[Report This]Date: 08/02/2004 01:57 am Title: Chapter 38 - Till Death Do Us Part
I continue to be impressed by the clarity and maturity of your world-view. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. What a nice thing to say!
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2004 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Till Death Do Us Part
I really thought he was dead. More chapters! Yay!
Author's Response: In know. I toy with my readers. I'm evil. :D
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2004 09:36 am Title: Chapter 38 - Till Death Do Us Part
Ah, you're a cruel person. I really thought he was dead. But I'm excited about the happy ending. Maybe just a few more chapters to give Remus and Severus time to learn to get along?
Author's Response: Four chapters and an epilog left to go. We still have to get Snape out of hot water with Voldy, get Remus and Ro married and a few other things. It's all fluffy and fun from here on out.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2004 09:34 am Title: Chapter 38 - Till Death Do Us Part
Yay! Severus!! Knew he had it in him. Wedding! Wedding! Yay!
Author's Response: And he did it because it was the right thing to do, not to make Dumbledore happy. Go Severus!
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2004 06:49 am Title: Chapter 37 - Order in the Court
This is a horrible, nasty, evil cliff-hanger - you torturer!!!
Really excellent story. If you can't post two chapter at once, couldn't you at least make your chapters even longer - maybe ten times longer.
Author's Response: Chapter 38 was long enough to be two chapters. I hope that helps!
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2004 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Order in the Court
Nice cliffhanger.
Author's Response: Last one. Honest. :D
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2004 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Order in the Court
Dude! They're really in it now!
Author's Response: Things do get a little sticky here, don't they?
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Snape's Dilemma
Snape is going to confess, isn't he. I just know it.
Author's Response: We shall see. BTW, you did a great job with Rosemary in your fic. Poor Severus! Poor Hufflepuff!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Snape's Dilemma
Oh the torture!!! Tomorrow can't come soon enough...
Author's Response: At least you don't have to wait a week!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Snape's Dilemma
Well, that almost solves it, doesn't it? Dumbledore will tell him the whole world rests on the outcome of this trial, and it won't be up to Snape's courage, only his sense of debt to Dumbledore, which we know already is quite pronounced. Very clever. Good thing Lucius is such a self-important, gloating ego-maniac. Another nice chapter, though I could do with some action to go with all that thought. (I know, who am I to talk, most of my stuff is all thought!)
Author's Response: ~Author laughs maniacally~ Not exactly. Wait until tomorrow. I've got a few more twists up my sleeve. I agree with you that a little more action would have been great. It would just take a better author than me to pull it off. I couldn't figure a way to do it with Severus lying in an infirmary bed. Don't worry. Plent of good action coming up. At least I hope it's good!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Two Butterbeers with an Order of Death Eaters on the Side
Once again, a wonderful chapter! You had my heart jumping there for a minute =P
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Pleased to Meet You, Mr. Lupin
I must say, I'm quite intrigued by the beginning of your fic. You've written a wonderful opening to what I percieve will be a beautiful story. I suppose all I have to do now is read the rest, and believe me, that will be a pleasure! Wonderful job!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 11:25 am Title: Chapter 36 - Snape's Dilemma
You are a master of pulling on emotions. And quite evil at that. You give us bits of wonderful writings and leave us to suffer yet again. (Of course I would also like to thank you for updating frequently Longer waits would be quite torturous.) But I'll miss you when it ends. This story is the first place I look when I turn on my computer. ~whispering~ You couldn't find it in your heart to maybe post 2 chapters at once? Nah. I didn't think so. But I had to try. ~sigh~ Until tomorrow ...
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 11:18 am Title: Chapter 36 - Snape's Dilemma
superbly written, nice exploration of Snape's head and inner workings. The chapter before was heart-rending. I was especially touched when Lupin finally was overwhelmed by sorrow. Thanks so much.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 08:20 am Title: Chapter 36 - Snape's Dilemma
okay. what do you have up your sleeve. I hope Severus gets a conscience. Please?
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2004 02:02 am Title: Chapter 35 - The Last Farewell
Waaaaaaah! Oh man that was sad! And so well done. This is the kind of story that you might want a happy ending to, but it's so well written you couldn't help but respect (and admire) an unhappy one. Can't wait for tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2004 10:07 am Title: Chapter 35 - The Last Farewell
Wow, he must have some drive to be able to... ahem... you know, hours from his execution.
Author's Response: Well, he does. ~wink~ But in this case it's more about the intimacy than the sex. That's why I wrote a lime instead of a lemon, to concentrate on the emotions rather than the act itself. ~sigh~ He loves her and she loves him right back. They're clinging to each other for support in the most intimate way possible.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2004 09:58 am Title: Chapter 35 - The Last Farewell
wahh!! *is literally crying*
If this story doesn't end up happy, I'm SO going to be miserable all week. That said, your writing is fantastic, and I know that even if there is an unhappy ending, it will still in a way be worth it.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2004 07:49 am Title: Chapter 35 - The Last Farewell
oh gosh, that was aching. *whimper* I hate to think i have to wait until tomorrow to hear the rest...
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2004 07:30 am Title: Chapter 35 - The Last Farewell
Aaaaahhhh!! What will happen??!! Arrgghhh... Sorry I'm not coherent, but damn the suspense is killer! Great chapter, a sense of both extreme stress and peace at the end is achieved. How will this go?
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2004 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Winning Battles and Losing Wars
Oh, no!!! I really don't see a way out of this one in time, not with the trial the next day! It'll take a while for Rosemary's plan with the shop to work -- after all, economic deprivation takes a while to set in. How are they going to get out of this?
Author's Response: There is also a bit of a revenge motive in her actions. Rosemary is not always a nice and reasonable woman.
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2004 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Educating Rosemary
What's wrong with jelly beans for lunch? Absolultely nothing, I say. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2004 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Reunions
I loved that he visited her when she wasn't home....needing to be near her things if he couldn't be near her. Beautiful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2004 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You
I just found this to be very sad. Remus, Remus, Remus...
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2004 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass
Severus felt certain that the only virtues Lupin could appreciate were her big tits and her big bank account. Great line!