[Report This]Date: 06/29/2005 02:58 pm Title: Wash Away My Life
I knew it! I knew he loved Lily! III KNEWWW IITTT!!!!
Author's Response: Totally, you`re blind if you can`t see that.
[Report This]Date: 06/28/2005 10:51 am Title: Wash Away My Life
Beautiful, perfect...
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2005 10:28 pm Title: Wash Away My Life
Nice sensitivity to the flow and images. I, too, loved the lack of names, it was a nice touch. I especially loved the warmth that you underlined in Remus' personality and presence. Nice unexpected line at the end (Lily leaving James); a delightful short novel.
Author's Response: I thought that would add to the reader's need to feel for Remus.
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2005 12:41 am Title: Wash Away My Life
Wow, that was amazing. So powerful, I love the way you wove rain itno every bit of the story; its such a poignant symbol and expression of feeling and works so perfectly here. Like someone else said, the lack of names is nice. Names can limit fics.
Good work!
Author's Response: I think the rain is a powerful symbol, and since it really isn't used much that just adds to the power of it.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2005 07:25 pm Title: Wash Away My Life
A truly touching story thats perfectly written. I think the lack of names is a gorgeous touch and it makes the story excellent. Great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I think it helps get rid of false sterotypes on the character so that you're more open to them.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2005 06:00 pm Title: Wash Away My Life
Wow...::bawls:: Just.....wow....
What a heartbreaking story.
Author's Response: I cried when I wrote it, that's the power of the rain.