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Reviewer: susumiya08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2015 04:40 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

ohh sneaky snape granger there!!! I hope he changes his mind soon, after all, muggles aren't all that bad

Reviewer: Bella99 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2012 03:52 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Well done.

Reviewer: journeymom Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 08:06 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Aaah. I see the misunderstanding. In my first review I misspelled Lucius, "Lucious-oriented story", in January. My second note, two minutes later, I was castigating myself, "LuciUs, LuciUs". And I enjoyed this second read-through just as much as the first time.

Reviewer: tabitha Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2006 05:34 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Dear writer, I LOVED this story. Please develop it further. It would be a real shame if the fans of pureblood didn't read a story where we find Lucius slowing coming around. That would be a very interest read. Any chance of it?

Reviewer: Chartreuse Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 08:44 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

This was very nice. Like the twist at the end (well we knew it was coming but it was nice anyway) I almost felt sorry for him!

Reviewer: Applekissis Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 06:50 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Wow..that was really good...It had me fooled though...lol

Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't see it coming; I strive to be somewhat original at least ;-) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: journeymom Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 12:59 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

It's LuciUs, LuciUs. Looking for the crack in the earth to open up and swallow me whole.

Author's Response: I'm afraid I don't understand what you are trying to say with your review. Do you think Lucius is OOC? Did I spell his name wrong occasionally? If you have constructive criticism, feel free to explain.

Reviewer: journeymom Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 12:57 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

I love it! This is the first Lucious-oriented story I've read. You portray his wonderful, snobby attitude well.

Author's Response: thank you so much. I did my best to try and reason what Lucius would think and do in certain situations, but it is always nice to hear it comes across. Thank you.

Reviewer: RachelW Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2005 11:23 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

I enjoyed the read, and somehow found myself craving a cup of hot tea and getting sleepy along with Lucius, and I'm not sure how that really came about; but now I'm wondering what conditioning they were talking about there too. Hmmm... will read again and see if I might've missed it this read. Good writing. :-)

Author's Response: Hahaha, I didn't know professor Snape's potion was THAT strong! I should have known I guess... Clues about what Snape and Hermione were trying to do can be found in their conversation at the end; especially Snape's remarks should help you along. thank you for a lovely, lovely review!

Reviewer: sophie Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 12:51 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Oh, do continue this please! It's really good!

Author's Response: Well...it is a one-shot and I have a WIP HG/LM on FFN. But thank you for the nice compliment!

Reviewer: Lyndie578 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 09:02 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Cool. I love the plot twists! Thanks for the post!

Author's Response: Thank YOU for the review! It's very nice to hear people like the story..as I said in the AN, it was just one of that bunnies that refuses to go away (smile).

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 01:55 pm Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

Oh please tell me you are going to continue this! There is so much potential!!!

Author's Response: This was originally meant as a one-shot and for now it will remain that. I have a large HG/LM story on FFN I want to finish first. But..I'll confess that since posting this story here i have been toying with ideas what the next chapter would be like... Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: tei hakuto Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 01:38 am Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

This is a nice twist! I hope that this gets developed further, despite this being a one shot. A ha-ha on Lucius too! Thinking he couldn't get attracted to a "mere" muggle :-P

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the twist so much, couldn't really say where I got the idea , haha. But I rather like the idea of Hermione showing Lucius how wrong he is about Muggles. thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Bambu Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2005 10:07 am Title: Lucius and a...Muggle?

I've read this before, loved it then, and loved it now. It's a wonderful case of clever 'poisoning' and conditioning. Following Lucius' thought patterns from dispassionately lethal to benevolent nostalgia was fascinating.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! It was just one of that plot bunnies that wouldn't leave me alone until I had written it all out...despite my being uncertain it could work. Thank you for putting my mind at ease; coming from an accomplished author like yourself, it means the world to me.

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