OMG!!!!!!!!!! so i'm not done with this pirate chapter yet but I must say it is hysterical!!! I fully appreciate the reference to the Dread Pirate Roberts from Princess Bride and haveing Harry talk to you was brilliant. I absofuckinglutely love it!!!!<3 keep up the good work ;) lolz
are you going to write any further?
love it!! reads just like it was written by JK rowling (spelled right?) herself
Yes! My favorite gay aurorers back on the scene and fucking to get out of trouble... Good chap, can't wait to see more, as always. Keep it up!
Wohoo! H/D and a Kurosawa Fest--some of my favorite things! Luv it!
Amazing, I love your work! Please, please, PLEASE update soon!! I could not stop reading this story till I finished to the point you have gotten to, Even though I was ready to pass out because of how tired I am lol. GOOD JOB!! Can't wait to see more of your great work!
This is a really great story, filled with actual ADULT problems, like Ron's marriage, Harry and Draco... This may be hard-hearted of me, but is there any way that you could have Hermione's husband and kid murdered/killed? Ugh, I sound so evil when I put it like that, but I can't stand Hermione not being with Ron or knowing she's a witch! Just get rid of the family, return her memory, and they live happily ever after! Sorry if I offended you with my cruel rant. Please update soon!
loved the entire series and can not wait to read the next one i hope that you got coming out great writing
I really really like the way you write, awesome stuff.
God, I'm tired. I've just finished these chapters, having wanted to, but never, read them before. They are deliciously long and lascivious and excellent to boot. Great job, I can't wait to see how those two get out of this newest mess. Will it involve screwing at some point, as almost everything else has?
o my you have out done yourself, did harry or did he not say it in parseltongue= i wonder...
is it 'not done' to review or something or am i the only person reading this? anyway loved the chapter, still don't see what draco's feelings are only that he is unsure about how harry feels about him and i see the parody thing now
Author's Response: Oh, I think that some people sort of vanished after the archives went down for a while, I imagine they'll skitter back-- I hope so anyway! I have it on other archives, though :)
ok you don't dislike ron or hermione just the two of them together (lol no j/k) anyway braces rule, and sleeping beaty hex your imagination is really one of a kind (monkey sex now where have i heard that before?)
Author's Response: haha *shifty* I like tragic lovestories? :)
poor harry and he isn't getting some he's getting all! also poor draco but i do hope this duke is kicked to the curb
Author's Response: haha he does get all ;)
i read this 'way back' with the other chapter (save for the new ones which i am very grateful for) and i really like this chapter as harry and draco sort of kind of maybe admit that they at least feel something when they do the dirty together (lol that sounds funny)
Author's Response: They're slowly getting to it! :)
lol random sex situations, but i have to give it to you you are very creative and getting even more so with every chapter, o and the whole ron hermione thing i still don't understand it entirely but i at least see know that the children really are eh..not ron's so he has a right sort of...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Poor Ron. Yes, well, things are not what they seem!
so your telling me he's laughing, hysterically while looking at a door just closed in his face? and you don't sound too keen on ron OR hermione or maybe that's just me
Author's Response: Oh, I love Ron and Hermione. A lot of Gay Aurors is about sporking some of the fandom cliches. But really here there is more than meets the eye :)
i don't know if a review for each chapter makes you happy but i'll do it anyway. Right your excuses for making them have sex are really creative, funny too sometimes (so far) i'm very curious to see what will become of 'the duke' by the way your plot is really good too (or did i already say that)
Author's Response: It does make me happy :) So thank you!
I must admit eventhough this is in the pureblood archive (in favour of the weasley's) i do think you took a risk here with making ron a cheating b*st*rd (did i type that?) i meant man cheating man (yea that's it hmm let me censor that)anyway, hmm the whole virgin thing farfetched, but i liked it (never read it before at least) and i like humble harry and overpowerful(at least a bit over harry)draco
Author's Response: haha Ron is a scamp here. I think he's a lovable scamp and there's reason for it. :)
If Draco was so powerful? Why didn't he within your story vanquish Voldemort????
Why would a department within the wizarding world accept Draco Malfoy over Harry Potter???
I cannot keep reading, your story does not add up, in my opinion.
If Malfoy was that strong in his magic, why didn't he defeat the Voldie himself???
Author's Response: Because the prophecy didn't specify Draco would kill Voldemort and because he's only this powerful after the 3 years of training, perhaps? And it's not necessarily that Draco is more powerful, but has received different training than Harry. And they didn't accept Draco over Harry, they paired Harry with Draco because they were pretty sure that Harry was enough of a match for Draco to contain him/keep an eye on him. If you do decide to continue reading this story, which you are under no obligation to do, you might refresh your memory of which side Draco was on by the end of HBP. He wasn't exactly gunning for Voldemort, yeah?
just a small review to say how much I am enjoying this story - like I have enjoyed all your stories...
I like how there's a mystery to solve and yet it is light and entertaining. Sometimes a bit like those cheap american horror movies I used to watch late at night, sometimes like a cheap cop film I used to watch earlier the same night. I love the little in jokes. Your Hermione is definately a Hermione-Sue gone wrong! And your Draco at points reminds me of a character Steven Seagal might play in the aforementioned cop movies.
Great work. I am looking forward to the next installement, like I always do with your stories
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I wanted it to be sort of cheesey at time, but entertaining. I wanted it serialized so I could just take each episode in whatever mood I want to write in at the moment.
Your chapters are improving in your attempt at story telling. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thanks :)
This is fabulous! I love Myrtle. And I loved Harry's jealousy. Please update again soon.
Author's Response: As soon as I can! Thanks for reading!
...! *speechless* Wow--this is going somewhere serious, yeah? Keep it up; I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Serious, but still cracky, of course! :D
The ending was very sad. Draco's tears almost brought me to tears. All he wants is to be accepted, but all he gets is suspicion. Draco gave up something that was very important to him just so people would not think he was a failure. Now Harry cocked it up, and people are more suspicious of Draco than ever. It makes me want to shake everyone and scream to look at the poor guy, and give him a fair chance. Thank you for sharing. I hope that you do continue this. It would be a waste of a good plot line to leave it here. Thanks again.
Author's Response: It will definitely be continued, thanks for reading!