That was so awkward and strange and so fucking sad. I can't say it enough but you are wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
The best compliment I could give you for your writting story telling skills and is that I would actually pay to read them!!! Don't get any ideas as I am always broke lol!
Another excellent chapter, I hope the rest is not to long in coming.
Author's Response: wow, thank you!! haha I'm broke too ;) Shouldn't be too much longer, I'm hoping by Jan it should be totally wrapped up ;)
Distressing indeed. And too bad Harry as a horcrux was totally what I was thinking after I finished book six. Yay for mind twins.
Author's Response: Yep, pretty sad :(
Noooooooooooo! Harry's just got to live! Of course, now that Draco thinks that harry's death is a certainty, he might actually remove the pajama bottoms.
Author's Response: haha that would be the up side to dying ;)
omg! that's crazy! dm needs to say something to hp about how he really feels. can't wait for more. this is soooo good.
Author's Response: Draco seems to be more about action than words, but he really should say something!
Ah, I fellow believer in Harry being the final Horcrux! I too have written such in a much different manner, mind you. Well done indeed. I thought too that Harry has way too much MoldieButt's abilities not to have a bit of his soul in him. At least that's my opinion.
Dianara
Author's Response: Yes! Well Dumbledore does say that voldemort transferred some of his abilities to Harry so it makes sense to me, although who knows if that will be how it pans out. Poor bunny *pets him* I did try to hint at it a bit in the fire scene, too. Only Harry got those snakes moving ;)
I love the story, I am waiting in eager anticipation for more... will it be long?
Author's Response: I just got the next chapter back from beta so maybe a couple of days for me to finish editing and then a day or so to get approved here ;)
A well written story and one of the best post HBP fics I've seen. Write more??
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter's in beta ;)
interesting story so far. i really hope that you write even more stories to entertain me
Author's Response: I'm sure I will ;)
ur evil to end it there! can't wait for more. love this.
Author's Response: I really am evil ;)
Ooooh! Please let Harry contact Sirius, or at the cvery least find the other mirror. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: We'll see!! :D
This is getting very twisty and delicious. Excellent work.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and consistent reviews!
Another wonderful chapter. I like seeing the slow development between Harry and Draco, and how Draco's expertise as a member of a family such as the Malfoy can come in extra handy. I also like the fact that Snape keeps getting every ploy handed back to him like a dunderhead. Then again, Severus Snape also has very translucent tendancies even if his words belie his true purpose.
Dianara
Author's Response: It did come in pretty handy to have such a petty knowledge of bloodlines ;) Snape's a brilliant potions maker, but he's not so clear on interpersonal stuff ;)
I adore all of your posted fics. This one, though a w.i.p., is no exception. I'm anxiously awaiting the coupling of Harry and Draco. You write their intimate moments like nobody's business. I look forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: thanks so much! I do really love writing those soft, sweet moments :)
lol. too funny! glad nm's okay.
Author's Response: Thanks! She is, much to Draco's relief too!
just a small review to let you know that i am quite enjoying your story and take on what happens in 7th year. (as if we'd ever be so lucky for something remotely similar to happen.) you are leaving a lovely lot of loose ends on the way and i am looking forward to seeing them resolved (the backstory to lolly, narcissa and james etc). i'm a bit put off that you made snape such a bastard but it does work for your story. your characterisations are very believable (good work!), with the possible exception of draco who seems just a bit too vulnerable. and finally i really like the way you write, sweet and simple and with a sense of humour.
keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, not everyone enjoys my characterisation of Snape, but it works for me. I guess I have a love of real bastards, so to me, it's kind of a compliment to Snape. He's one of my favourite characters and I tend to write him/see him as an archetypal Slytherin. Although do bear in mind you're seeing him from Harry's perspective here, and Harry's not fond of him ;) I suppose after book 6, I do see Draco as more vulnerable. I always did to an extent because each time he was confronted, Draco would totally fold at being overpowered. As Myrtle would say, "He's sensitive!" :)
Nicely done. I feel like a squeeing fangirl because I never have anything bad/constructive to say. I suppose at least I'm not typin lyke dis. In any case, brava.
Author's Response: Thank you! Saying bad things is overrated ;) I don't mind it, everyone's entitled to their opinion, but I have to admit that compliments do make me beam and thanks for following it! I'm generally pretty excited anyone's reading at all ;)
Oh Boy, things are really heating up now. It is my opinion that our well-meaning Harry is thinking with the wrong head.
Excelent Chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Harry really does mean well... :)
oh boy! they better go str8 to malfoy manor to get nm or else.
Author's Response: Someone had better!
Oh Harry -- what an idiot. Still...the heart wants, and all that. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, he really shouldn't have, but... love ;)
so good! can't wait for more~
Author's Response: Thank you!
Poor Harry! Heartbreak sucks! I hope Draco comes around to Harry's way of thinking!! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I do hope they get it together soon!
Another excellent chapter. A small amend to a previous statement: gay boys being angsty and coy are my new favorite things.
Author's Response: Excellent! There's more of the angsty coyness to come, I'm sure ;)
I think you have a great story going on here! I really like your version of Snape! I hope that is they way it will turn out in the book. I hate to think of him really being evil! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! He's not quite evil but not quite good. He has his own motives ;)
Nice chapter. The progression of Harry's gayness is working well, and I love Draco -- and his Lolly. I also like how you are working in the Horcruxes. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hahaha Lolly is umm... well kind of goofy, but symbolic, too ;)