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Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2004 09:57 am Title: Chapter 28 - Unexpected

Is there somethign about that potion that we should know about? like a shelf life? or that its not strong enough for werewolf mating? Cuz she certainly sounds like she's pregnant to me! (and really liked the whole Minister thing..*snicker* love it when a beaurocrat has to swallow their words.)

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2004 01:14 am Title: Chapter 27 - Doubts and Desires

Yummy sex scene. Hope more is on the way!

Author's Response: Hehehehe! Of course!

Reviewer: Floris Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2004 01:14 am Title: Chapter 27 - Doubts and Desires

This is continuing to be the most awesome story! And the rate of updates is a reader's dream!

Author's Response: Thank you! I like updating everyday too. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2004 12:58 am Title: Chapter 27 - Doubts and Desires

"I’m going to take care of me and mine and Severus Snape and the rest of the wizarding world can look out for themselves." Lupin was bitten as an innocent child. Did soemone else say they'd take care of their own and everyone else could sod off? It's really a tricky question.

Author's Response: A very tricky question indeed. Made trickier by the motives of the characters. Rosemary is not always a very nice person. In many ways she acts like a two year old. She wants what she wants when she wants it. Severus has some good points, but his motives are also self-serving. What can I say? ~shakes head and sighs~ Slytherins.

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2004 10:43 am Title: Chapter 27 - Doubts and Desires

Ice _IS_ nice *giggle* played that game before...
I STILL hope you kick Sev up one side and down the other...what a git.
Though...i'm glad Ro is realizing that werewolves CAN be dangerous.

Author's Response: Ice IS nice, isn't it? Severus will be dealt with before the end of the story. Promise.

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2004 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Evening at Grimmauld Place

You write a great prick!Severus *laugh*. I really can't wait to see the far off scene where Rosemary kicks his ass from one end of the chapter to the other...

Author's Response: Prick!Severus is so much fun to write. Severus is the main character in my other story (which is a continuation of this, but not a sequel if that makes sense) and he is somewhat more mellow and introspective. Not nearly as much fun to write as teh eeeebill Severus!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2004 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Evening at Grimmauld Place

Snape is soooOOOOOoooo sexy! And Moony is strating to scare me a little. What if she were ever raped? I mean, talk about adding insult to injury!

Author's Response: Yup. Moony should scare you a little, he's a werewolf, not a golden retriever. He is dangerous and comes with a host of issues. Remus laid it all out ahead of time for Rosemary, but does she listen? Nooooo. She's a smart girl, but she has issues too.

Reviewer: smoke Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2004 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Evening at Grimmauld Place

“Severus is a self-righteous prick “ – succinctly put. But they just went to sleep? That seems a little OOC for those two. LOL! I really love the way you’re crafting their relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks! They had a REALLY long day. Don't worry; he'll catch up with her in the morning. ;)

Reviewer: Daintress Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2004 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Evening at Grimmauld Place

I don't think it was too squicky. I read one once that had whole body parts turning lupine. THAT was squicky. Anyway, another great chapter. I wonder if Snape knows what he's in for?

Author's Response: I think I read that story. Remus/Hermione? If it's the same one, it WAS squicky. Good...very good, actually...but SQUICKY! Severus, Severus, Severus. I don't think he cares what he's in for. He's just so jealous of Lupin he's willing to do all sorts of risky things to keep the werewolf in his place.

Reviewer: smoke Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2004 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Morning on Diagon Alley

I love Ro's style!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2004 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Afternoon on Knockturn Alley

Nice tension, good job.

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2004 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Morning on Diagon Alley

Oustanding chapter.

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2004 10:32 am Title: Chapter 24 - Morning on Diagon Alley

teehee teehee teehee...oh, i love seeing puffed up people get the wind let out of them...*sigh* Love what you've done with Ollivander and Remus as well...very intriguing:)

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2004 09:44 am Title: Chapter 23 - Awakenings: Rude and Otherwise

I like that idea of vengeance...very well done. The dynamic between Ollivander and Remus is excellently written as well... Waiting for tomorrow!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2004 08:57 am Title: Chapter 23 - Awakenings: Rude and Otherwise

Love Tom for spreading that rumor. Hopw he's their best man ;)

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2004 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Real Live Crashes In

Good, as always.

Reviewer: Iona Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2004 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Afterglow and Confessions

Remus and Madam Pomfrey? Whee! Very enjoyable story. I like the idea of a Muggle who's immune to magic - although it's a pity about the contraceptive charm :)

Reviewer: smoke Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2004 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Real Live Crashes In

Great story; better sex! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2004 08:43 am Title: Chapter 22 - Real Live Crashes In

Daily updates? Christ woman, you're going to spoil me!!! *yay*!!!! Excellent chappie. i wouldn't expect Ro to do anything less:) Whee!!!!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2004 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Great Manipulator

"You can't go moral on me again after this. I'll go mad." That's so funny!! What's with the constant cliffhanger endings? You're killingme here!

Reviewer: Florentia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2004 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Great Manipulator

Remus is going to *drop*! LOL The "surprise" is she's pregnant right? LOL

Author's Response: LOL. I imagine he would drop after everything he went through with the condom and having to ask Snape for a potion!

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2004 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Great Manipulator

you of the evil cliffies!!! *sigh* I'm glad you got them back together...and i'm glad i was right about Dumbledore! *ach what a prat* Can't wait for the next!!!

Author's Response: Yup, you had Dumbledore nailed. I do have a penchant for cliffies. I'm sorry! If I can persuade the powers that be at Sycophant Hex to make me a validated author, I'm going to update every morning. Does that make the cliffies more acceptable?

Reviewer: Floris Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2004 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Fuzzy Ducks

Great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2004 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Fuzzy Ducks

YAY! Tonks! YAY! Bill! Remus was being an irritating git! glad to see he's come to his senses...though now i wonder what Albus will say. After all, having Ro the way she is is quite a weapon...

Author's Response: Hmmm. Maybe....

Reviewer: smoke Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2004 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Fuzzy Ducks

Love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I had a great time writing it.

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