[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: It's a Date!
02-13-2007 11:26
Wow! Jynx, you make me blush! Thank very much to you! You know how much I love this story. Perhaps I helped, but YOU were the mind behind the words. Un abbraccio stritolante (a bone crushing hug) from Italy. mep
Author's Response: Ack! I thought I had replied to this! My apologies. You did a lot to help this chapter. You're the one who has encouraged me to continue! Un abbraccio stritolante to my muse. Thanks again, mep.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: It's a Date!
02-12-2007 18:57 Rated 8
I like the second chapter and third really well. A nice reflection of how Remus and Tonks hook up. I still don't figure how chapter 1 fits in though.
Narine
Author's Response: Narine, I hope that you will go back and try chapter one again. For the fourth time, something has happened to that chapter. I've had to replace it multiple times. I have no idea what is going on. Neville's Waltz! How did it get there??? Please, if it is the wrong chapter, let me know.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: It's a Date!
02-12-2007 18:52
That's a story I wouldn't have expected to be updated anymore! What a nice surprise. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Fionnait. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I ran into serious writer's block with the story, well, with every story, actually, but I'm through it and writing quite a bit. I already have another chapter ready for this. I hope you will enjoy it as well!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Coming to Terms
08-28-2006 21:04 Rated 10
Prachtig ! like we would say in Holland ;)
It realy is a wonderful story !!
Author's Response: Dank u! (I hope that was right!) I'm glad you like the story. I hope to have another chapter ready sometime soon. I appreciate your review very much!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Coming to Terms
08-22-2006 04:27 Rated 10
Hey, just read this new addition. The first-person is much easier to understand now (I think it's just because Remus is only with one other person each time here). But when are they going to abandon Grimmauld Place?
Author's Response: I'm glad this chapter was easier for you to read. They will be abandoning Grimmauld soon. Give it time. :) Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Loss
02-12-2007 18:55 Rated 8
This is a nice little story all by it's self. But I am afraid I don't see the connection to the summary and I t doesn't have either Remus or Tonks at all?
Narine
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Loss
08-16-2006 07:54 Rated 8
I read your cry for help on Sycophant Hex forums and rushed right over =0). Sorry I didn't come sooner. I can say that I normally don't enjoy first person point of view fics (at least longer than a few hundred words), but this was very well composed. It gets a little confusing at times, but I honestly just think that's because of the point of view (and the fact that it's nearly 2 in the morning). I love the passion and honesty, and look forward to future chapters (hopefully that 2nd one will be up soon).
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! Wow, you got here before it reached 100 views! Yes, first person can be a bit confusing at first. Heck, it's confusing to write sometimes. I appreciate that you took the time to review and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. That's about what I'm most worried. I've never written Remus/Tonks before. Thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: 10/08/2006 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Loss
When does the story contintue ? (sorry i'm that dutch girl my english didn't improve much =) )
[Report This]Date: 10/08/2006 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Loss
When does the story contintue ? (sorry i'm that dutch girl my english didn't improve much =) )
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2006 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 2: Coming to Terms
Prachtig ! like we would say in Holland ;)
It realy is a wonderful story !!
Author's Response: Dank u! (I hope that was right!) I'm glad you like the story. I hope to have another chapter ready sometime soon. I appreciate your review very much!
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2006 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 2: Coming to Terms
Hey, just read this new addition. The first-person is much easier to understand now (I think it's just because Remus is only with one other person each time here). But when are they going to abandon Grimmauld Place?
Author's Response: I'm glad this chapter was easier for you to read. They will be abandoning Grimmauld soon. Give it time. :) Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2006 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1: The Loss
I read your cry for help on Sycophant Hex forums and rushed right over =0). Sorry I didn't come sooner. I can say that I normally don't enjoy first person point of view fics (at least longer than a few hundred words), but this was very well composed. It gets a little confusing at times, but I honestly just think that's because of the point of view (and the fact that it's nearly 2 in the morning). I love the passion and honesty, and look forward to future chapters (hopefully that 2nd one will be up soon).
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! Wow, you got here before it reached 100 views! Yes, first person can be a bit confusing at first. Heck, it's confusing to write sometimes. I appreciate that you took the time to review and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. That's about what I'm most worried. I've never written Remus/Tonks before. Thanks again!!