i love your story....it really is the best...i hope the next part will be up soon. i really want to know what happens
OMG write the next one pleeeeeeeeasssseeee!!!!!
Hey, I like it so far... Hehe, "Sneaky Snake!" Here's something to do with that (it's work safe!). http://youtube.com/watch?v=MchhtofbgJI
I really enjoyed it, just waiting until next part comes out
Oky dok this is an enjoyable story, now post the rest please :).
Ooh, bummer place to end the chapter there! I hope Draco manages to get out of his engagement to Pansy; maybe he has some money stashed away from his parents' knowledge. Ummm... contraceptive? I don't know if Ginny wants that particular kind of "souvenir" from Draco; would be tough to explain to her family. Thanks for the new chapter!
Wow. What a chapter. Can't wait for the next. I have loaded the second chapter and they are all thrilled. Regards Naemy
Oh my god. This is an incredible fanfic! Your ideas aren't completely detached from the Harry Potter world - there are still some elements of it in your writing - but you have your own ideas. You have beautiful metaphors and also a w e s o m e ideas. Is there any more to come?
Yowza! That answered my earlier questions. Can't wait for the story to continue. Looking forward to more of the St. Catchpole's, and more of Draco giving Ginny better memories!
Oh, hearts breaking all around. Does Ginny know he's trying to be noble, or is she thinking that he doesn't want to touch her because she's "tainted" by her past? On to part 2.
That was absolutely brilliant. The absolute best part was Severus' responses to the fight. I was almost howling. So funny! (Actually, reminded me a bit of Alan Rickman pulling up his sleeves and whacking the boys in the GoF movie. His expression then was priceless.)
This fic is extremely amazing. I love every bit of this story, from beginning to end. Your superb description of characters, setting, and thoughts, make it even better. Great job! later sam
wow! i loved it more please
I love how the two act in teh begining of the chapter, they snao at eachotherm but when Malfoy leaves they're respectable and act (almost) like friends.
this was so cool. at first the scene with the chocolate frogs. what a funny idea. and then ginny's first time. really,really cool. As I asked before,is it okay if I translate your story into German? It's just that I know some people who would like to read it but have problems with understanding English. Regards Naemy
Hey gotsnape. I realy, really like your story. Can't wait for the next chapter. But as I probably have o wait for it, would you mind if I translated your story into German and post it on another page? I will do my very best to not make crap out of it and I will not say that it belongs to me. Please say yes. Kind regards Naemy
The bath scene (Ch.6) was very hot and steamy (sorry, I couldn’t help that awful pun) and the fact that you made them hold back from actually doing it there and then somehow increased the sexual tension. I knew when those two would finally hit it off the result would be cataclysmic, so when they plunged into the pool for a splash and a romp I thought – that’s it! But no, you are making us wait, you tease you. I may have told you before that I your depiction of Snape is just right for me? He is sharp-tongued, focussed and very, very clever. The dichotomy between light and dark is ever more apparent as the story moves on. This flits between being intensely sad and alarming to having me rocking with laughter – some great lines – I congratulate you. I should urge you to ‘write more soon’ but I do understand what it is to be obsessive and a perfectionist ;o)!!! So then, take your time with this marvellous fic but know that there is someone out here who greedily awaits an update.
The last three chapters were a joy to discover and read after my absence from fan fiction since last summer. I had them all printed out and ready to go for weeks – and now I have got a spare moment or two, or three, to give your story the attention it deserves. However, imagine my absolute delight when I found that you had dedicated one of those chapters to me! I have never had anything dedicated to me before – I am really, really chuffed. That being said, have I ever told you how much I adore this fic? Given that I don’t even much like Ginny as a HP character, that is really saying something. She comes across as such a Mary Sue in canon, but you have given her, not only her humour and feistiness, but also a great deal of psychological depth (arising from her horrible experience with Riddle), so much so that your version of her surpasses that of JKR’s. Draco is a gem. I just feel sure that he will undergo a sort of redemption in Book 7, and you show us a sneak glimpse of what might be his better side. I now have found two more chapters to enjoy but I wanted to leave a review here before I go on to let you know how much I am liking it all.
just found this story- very good. I highly applaud your skilled efforts in writing about something so dark and horrible as child rape. I've seen the effects of those human monsters, and I don't think I would be able to create a fiction with that in it. Very descriptive story, I love your play of colors and how you weave them into the story like silk wrappings. I've now joined the group that eagerly awaits your evvery update!
thank you for updating!!! i think its a great chappie.i cant wait for more.
Yay, she heard almost all of their conversation!! I'm glad Severus let them settle the fight on their own, as they'll have to get along in his absence. Please don't kill him off! And thanks for updating.
That was a lovely and wonderful tale of how Severus helped Ginny at school! I can just see her keeping it a secret from her family and friends, just as easily as she kept the diary secret in her first year. Thanks for the explanation of how Riddle's pre-body could rape. I'm glad she punched out Draco for snooping into her memory uninvited, and I like how she still is friendly with Severus. I hope she was secretly awake and could hear everything Draco and Severus said. Thanks for updating!!
exactly what everybody else said. I loved it. tootles and can't wait for more.
I read all ten chapters in one sitting, and my eyes are protesting. This is by far THE BEST fic depicting the draco/ginny ship. I strongly encourage you continue because such a great story must be told. Not to mention that you're story is award material.
Extremely enjoyable story. Methinks I spied a phrase borrowed from another broody fictional character... Rochester, anyone?