What a wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.
Another stellar chapter
Wow!! Awesome chapter!
beautiful story
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Excellent story, wouldn't mind a few more chapters though!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I won't be writing any more chapters. Sorry! :( I'm glad you liked it though.
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Author's Response: Thanx. Sorry no. It's complete.
This story gave me such an incredible war of emotions!
The first chapter left me screaming for Hermione and Draco. You did an excellent job at making the reader see Harry as the beast that Malfory saw him as. I knew something more was to be explained with the Snape situation, but I felt compelled, like Draco, to believe the worst in Harry.
The second story was just as sad! I saw Harry's pain, his love for Hermione, and his selfishness to be with Snape and not want the anitdote to be completed.
You could have gone so many different ways with this story. It would have made a perfect not-so-happy ending, but I admit I was overjoyed that Draco and Hermione could be together. The anticipation of Draco meeting his child for the first time made me work up a sweat!
I tend to shy away from DM/HG stories but this was wonderful. You are a brilliant writer!
-Battle of Lissa
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much. I appreciate the feedback. I am usually such a sucker for tying things up, especially way back when I wrote this. Glad you liked it.
A fitting ending to... yup, basically the only songfic I've actually liked. And I've liked this one a lot, though the whole H/S thing kinda squicks me out. I think H/D are lovely, btw. :)Great job!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you liked it. I never did write any other H/S before this, so I wasn't sure about it. I've since got into them, though, and am working on a Snarry. Snerk. :)
I do so love your stories. Happy endings are so lovely. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I appreciate that.
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
Author's Response: ~grin~
it was ok
but i prefered the 1st chapter!!
Author's Response: Yep, the first chapter was planned while the second and third came to me after. :)
wow that was realy touching
luvd it!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
What a twist! Good story, liked how it turned out! AWESOME writting...looking forward to more of your stories!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading. :)
What a tangled web you weave my dear. I enjoyed this break from canon and the usual fan fiction. I also joined your yahoo group as well. Seems like you are every where. Which is a good thing!
Author's Response: I'm part spider. LOL Just kidding. Welcome to the yahoo!Group (bwahahaha, I'm only over a year late, eh? sorry about that). Thanks for reading, mate.
i really liked your story it was really nice and i love the ending.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm all for happy endings.
Definite twists and turns. The different POV's proved extremely interesting. Amazing how one man's truth is another man's lie. Then again Southern, I've been amazed at that since I started reading any of your fanfictions.
Dianara of the
Darkraven Haven
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your comments. I always feel different things when reading each one. In the first one, I don't like Harry much, yet in the second one, I feel sorry for him. LOL I adore him in the third.
This is brill... well done!
Author's Response: thanks so much!
really lovely all the complexities of love in one bundle with a happy ending. three cheers for you
Author's Response: thanks! I am happy you liked it.
SAD STORY?! I loved it. I've never read a sweet story in my live, well, the last chapter. I loved how Lucius cared for his grandson and daughter-in-law. I hope u right more stories like this, only hermione and draco or it could be lucius. I love either Lucius or Draco with hermione. This story was the BOOM. *GRINS*
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on editing another Hermione and Draco story right now. I'll be posting it soon.
wow...this is an amazing piece of work...i should suggest to you if you already haven't, to post your story up on another fanfiction site at www.fanfiction.net! this story is so touching and beautiful...it's a wonder how you've thought of this plot! i'm sure if you post your story there, you'll be very successful and there would be MANY MANY reviewers! i am looking forward to reading more of your stories there! (please tell me if you have created an account there just so i can check your stories from time to time!) VERY VERY NICELY DONE!
Author's Response: I may try it there. Thanks for your support. i'm glad you liked it. Most of my stuff is at Ashwinder.
Alright, the only problem I have with this story is the last chapter..Too many time frames..well, what I'm trying to say is that you need to seperate time frames with something...example. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
And, where Draco says that she could take the position of potions? Later on you said that he'd take that position and she'd be an apprentice to Madame Pince. You need to fix that, too. I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work. You did a great job.
Author's Response: Yes, she was going to take the potions position, but he ended up taking it instead when she decided to replace Madame Pince. That way they could both be at Hogwarts with their kids. This story was one of my earlier ones, and as I read over it now, it shows. LOL... I may revise it and put them all as one at some point. Thank you.
Enjoyed? Yes, I certainly did. Thank you for the happy ending!
Author's Response: thanks, doll. glad you liked it
There was an explanation. Not that it made things better, though; now my heart is aching for all four of them.
Good dialogue, nice twist. I'm on my way to the sequel. (I hope for a happy end :0)
Author's Response: Uhhuh..bad situation for them!
I don't care that Draco was a bit out of canon. That Harry was too. Not one bit.
Evil author! You made my cry for Draco!
You described the tenderness, the unselfishness between the two lovers so well. And I can hardly wait to find out what the .... is going on. I suppose there will be an explanation? - At least I hope so.
Author's Response: I felt sorry for him too... poor guy. it ends well though..hehe
Hi! It's me again. :) I told you I would check this story out too. LOL. I liked it, you just have a way with words. Few comments though: Harry and Snape? That's just WRONG(Guess I'm not really into slash)and the characters weren't really in canon (but you warned us for that, so can't blame you). I must confess I didn't read Harry's part, nor did I read the lines of the song, but the story was catchy whatsoever....you just have a wicked way with words that seems to pick me up in the beginning of the story, hold me tightly until the end, and then drop me back into reality. Mostly I don't even hear the phone or the door.... :)
Author's Response: Harry's part was simply a little more about Hermione's part. It showed interaction with Draco again. The song is still one of my favorites. As far as slash, well, I didn't really write any details. I wouldn't be sure of how to go about that exactly, having not written any details before. I'm really glad that you liked the story! :) xoox