I'm loving your portraly of SS as well as your portrayal of Ginny and Draco. The line about "She is going Molly!" was priceless.
One question though, since Ginny was kidnapped to the CoS at the end of her first year, why would she be statying with SS in her third year rather than her second?
Beautiful as always, I cant wait for the next update :)
It is always lovely to see that you updated... i love this story.i cant wait to see how it pans out.
hurry up and finish this rubbish! jk!!! its good.. but u need to finish it
i dont get this chapter of the story... will u explain??? its so confusing
ewwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! is all i can say about snivoluos kissin ginny!!! ewwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!
will u please let malfoy do something to ginny and let ginny obey!!!! i know she really liked him!
absolutelu lovely! i mean great or any other word that is a synonym to it.!!! although i always imagined hermione and draco together but oh well... this is good enough! i love it!!!! u need to intensify it a bit more!!!
Thanks so much for updating! I'm really enjoying this story and am so glad you haven't abandoned it. It doesn't seem to have suffered for lack of a beta. Nevertheless, if you would like one, email me at ljbutton at juno dot com if you're interested, and if you're not--no offense meant or taken!
I loved it! Espically the end, it was perfect. lol. well plz update soon. ur story is so wickidly awesome.
thank you for updating, i missed your story.
I Miss you!!!! i really would like to read more of this story soon.
I hope you are going to continue. I really like your story, the good and the bad parts. You've done a good job telling it. I look forward to more! Soon, I hope!
I find your story really interesting... when's the next chapter coming?
*frothing at the mouth for an update, before reminding herself that patience is a virtue*. Your premise is an interesting one, and I look forward to the next couple of chapters.
I have really enjoy reading this story, even this chapter that is very hard to read. I am excited to see what is going to happen next. I just hope some sort of happiness for Ginny, she is really having a bad few days. Great story!!! Looking forward to the next chapter
So what's this about Crapper's calming potion? How did Tom Riddle rape Ginny before he had a body? You're not going to make Draco marry Pansy after this, are you? I'm looking forward to hearing about Severus' history with Ginny. Thanks for updating, especially because it was such an emotionally difficult chapter for you to write.
Well done. That must have been hard, but you wrote it well. Certainly brought the point across to me! Please keep going!
Spine-tingling tension - love it. Don't change a thing!! At this moment, I wish I was Ginny in that bathtub!!
I love this story. Please get Draco away from Pansy. yeesh! Anxiously awaiting next update.
I've just discovered this and am loving it. The longer the better. Never had so much fun reading about Draco and Ginny. Please, please, please update soon!
The difference between Tom's thoughts from the past and the events of the present might have been clearer if the past thoughts were in italics rather than the regular type of the rest of the story. It was a bit confusing. The story, otherwise is good. I hate what Ginny is going through, but I'm confident you will get her out of it relatively unharmed.
I love this fic so far. I dont think it was too long, I actually thought it was just the right amount of build up. I cant wait for future chapters. Keep up the fantastic work :)
I think you're doing a good job of building Draco & Ginnny's friendship. Lucius is sure tiffed at his offspring isn't he? Molly's probably gone throught the roof at this point. Prof Snape's place? What an excellent place to hide! This is getting intriguing. More please!!
This is a great story. I had not found it before in the archive and am really enjoying getting aquainted. Unfortunately, the p codes here in chapter 3 were doing really weird things with the formating. It looked like an odd poem. I hope you don't mind - while I was reading, signed in as Senior Admin Mistress, - I took them out.
Estrilda
Author's Response: I appreciate you going in to fix the problem. I really don't know what was going on. Can you perhaps tell me why it is that sometimes entire parts of chapters will not load? This has happened on more than one ocassion. Are my chapters too long? Thanks for the read and the review.