Reviewer: cfm887 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 7

I really enjoyed your story. The pairings of snape and tonks through me for a bit of a loop, but it still somehow made sense. I know that this was posted awhile ago, but good luck on your novels. If they are as good as your fanfic, you should do well.

Reviewer: Night Owl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 7

This was a great story, April. I'm happy that you were able to do those things and wish you the best of luck for the future, even if it means losing you in the fanfic world. Your writing is fresh and fun; keep it up and break a leg!

Reviewer: JenKM1216 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2006 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 7

This is a wonderful story! I really enjoyed it very much. I have had it on my favorites list forever intending to read it and finally did. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us all. Great job!

Reviewer: Wotcher_Tonks Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2005 04:28 am Title: Chapter 7

Haha that was good. i read this all in fory-five mins it was really good, it just kept flowing. Good Luck with everyting. Katherine

Reviewer: Maddy Riddle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 02:04 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad you took the time to finish this story. It was good and deserved to be completed. :)
Hope everything goes well with your books.
Best wishes, Maddy (your ever forgetful and even bit lazy reviewer) ;)

Reviewer: stormi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 7

Excellent story!

Reviewer: confuzable Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 02:18 am Title: Chapter 5

what is he doing, remus that is... i am sooo confused. ahhhh! great story though.

Reviewer: Menauchem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is a wonderful story! I look forward to continued installments. Please update. It is a testament to your prowess at a writer that I am simply in agony about what is to befall Remus. I feel jealous toward Tonks on behalf of Hermione and Severus. Your character development is fantastic. You, in four chapters or less, have made these characters your own. PPPPPLLLLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEE Update. Now! Jenny

Reviewer: lasaire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2005 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad to see this finally updated, however I'd like to point out a medical innacuracy. The way you have described Remus's wound becoming infected sounds like gangrene -- 'green and smelling like death.' However, though an infection might possibly set in within the few hours that it takes Hermione to treat him and get him to bed, gangrene takes long days to set in. Even a severe infection would take longer to set in, and while he might very well be showing a fever at this point, there would be no visible change such as pus to the wound at such an early date. I reccommend checking with WebMD on wound infections and their signs for better accuracy.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll switch that to orange bubbling ooze since this is a work of fantasy and I have no desire for medical accuracy. I appreciate the heads up.

Reviewer: Suze Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2005 04:28 am Title: Chapter Three

Honestly, this is a great story! Firstly, it's wonderfully written. I very much enjoyed the excellent dialogue between Remus and Tonks that revealed a gamut of emotions. And the descriptions of Hermione's days on that picturesque little piece of wilderness with Remus? Perfect. Charming. Really, just lovely. But I think that I shall reserve my highest praise for Remus' lines: he sounds like the REAL Remus. I shouldn't say this (b/c I don't write fics, and if I did, they'd be complete rubbish :P), but far too often in other fics, Remus sounds very... well, 'off,' I guess. Like an American yokel, or simply out-of-character. It's nice to read Remus as he should be. Anyhow, this review is becoming ridiculously loooong, so: please, please, please update and keep writing! cheers.

Reviewer: acdecnerd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2004 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Three

wonderful story! Update soon!

Reviewer: WickedlyWanton Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2004 07:44 am Title: Chapter One

Hi! Good to see you updating. How's your original work coming? I am so glad that you have decided to work on this some more. It is wonderful. And you know I already think of you as an awesome writer!

Author's Response: Thanks for asking! I've written three novels in just over a year-- two for Nanowrimo with the character of Cindy White and Chasing the Trickster. I'm involved in a workshop next month to polish Trickster for marketing.

Reviewer: Amariel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2004 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oh, poor Tonks. Anyway, brilliant story, I hope you will continue soon!