear! poor ira, probably just as well she switched off that pesky brain. i do that too, unfortunatly i've also forgotten how to turn it back on again. i winder if ira could give me a few tips?
Author's Response: I'll ask her as I'm not really an expert in switching my brain back on either....
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2005 03:15 pm Title: Celestial Delights
so...i like women... "bats her lashes cutely"
Author's Response: Then you'll like the next chapter, I hope.
Author's Response: Oops, I didn't see that the chapter was already posted and your review referred to it. Never mind...stupid me! :-)
Author's Response: Again stupid me...I'm puzzled...it says 13 chapters and then it said this review referred to chapter 14... am I going potty?
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2005 11:05 pm Title: Nocturnal Visitors
eh...nice come back...you are redeemed but still have to go to my room.... ^-^...youll get sick of my reviews eventually...but hey...someone has to give you undieing love... *..she smiles shily as she kneels before him her silver hair flowing in streaks as her thighs close with a kis...her back stright ankles crossed and her head high...her eyes lowered to his boots ...she purrs as her body falls forward and lets out a soft whimper as the cold tile touches against her flesh...making it burn as she out streaches her hands them inches from his boots to command her at His will...* Yes SnapeAddict...i am your slave control me with more of the story...
*evil grin*
Author's Response: *lol* I'm doing my best, BrokenAngel. But I'm a "she"... :-) So probably you would not want me to go to your room.
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2005 10:55 pm Title: Thorne and Caine's
....dies....
......why...would a man...no matter what the girl have done put on a collar...that would then hurt her....broken property is of no use to the owner...you loose 10 house points and are to be sent to my room for being bad... and you go down in rating...*humph...*
Author's Response: I don't know...there are a lot of men who would hurt the woman they consider their property. It's a bit of "If I can't have you, no one should". And the collar does not really harm her, it just feels as if you suffocate...anyway. Sorry, if you didn't like the chapter and the idea.
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2005 10:43 pm Title: Ira's Plan
i know im a pain in the ass...but you have to love me...i give good ratings...because im to lazy to change them but..good work...eh...who knows..maybe you can come to my fantasy world one day and see how i make draco play....
Author's Response: Sounds good. :-) Thanks for your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2005 10:19 pm Title: Master of the Night
eh...amusing a bit...well not really....to dark and evil...and draco wouldnt be that ...well dumb...men are stupid...no offense but t hey can normally sence a little of whats wrong...
Author's Response: He can and he does grow suspicious, it'll eventually surface, too. In a later chapter, that is...