Reviews For That September Afternoon
Reviewer: MithLuin Anonymous 
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Date: 08/27/2007 11:21 pm Title: That September Afternoon
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2007 11:21 pm Title: That September Afternoon
Retelling it from 6 years later when they are forced to be apart makes the story worth it - very poignant! Good job.
Reviewer: Dreamy_Dragon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 09:33 pm Title: That September Afternoon
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2007 09:33 pm Title: That September Afternoon
I liked that a lot, believable, very sweet and well written
Reviewer: Fairfield Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:53 am Title: That September Afternoon
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 02:53 am Title: That September Afternoon
02-21-2007 20:01 Rated 9
Nice. Smoothly written. My personal tastes run to more conflict or more lasciviousness, but the intent of this one was melancholy sweetness.