Loveley. Just simpley lovely. I think of all the ships in HP Shipdom, Remus/Tonks is my absolute favorite. There aren't enough of the good ones around.
Brilliant - I am so happy that they made up. Fantastic writing.
Excellent. I was about to have a nervous breakdown if they didn't make up soon. You cleverly wove your story into the HBP version brilliantly.
YEAH!!!! Finally those two are together 4-eva! I love how you showed both as being stubborn as all hell, yet they want to give in to each other because they care about the other so much, beautifully done.
(Does a happy dance) Finally! I was ready to strangle Remus. but he finally got his act together. Beautifully done and very romantic and fitting. Love this story soooo much.
*blows nose loudly* Bloody brilliant. I love the whole thing, but I think Tonks' cleaning up bit was my favorite. I just adore how you write them together, especially their verbal assault on each other. Fantastic. Wow. This is so excellent. Well done, Katie!
This was lovely! *sigh* Long awaited, but fantastic. I did notice one typo though. Almost at the end it says, "He studiedd her..." It should be studied. It's a simple mistake. I thought you might like to know. :) Thank you for the wonderful chapter!
Write more! Please!!
i love it! all 20 chapters!i just have 1 question: when are you going to write chapter 21!! i'm addicted to your stories!!!
good story
When I found out that Moondance had been updated one half of me was excited while the other half was feeling sorry, because I thought that I was going to read the last chapter. The chapter is great, I think it perfectly explains - together with previous chapters - Tonks' approach in HBP. And after finishing it one half of me is relieved that I do not have to part with my favourite story, and the other half would desperately want to learn how on earth is Remus going to come to his senses at last? Thanks for a briliant story.
that was so wonderfull! Oh please update soon! I love your story, it's so tragically romantic.
*tear* Excellent chapter, as always! Update soon, por favor. I really want to see how everything plays out according to you! :)
Lovely chap! I always liked the scene where Tonks eventually blurted out she loves Remus, and now we get to see it from her perspective. I can't wait what follows next! Good job!
Great chapter! It was nice to get the different viewpoint, and I can't wait until the next chapter when Remus (hopefully) finally sees sense. You've done a wonderful job so far.
Wow... that was more impressive than the book. The emotion you pull through your words... spectacular. I really love your writing. I love your style. I love your story. Great job!
Waahhhhhh! You made me cry! So hats off to you for more terrific writing.
I think you did a great job with this scene, I loved to replay it in my head at this different prospective. Another wonderful chapter and a reminder to myself of how badly I want those two together.
Great chapter! I particularly like the end- it is interesting to see the heart breaking dialogue through different eyes. Also, I am anxious for your next chapter- what discussion might have transpired to finally bring Remus and Tonks together?! Just one small question/observation- given that Tonks had fought in the Department of Mysteries with the kids, I think that she probably would have known both Luna and Neville (especially Neville as he was atually awake and particpating when the Order arrived).
I love this story - I physically cannot wait for the next chapter. It's just so great! Remus is at times so so frustrating but he means well I think.
Please tell me you haven't abandoned the story!
I just spent the better part of my day reading this wonderful story. Your depiction of Remus and Tonks is absolutely perfect. They are so perfect together. The passion that you convey between the two is palpable. (I can't understand all the moaning and groaning that some people are making that this relationship "came out of nowhere" in canon.) Your story is a marvelous backstory on what these two have gone through in HBP. I have to say that Tonks and Molly's conversation back a few chapters, in which Molly relates the circumstances of each child conception was a hoot! I had tears of laughter in my eyes. I love Tonks' parents and how they have reacted to Remus. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.
I agree with lucie in that I almost felt as if Remus had broken up with me! This is, again, an incredible chapter and I find myself really longing for the next, for them to just get together already!!!
OMG! "Oh you know me, verbal diarrhea," I nearly peed my pants laughing so hard! Great line!
You have done such a stupendous job with Remus' and Tonks' back story. I'm very anxious to see the resolution. Remus' argument made me want to pull my hair out. The man is right, of course. He's just so damn noble. Crap! I hate that. I don't know who to feel sorry for worse, him or Tonks! Keep up the good work!