[Report This]Date: 10/15/2006 12:13 pm Title: Severus
g-o-o-d! very nice, very snape-ysh, indeed. keeo on writeing!
Author's Response: Thanks! ;)
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2006 03:50 pm Title: Severus
Oooooooooo, this needed some heavy panting and grunting!!!!!!!!!! Oh hell!! What can I say? Gay bloke inside this girl screaming to get out!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it anyway!!
Author's Response: Ah well. Maybe it'll get added. :D Thanks.
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2005 05:29 pm Title: Severus
Now, the plotline works, the concept works, and much of the writing is very good. However, some of the writing is a little over the top. "devoured by the jaws of passion" sounds like a line out of a cheesy romance novel. And Snape shifts character a bit. That's okay, but he would NEVER cancel class. But overall, I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Rewrite is in order then! Thanks for the criticism! Off to work on it (and digest HBP)!
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2005 06:24 pm Title: Severus
"...devoured by the jaws of passion"? Well, that was a scary line.
Except for that though it's a pretty good peice.
Author's Response: I did it because they both have a dangerous side to them. It is supposed to tell you the depth of what they are doing and how they love each other. Thank you!
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2005 10:50 am Title: Severus
Wow! really good! Normally I don't really like Sev/Rem (im more of a Rem/Herm myself) but this one is entirely non-sleazy fic! way to go!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see I've managed to do that! Makes me feel good. Thank you so much!
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2005 07:40 am Title: Severus
Heh. Hardly a declaration of undying love, but then again, it *is* Snape. Luckily Remus was able to decipher the snarkiness. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I know, right? Snape is too snarky and sarcastic to do anything romantic. Thanks!
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2005 09:30 pm Title: Remus
I hope this is not just a one-shot! More MORE!
Author's Response: There's a second part! And maybe I'll give a bit of an epilogue in another story... Hm, there's a thought. Thank you!
-Mel
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2005 04:02 pm Title: Remus
This is cute... ARe you going to continue it?
Author's Response: Yes I am, this time in Severus' pov. Thanks for the support!
-Mel