[Report This]Date: 05/09/2006 06:08 pm Title: Bright Star, Would I Were Steadfast as thou Art
Now that I'm a Remus/Tonks shipper, I can't get enough of the couple. Or enough of this fic. This is my favorite story of all time!
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2006 04:37 am Title: Bright Star, Would I Were Steadfast as thou Art
Incredibly perfectly written, again. I felt desperate as if Remus had broke up with me. He is being so logical as only men can be, and so consistant as only Remus can be. I really cannot imagine how he and Tonks can end holding hands in public after this, but you will certainly manage to write it convincingly. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2006 11:46 pm Title: Bright Star, Would I Were Steadfast as thou Art
Alas, Remus can be such a (excuse the expression) butthead. (I know, it's so 90s). *exasperated* Why can't he just get over his qualms and do what he and she needs? Men can be so stubborn sometimes. Despite my annoyance with Remus, this is a lovely chapter - well written and well thought out. I eagerly await the next installment, as always.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2006 11:37 pm Title: Bright Star, Would I Were Steadfast as thou Art
*Screams* I love this story, but Remus makes me so mad! Damnit, why can't he make up his damn mind? Poor Tonks...sigh. Anyway, another brilliant one as always.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2006 09:23 pm Title: Bright Star, Would I Were Steadfast as thou Art
Damnit, Remus! I swear... Excellent chapter. I want to kick Remus' arse, but geez. Charlie was written great. And the talk with Ted... that's the part that really made me want to wring Remus' neck. Thank you for another brilliant chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2006 04:42 am Title: Scribbling on the Sky the Message He is Dead
I am enjoying this story so much, a big thank you for that! There are so many things I enjoyed, I'll try to sum up a few. First Andromeda, I loved how you depicted her. Still Slytherin, but with a nice touch of wickedness and an immense love for her husband and daughter. I'd say you captured the perfect mix of it all. Ted Tonks and his potions as well, a nice surprising twist which I totally believe. Tonks is just Tonks, like the way I imagine her to be. Can't say much more about it :) The same goes for Lupin. Right like the way I imagined how they both would be. The chemistry between them is great, you drew it out nicely and you got me seriously hooked from the first love scene between them. Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2006 07:21 am Title: Might I But Moor Tonight in Thee
Well I loved the whole thing so far but I have to tell you that this chapter was so well done. I loved how Remus fought with himself over the whole thing, the whole time, just like I imagine he would. And loved the bittersweet feel. Wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2006 01:32 pm Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
OMG I just got finished with this story, which was recommended to me yesterday by a fellow Lupin fan friend of mine and I am enamored with it!! For me this is the back story in the book that JKR did not include. Brilliant! I can not wait to read more...
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2006 02:30 am Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
Oh. Wow. This was definitely worth waiting for, both for Remus + Tonks and for the readers. I liked the "parent issue" bit and the "hot young thing" bit and Remus' conversation with Julie and ... the list could be endless.
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2006 08:54 am Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
great chapter! I really look forward to your updates. The Duran Duran reference made me smile- one of my favorite memories of adolesence. Liked the highlander one as well. I am interested to see why Tonks hair changed back and whether it was related to her mother's agitation at the end of the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2006 07:34 pm Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
Hmm, another chapter well worth the wait. Remus and Tonks could not be anymore interesting to read when you write about them (besides J.K.Rowling, of course)
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2006 04:49 am Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
Wonderful update! And the the chapter is also very long, which explains why you let us wait for such a long time ;-) Why did her hair change back, though? Did I miss it or did you not mentioned it?
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 03:46 pm Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
Fantastic!!! Absolutely brilliant! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 10:42 am Title: Thy Love is Such I Can No Way Repay
Another brilliant chapter. I loved the Duran Duran and Highlander references. *laughs* When I saw Hungry Like the Wolf, the words immediately popped into my head along with the video and I choked with laughter thinking about Remus as Simon. And for that, I thank you. You have made my day. :) But back on topic... I love the interactions between Remus and Tonks. They are starting to grow on me as a couple, thanks to you. Keep up the excellent work!
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2006 10:58 pm Title: Scribbling on the Sky the Message He is Dead
Fantastic story. I'm loving it! ^^
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2006 09:13 am Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
I'm LOVING your fic! Awesome job and spectacular writing! Update soon, please? :)
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2006 05:09 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
A really good story....cant wait to see more of this....I think this is one of the best stories about this couple that I ever read.....and I already read a lot...^___^
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2006 06:55 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
I have just read this story from start to this chapter, and I am anxiously awaiting the next update. I love your elaboration of all these previously minor characters from canon. Tonks has had me laughing more times than I can count, and my heart breaks for both Remus and Tonks, although I admire Tonks for her perseverance. I delight in the way that she consitently says "I love you", knowing she will not hear it in return. Remus' sense of honour, duty, dignity and humbleness make me fall in love with his character. I also really enjoy the Jane Austen and Briget Jones references. But the real scene stealers are Andromeda and Ted. keep the good work.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2006 07:41 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
This is fantastic! I just discovered this archive and your fic is the first I've read- I've been glued to it for the past few days and am really looking forward to the next chapter. I really like the relationship you've created between Remus and Tonks, and the fact that he just can't keep completely away from her backs up the canon that implies they've had the "too old too poor too dangerous" conversation hunderds of times. Well done!
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2006 05:32 am Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
In HP books, Tonks' character is only indicated by a few situations in which she appears. I like the way you portray her in your fiction, and it fits very well with canon. Lucie
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2006 06:31 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
I love that NT pushes RL to his limits, I think it helps him to grow, though I don't think he realizes it! And I still love the Tonks'!
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 08:15 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
Oh bother... I forgot to put the breaks in for the part I copied from the story. *lol* Sorry about that, but I believe you can see what I'm talking about.
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 08:13 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
I must say I was extremely excited to see an update on this! This has become my absolute favorite story on the archive. You have improved on adding some description to your dialogue. That's great! There were, however, a couple of small errors I noticed, mostly missing words. Everyone does that, especially with the small words like "a" or "the". And there was one place where it was decidedly confusing who was speaking because you missed telling when it switched to Nymphadora when the discussion was between Remus and Andromeda. Here, let me show you.
“Try not to be too hard on her, Andromeda; she was his savior, in a way. He was trapped in that vile house and she came by regularly, in order to cheer him up. It meant the world to him.”
“I would have loved the opportunity to cheer him up. I would have been there every day if I could have!”
“Mum, we’ve been over this already, it wasn’t safe…”
“And yet, with all those precautions…” She looked around, blanching visibly at what she saw in Remus’ eyes. After turning to meet her daughter’s exasperated expression and her husband’s reddening face, she seemed to rethink the rest of her sentence. She altered the course of the conversation quickly. “So, in what way would they turn on you, Remus?”
See how Nymphadora broke in, yet if you used the normal rules of the dialogue going between one character and another, that would have been from Remus. But other than that, this is excellent. I love Andromeda and Ted so very much. I think the best dialogue was between Nymphadora and Julie. It was so typical. Brilliant. Great job, as always!
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 04:53 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
I am really enjoying your story. In particular I am so glad to read a story that doesn't treat Remus as a wimp!! I have always read him as someone who makes an effort to be mild mannered to cover the agressiveness that being a werewolf would bring out in him. Remus is my favorite character and I check out a lot of fan fic about him, but most of it disappoints me because he is so submissive and dull in it!! Anyway, I as I said, I am enjoying your story and look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 04:36 pm Title: A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread and Thou
Absolutely charming, every conversation to the plot. I enjoyed Julie and Tonks little talk. Makes me adore Tonks even more.