Bravo Bravo ... very well done! I like the epilogue. Now I remember reading the companion piece on Ashwinder, I hope we get to explore that more. I appreciate the devotion you've shown to completing this story. Please do go on .. we wouldn't want your admirable talent to go to waste. I look forward to reading more of your work. THANKS again. (There is precious little good Lupin material and you have provided a much need infusion.)
Wow! Yipee! Whoo Hoo! & *squeel!* I can't believe this was your first fanfic. It was been a marvelous journey and I'm so looking forward to your new stories. They look to be as wonderful as your first:) Many thanks both for a great tale and such frequent updates!
Excellent EXCELENT story. Please be sure I will go FIRST to any of your future postings. You are now a 'favirite ficcer' in my mental universe. Thank you so much for all your hard work, and know that it is truly appreciated.
This really is a wonderful fic. Your writing style is great, as is your use of plot twist. I would never have thought to take Remus in this direction, deliciously feral at times. Rosmary is a very good character (even for an OFC). :) I can't believe you're almost finished! Nor that this is your first fic. I hope that you write many more! Thank you for writing this one - it's been most enjoyable.
*bursts into tears* Whaddaya mean, it's almost over??
Author's Response: This story is almost over, but it's the first of a three part series.
YAY! things i loved:
1)Sev's note to Remus after the wedding *cackle*
2)The Father daughter talk *sigh*
*sighs* beautiful...
Author's Response: They were a lot of fun to write. I'm glad you like them.
This is the first Lupin fan fic I have ever read. All I can say is WOW! I had always been such a Snape fan that I never considered all the possibilites for Luipin. You have opened my eyes to a new world of fan fiction. Thankyou!
Author's Response: He's such a rich character to play with. I especially enjoy the dynamic between Remus and Severus. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
This was one of the best fanfic stories I have ever read. You did an amazing job with keeping everyone in character while staying true to the way magic works in JKR's world. And thank you, thank you, thank you for being so prompt in your updates! This was just a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to review and let me know what you think!
Gotta love that Severus -- he really comes through for his friends!
aww, that was beautiful. An amusing and toucing chapter. Way to go.
Got up early to read this one (I'm sick today). I can't believe it's your first. It's great!
Awww! *Sniffle*
I guess all mothers add stress :)
Another fine chapter - thank you.
Awww! That was sweet, fun and surprising ("Sirius?"). Very, very cool.
The last two chapters have just been stupendous. I was howling at Rosemary's dismay, and at Severus' casting of curls upon Remus. Most expertly done! Can't wait to read the wedding ceremony! Thanks again for a marvelous read.
Ohh... this was delightful. Beautiful language in the kiss - and Snape vs Lupin was a giggle. Thanks
Um...
Anyone else slightly worried by the prospect of what, exactly, Severus is planning to use to distract Rosemary's mother? *raises hand*
Remus is so sweet with Ro, and love the bit with him and Snape. Fine story!
Oh! there's more. Really cute. I think the wizarding ceremony is only slightly more embarrasing than the Muggle one.
Yes, please, for pity's sake, have Albus teach the boy some TACT! Another great chapter. This has got to be the best Remus fic I've run across. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Oh, please tell us we get to see the scene between Rosemary and Severus?????
Author's Response: Outcasts is the first of a group of three stories. The scene between Rosemary and Severus doesn't occur until near the end of the third story. Story #2, I Know What You Do in the Dungeons, is posted on Ashwinder. It is a WIP.
That was a great story, I really enjoyed it. You mentioned it was your first. I hope the good reviews persuade you to write more. I'm certainly lookng forward to it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's not done yet. We still need the crazy wedding and the wedding night. I have another story posted on Ashwinder called I Know What You Do in the Dungeons. It's kind of a sequel to this, but not really. It is the story of what happens to Severus during the next school year. There is a third story started that is a sequel to both stories that I haven't posted anywhere yet because the 2nd story isn't finished. Here is a link to #2. I hope you have as much fun reading it as I am writing it. http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=1914
*grin*
Nothing more to say - just 'read this' and *GRIN*
Thank you.
Author's Response: Don't you just love happy endings?
I loved the interplay between Severus and Remus at the end of this chapter! It was too funny...Look forward to seeing what happens when Ro gets her magic back.
Author's Response: There's a lot more Severus and Remus fun coming up in the next chapter. Those boys really need to learn to behave!