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Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2004 09:03 am Title: Chapter 20 - Fuzzy Ducks

Tonks and Bill.... won't that veela girl be upset? Love the story!

Author's Response: Ah...let her be upset! LOL. Thanks!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2004 08:29 am Title: Chapter 19 - Educating Rosemary

You know, Lupin has a will of iron, and I trust him to act according to everybody's safety (I forgive his little accident back in book 3), but I must admit I'm not sure all werewolves are so cautious. I think the laws should be reviewed, but I still think legislation is in order for public saftey... Do you hate me now?... Hope not.

Author's Response: Of course I don't hate you now! You have a point. Keep reading. :D

Reviewer: smoke Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2004 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Educating Rosemary

I had read the first half of this awhile ago and was happy to find it agan. Really love it. Rosemary is great and you are a wonderful storyteller!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gannet Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2004 03:03 am Title: Chapter 19 - Educating Rosemary

I tumbled on your story yesterday and, even though Lupin is far from my favorite character in JKR's books, I was fascinated by the way you described him. And I like Rosemary too... The first thing I checked this morning when I turned on the computer was whether there was an update. All this means: I love your story, and will be looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to be updating daily soon.

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2004 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Educating Rosemary

Sev stepped in it...glad Ro saw right through it. *grin* Keep it coming, please!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2004 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Reunions

Kind of a cold granda. I mean, no hugs? No tears of joy? Oh, well.

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2004 11:17 am Title: Chapter 18 - Reunions

that is so poignant! Glad she's kept her head over it. (she really is slytherin, isn't she? *grin*) Can't wait for the next installment...

Reviewer: Daintress Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2004 10:06 am Title: Chapter 18 - Reunions

Very, very sweet. I think she and Mr. Ollivander should be able to set everything to rights. Thanks for posting so regularly!

Reviewer: deblovesdragon Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2004 02:10 am Title: Chapter 18 - Reunions

(sniff) That chapter always chokes me up. I just love Ro, you know?

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2004 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

"go home now and go back to living your life as if you never met me. I'll contact you when the war is over to break the curse. Maybe we can try again then," he said with quiet resolve." He can't be silly enough to believe that's possible!

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2004 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Answers and Questions

I'm a hopeless romantic, I know, but she seems to be kind of level headed... sort of. I mean would the charm make her not just trust her keep but surrender to him entirely??

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2004 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Disclosure

Bar none, the sexiest marriage ritual I've EVER heard of.

Reviewer: Daintress Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2004 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

Oh, I was SO looking forward to seeing Severus get his! But thanks for no making us wait the whole weekend to find out. I guess Moody's got his uses after all. And Severus had better get rid of those panties, or Remus will still rip him to shreds later. I'll keep my hopes up, maybe you'll get around to that!

Reviewer: lola Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2004 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

This just gets better and deeper! Great job!

Reviewer: Nymphadora Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2004 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

Great story! Each chapter has been consistently interesting and gripping, especially this one, which almost made me cry *rolls eyes* keep writing, great job!

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

THE BLAZING IDIOT!!!!! Severus is gonna love this...probably even try to move in...the git. *grrrs*

Reviewer: deblovesdragon Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

I still get so angry with him for being so foolish. (shakes fist at Remus) It's a good thing that I read this already. Not going to give anything away.

Reviewer: Floris Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

Ooo that was tough. They're both trying so hard to get through to the other. The image of Snape with her shredded panties was funny!

Reviewer: anarane Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Because I Love You

remus is being an ass

Reviewer: lola Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass

for the love of god, give us the next chapter please! my nailbeds can't take anymore!

Author's Response: I submitted the chapter early this morning. It's up to the folks that run the archive now.

Reviewer: Daintress Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass

Oh $^!/ Severus is going to be dead - with those panties in his pocket, Remus is going to smell her scent on him and rip him to LITERAL bloody shreds. What an IDIOT! Nice setup though. Did you really have to make us wait the weekend on this particular chapter????? Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Melpomene Erato Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2004 11:34 am Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass

Oops! I hope no more unforgiveables will be exchanged between the two.

Reviewer: Floris Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2004 01:44 am Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass

Oh goody! The fits about to hit the shan!

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2004 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass

Very aptly titled chapter...you're making Snape VERY creepy. *shudder* I hope remus kicks his arse into next week. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: lola Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2004 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 16 - A Snake in the Grass

i love this story i'm addicted

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