[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
o and the part of the broken heart was so sad, but necssary
Author's Response: :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow you realy are good and ginny's part doesn't even feel cramped in here like a: o right the ex-girlfriend thing. nope just really good
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
he he draco dressing up for harry? Priceless, really :) a ten for smiles
Author's Response: Thank you :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
this began starting a bit as change my world (which i reviewd completely on ff.net at least i hope so) but since they stopped at that...but the jealousy is so cute on harry , i really like your writing style!
Author's Response: Sadly, ff.net took the story down :( But I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
where do you get your inspiration from? this was really funny, not to ention pretty plausible...Draco and Harry so sweet together
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not really sure where stories come from :) I just like making things up.
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2006 10:10 am Title: Chapter 13
It's me again. You just knock me out. Are you making a living from your writing yet? I dearly hope so. Carry on. Thank you for hours of great entertainment.
Author's Response: Haha alas, I am not. Although I haven't submitted anything anywhere, so that will always slow you down :D
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2006 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2006 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This chapter was okay but it did not have alot of detail and it was not very exciting. Sry about the bead review, can not wait for cahpter 2!
Author's Response: They should all be up ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2006 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
awww i loved this story. so sad its the end though. i'm surprised that you don't have that many review. this is the best story i've read in a long, long time. the characterizations were written perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, this story didn't get loads of attention when it came out, but it's up for a couple of awards, so maybe it'll gain some steam ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2006 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1
this story is hilarious. i'm glad you made it HBP compliant, you can't find too many of these lately that are longer than 5 chapters and are slash
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know, it's weird, isn't it? It's like HBP was rife with so many possibilities for h/d that maybe people lost the faith?
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2006 10:48 am Title: Chapter 13
This was the last chapter, wasn’t it? Such an amazingly sweet ending! I really, really loved it. So much that I’m at loss for words. Narcissa was something else. Remus sticking up for Snape made me wonder. Draco was really cool, as usual. And I just adore confused typical teenager Harry and hilariously awkward and true sex scenes. Especially Harry’s performance anxiety!
Author's Response: Alas, that's the end of it. :) I'm glad you liked it! I was trying to work in some subtle Snape/Lupin, with Snape's Patronus and Lupin defending him, but as Harry would've freaked out with that knowledge solidified at this point, I didn't want to be too overt. Confused teen sex scenes are so fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed them!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2006 10:26 am Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful. Beautiful. Thank You for sharing this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2006 10:38 am Title: Chapter 13
The beginning of this chapter made me feel wicked hot, and the end made me feel all warm and fuzzy. This was fantastic, and you should win a prize for it. Excellent excellent excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you! When they finally got to the sex, there was a lot of it ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 10:41 am Title: Chapter 12
It's absolutely amazing! One of the best fan fics I've read by a landslide. The Lupin thing was a pure stroke of genius, but Fred and George? I never would have thought of it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Just one more chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love this story!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
This was an excellent chapter. Well worth the wait. I especially loved the "sex talk" between Harry and Lupin. Bringing Fred, George and Molly into the conversation was a stroke of genius!
Author's Response: I was amused with the idea of Remus being a little prude about discussing that, especially after his little meltdown at the end of HBP when Tonks was bringing their relationship into the open ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2006 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
I just love the way that they talk to one another during sex stuff; it's just adorable and precious. I'm very glad that things worked out. I'm assuming there is more, so hopefully another chapter will be here soon.
Author's Response: I talk a lot during sex, I guess they got that from me :) But they're also trying to figure it out, it's fun. They've had such bigger concerns up till now, that they have much to sort out ;) The next chapter is the last.
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2006 06:11 am Title: Chapter 12
I love this story! Don't ever stop! J/K But it really is great and I like the stories that you have written so far! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Alas, the next is the last chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01/04/2006 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant chapter. But you've left me hanging on Draco's condition! Seriously, excellent chapter, well-done, I love all the awkwardness between them, and the love, and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Soon! Glad you enjoyed it ;) Draco's fine, just fussy... as usual ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2006 07:45 am Title: Chapter 11
poor hp! poor lolly! it was sooo cute!
Author's Response: Yes, poor Lolly indeed!
[Report This]Date: 12/29/2005 05:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Ok guess what?
I order you to finish this!
Haha, your writing (as per usual) is absoulutly AMAZING!
I truely wish I had talent like you do, don't ever stop writing <3
Is there some sort of list I can get onto for when you update this story for it to be forwarded to my e-mail?
=3
Loving ittttt <3
Author's Response: I think maybe if you favourite this story on this system it emails you, although... I'm not sure about that. Otherwise I update on my LJ at charlotteschaos. ffnet does, but I have to edit those chapters down for content. I'd make a Yahoo group, but I know how I am and I would forget ;) The next chapter is done, I just need to edit it. I' halfway through the next, so it is not abandoned, I'm just having a tough time getting time to sit down with it ;)
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2005 10:11 am Title: Chapter 10
I’m so glad you’re back again. I really like this story and was sorely missing it. You had me looking for Draco in maid’s uniform on the net!
Draco and Lolly is so precious. Really makes you think the boy is someway broken and delicate (which I guess he is). And Harry’s thought processes ring so real.
Congratulations! That was one of the most realistic descriptions of a first blow job I have read in a long time! People do not necessarily take to it like a duck to water. It is intimating and awkward at first. And the small disagreement about who gets one was funny and rung so true. And slytherin!Harry in bed can only make one smile...I thoroughly condone Harry getting what he wants (or at least trying to). In general, what a great sex scene! Harry thinking someone was coming down the hall just cracked me up! And the sadist in me enjoys botched sex scenes...
Author's Response: Alas, the holidays have sort of left me short on time to finish this up, but yes, Harry is the Horcrux. :( Harry was almost sorted into Slytherin, there has to be some reason for that. Besides, I think we're all a little selfish in bed ;) I did have a bit of fun with the blowjobs. I was worried everyone was going to be upset by the awkwardness, but it made me giggle ;) Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2005 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
Another good installment... can't wait to read the rest :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
I lauged until I cried while I was reading the bedroom scene. Then, I came to the end and I got sad. I've got my fingers crossed that Draco went to visit his Mom.
Author's Response: Hahah excellent! I was so worried that people were going to be like, "...that wasn't sexy OR funny." You're the first person to Draco visiting his mum ;) It seems like a natural place for him to go, doesn't it? :D
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 08:33 am Title: Chapter 10
oooooookay. that was interesting. started great. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: hehe Interesting, huh? :D