[Report This]Date: 06/23/2004 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Foolish Wand Waving and Unforgivable Incantations
And we thought Severus was snarky when had control of the things he says!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2004 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Foolish Wand Waving and Unforgivable Incantations
I like this new development! And Severus was great.
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2004 08:28 am Title: Chapter 12 - Foolish Wand Waving and Unforgivable Incantations
So that's Severus' apology? Why am I not surprised. Another great chapter! I really enjoy your straightforward writing style, and your dialogue is very natural. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2004 03:31 am Title: Chapter 12 - Foolish Wand Waving and Unforgivable Incantations
First, THANK YOU for updating.
Second, why was she cooperating so meekly with Dumbledore who was a participant when they took her ovaries hostage?
Third, why did Snape give up his wand, give the vial, and Remus the draught when he finally had the upper hand? Seems to me he would have at least gloated a little before relenting. It seemed out of character dor Snape, though you had him perfectly up to that pont.
Author's Response: Great observations. Recall that Rosemary looked into Dumbledore's eyes and decides that he is trustworthy before she opened up to him. When asked, she explains that she knows when people are lying to her that she gets hunches about people that are always correct. Severus and Albus explain to her that that is because she is a Legilimens (even though she doesn't have the first idea what that is. Yes, she did trust Albus quickly, but she also threw in her lot very quickly with Remus. Don't you find that a bit odd too? ;)
As far as Severus goes. Yes, he was acting very, very odd at the end. That will be explained in the chapter after the next, which is the chapter where the plot really begins. Severus is one very nasty, confused man in this story.
I'm so excited that you are wondering about all of the things that I was hoping a reader would be curious about. It will make it that much more fun when everything comes together.
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2004 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Foolish Wand Waving and Unforgivable Incantations
hrm.... interesting. Love Snape not having control...excellent. And thank you for updating so quickly...!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2004 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disorder in the Order
I started reading this elsewhere, and was totally psyched to see it over here, and further on!!! I love this story, and Rosemary is incredible. I can't wait to see her rip into Severus and Albus....i want front row seats!
Author's Response: The story is already complete and I hope to be posting updates every Monday and Thursday. Up until chapter 13 it's really all just set up. I think you'll really enjoy it when the plot kicks in.
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2004 02:29 am Title: Chapter 11 - Disorder in the Order
I think she didn't need to apologize to her. I think she was right to drink the vial and assume Lupin hadn't done anything very stupid. Anyway, he apologized, so I guess that's OK. Hmmmm, Tonks was kind of harsh on her.
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2004 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Control Issues
Although I understand that Dumbledore has fath in Rosemary's ability, why didn't he agree to ask Snape to return it? Wouldn't it have been the curtious thing to do?
Author's Response: Between the Order and Hogwarts, Albus has better things to worry about than Remus Lupin's sex life. His interest in the situation is selfish. Rosemary has skills that he might wish to take advantage of, so it's in his interest to help Remus out a bit. But he also wants to evaluate Rosemary. What better way than to give her a problem to solve. Albus is a great manipulator. (Hey wait! That's the name of a future chapte.)
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2004 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Control Issues
I am crazy about how you write both Lupin and Rosemary. They're fantastic.
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2004 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Control Issues
"Outcasts" came up as "recently added", so I was expecting a new chapter. However, chapter 10 (control issues) shows up among the reviews, but I can't see the actual chapter. ???
Author's Response: It takes a few hours for the administrators to approve new chapter. It should be up later this afternoon. I hope you enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2004 04:36 am Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Moony Presents His Compliments to Professor Snape...
Fabulous!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2004 11:57 am Title: Chapter 9 - Mr. Moony Presents His Compliments to Professor Snape...
Oh, PLEASE let her open the present in the next chapter... PLEASE let them *use* the present in the next chapter... PLEASE post the next chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2004 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 5 - It Goes Where?
Love this story.
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2004 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What's Your Pleasure?
I'm having so much fun with your story!
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2004 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Everything Old is New Again
Very good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2004 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Reality Bites
Hey, Remus is two months older than me, to the day. Ah, now I really feel a connection to him. (sigh)
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2004 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Ice and Chocolate
Hey! Chocolate covered werewolf.. sound pretty good to me! ;-) Just love this story! MORE!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2004 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Afterglow and Confessions
This has been the most romantic chapter sofar... those tender moments shared after being intimate are always so special. So sad Remus is forbidden from having children... just not right.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2004 08:13 am Title: Chapter 6 - Afterglow and Confessions
Okay. Mme Pomfrey makes sense...(and i sorta agree iwth the ick) perhap Rosemerta? (she does come across as rather...glandular in canon.)
Either case, excellent story...looking forward to the rest:)
Author's Response: Yes, it was Poppy. The reason for the relationship becomes clear later in the story. Ick? Perhaps, but Ro doesn't have any complaints. ;)
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2004 09:20 am Title: Chapter 6 - Afterglow and Confessions
The only person in that age catagory, who is not a professor and knows a great deal about the human body? Not to mention that Remus would have come into close contact with her every single month after the full moon. You're telling us he shagged Poppy Pomfrey, aren't you? ICK! Very nice chapter, though. Keep them coming - er - the chapters, I mean!
Author's Response: The story is already finished, so I will keep them coming regularly - er - the chapters, I mean. :D
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2004 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 5 - It Goes Where?
“What is God’s name do you think you’re doing?” Poor Remus! I hate those nasty things too... smelly.. unnatural. Good thing that spell came to mind. He loves her? Rosemary better not break his heart... I may have to kick her muggle ass if she does! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2004 06:39 am Title: Chapter 4 - What's Your Pleasure?
“Damn, it’s good to be a wizard!” Good for Remus! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2004 12:05 am Title: Chapter 3 - Everything Old is New Again
Good chapter! I like the transition of the characters' emotions. And I love your portrayal of Remus.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2004 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4 - What's Your Pleasure?
Too funny! Well... I'm glad to know werewolves practice safe sex. Good thing HE was thinking. Now she gets to explain how a condom works. I'm sure she will "handle" the situation ;-) Great chapter! MORE!
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2004 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Everything Old is New Again
This was a rollercoaster of different emotions. First the high from the attack, then the giggles regarding the hiden section, then to desire, sympathy, then a tinge of hope. Good chapter!