[Report This]Date: 06/27/2005 01:57 am Title: Simple Knots
i love ur story it's got me addicted. i've been checking up on it on this site and dracoandginny.com. but i love this post. it is sweet, funny, and makes me feel sympathetic to both draco ad ginny at the same time.
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2005 08:36 pm Title: Simple Knots
Personally i thik its very good i'm glad you updated and i cant wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2005 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 1/2
can't wait for the next update - quite apart from a compelling plotline, the imagery is very rich, and it is easy to imagine the luxurious yet twisted surroundings Ginny finds herself in during the last chapter (and a half!). Have added this to my favourite stories and hope an update is coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2005 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5 1/2
This is quite a story you have going. As to your question, I think the thought progression went smoothly and logically. I'll definitely be awaiting another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2005 01:49 am Title: Chapter 5 1/2
Well, I sure hope Draco can keep Ginny safe - umm, he does know that Lucius wants Ginny too? Sheesh, Draco should've let Severus rescue Ginny and then he could've talked to her later. Oh well, I'll be waiting for your next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2005 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 1/2
I really like the new story line. It is not too different from the original plot, but the new plot lines are really intriguing. I really like this story and can't wait to see what is about to happen next. What will Draco do with Ginny after he left. She was glassy eyed which meant she had gone back into herself and is in panic mode again, what can Draco do to make her feel safe. And the biggest question is Draco really going to have to marry Pansy. I hope not, I really don't want that, Yuck!! (Shivering slightly at thought). Please update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2005 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 5 1/2
Thanks for the update- shows Draco more that two dimensional villain/"good guy". Made me scared for Ginny, and angery at her abuse. I (personally) would like to see some type of revenge against the men at this party, but I'm sure the whole purpose of making them evil is to make us hate them. You have done a good job of that.
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2005 11:15 am Title: Puss in the Corner
Is the chapter meant to stop mid-sentence? Would be a cool plot device, to be sure, but the last thing i get on the page is: "She hung limp on his arm while his sleek tongue invaded her mouth and" but no further. Is it meant to be like that? Other than that, the story is wonderful...detailed and rich in imagination, with fascinating central characters - especially Draco!
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2005 09:16 am Title: Puss in the Corner
I meant to read and review your new, amended chapter sooner but I have been away, then things got really hectic here. I have time today but as stupid FFNet won’t let me log on, I thought I would review here. It’s a much nicer site anyway. I like Crapper (who gave the elf such a cruel name, you dreadful woman?!) and her potions brewing ability. I wonder if Snape has use for an assistant and so will eventually rescue the poor thing? Lucius is more evil than I remember, and his likening of Voldemort to a Death Eater version of Jesus (our Lord etc) is truly hideous and sickening. The hunt scene was appalling. Your writing and descriptions of Ginny’s thoughts and feelings had me on the edge of my seat. Yes, I liked the echoes of her COS encounter with Lord Voldemort. I would imagine that is exactly what would come to mind to a previously abused girl – this ordeal would re-awaken the earlier nightmare for her. I was surprised though that Draco wouldn’t allow Snape to take her to safety (I believe he even surprised himself by his words). For a moment I was thinking this might have a malicious twist, and that Draco would turn out a baddie after all. However, the fact he wouldn’t allow Snape to have her shows us how much he cares for her. I am intrigued as how he will resolve the whole mess, and how Ginny will cope mentally with yet another assault to her person. This is, as ever, a joy to read. I hope you will keep your promise that you will write more soon. Oh, and finally – I love the way you write dialogue. There are many delicious interactions, but one of my favourites was: “I would rather be setting myself on fire with a blast-ended skrewt.” I wish I had written that!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2005 11:34 pm Title: Puss in the Corner
omg! plz plz plz plz update more soon. i really like ur story. it is so awesome! well g2g tootles. p.s. pllllllllllllllllllllllllllz?
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 11:21 pm Title: Puss in the Corner
Wow ... I'm used to authors ending a chapter on a cliffhanger to keep their readers interest ... but you stopped in midsentence. And what a place to stop, too. This story is great. I just stumbled onto this site today, and this is the first story I've read here, but I couldn't stop, I just devoured the whole thing. I can only hope that you update soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/03/2004 01:54 pm Title: Fat in the Fire
Squeak! I just read your reviews.. I believe I can offer you something to get you up-dating again...I will protect you from your reviewers! Neat idea, huh? Now, I got your back...WRITE! ahahaha. **please, ;-)
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2004 03:31 pm Title: Fat in the Fire
PLEASE DO NOT MAKE ME WAIT FIVE MONTHS! I loved this...am loving it ....and shall track you down and crucio you till you complete it! Hehehe...your own fault for having a smashing story!
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2004 03:21 pm Title: The Sawtooth Edge
OMG! what a excellent chapter...I loved the letter *I LOVE YOU MOM* hahaha, wonderful, excellenty! And the cherry coke...ooh now I am frizzying and ready to go!
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2004 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 2- Tumbling Stones
Oohh, another spiffying chapter! I love the way you describe draco...it makes my groin all hot and wobbley and ohh...okay maybe a tad TMI.
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2004 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh what a exciting begining, I was refered here by the SH board thingy and boy was I not disappointed! Love the twist I was thinking that draco was going to rape her and then this....on egde of seat now! NO you are not to flush it anywhere! Okay going to read next chappy!
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2004 10:28 am Title: Fat in the Fire
OMG - this is so well written and exciting! you can't leave it there - write more. Please!
[Report This]Date: 11/16/2004 06:25 am Title: Fat in the Fire
This is such a good story, I'm so glad it was mentioned on the yahoo group. I'm so anxious to see what happens next. ~Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2004 09:49 pm Title: Fat in the Fire
Good buidup in this chapter. Now please UPDATE so we can see what happens, whether Draco gets out of marrying Pansy, and what really happened to Ginny!!! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2004 07:40 am Title: The Sawtooth Edge
So far I've enjoyed your story very much. I really hope you are continuing writing. I don't usually read GW/DM since I don't think there's any good in Canon!Draco. But this fic has been added to my favourites.. :)
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2004 08:39 pm Title: The Sawtooth Edge
I have quickly become addicted, very good story
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2004 09:52 pm Title: The Sawtooth Edge
Excellently wrought plot! Love the ginny girl...dunno why though...
oh...and two tiny mistakes:
Damnit, the
girl had five older brothers!
Ginny has SIX older brothers (Bill, charlie, Percy, Fred, George and Ron...which one did ya miss? *smile*)
and "blonde" is feminine...if you're talking about a guy, it's blond (no e)
Can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2004 06:04 pm Title: The Sawtooth Edge
This is a great fic! You have a wonderful way of describing scenes, feelings, everything. More soon please!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2004 04:42 pm Title: The Sawtooth Edge
Great concept -- I've always liked DracoGinny as a pairing, and I'd like to see how this works out. One note, though: Ginny is described as having brown eyes in the second chapter and green eyes in the third. Make sure you go back and check on that. I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Yea, *sigh* I know. I plan on going back and correcting in the first two chappies but haven't gotten around to it yet. I have been reading so much fanfic, that I believed Ginny's eyes to be brown. They are brown is soooo many! Imagine my shock when I was re-reading HP book 2 and her eyes were described as bright green. Thanks for the reveiw. I love this story myself
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2004 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2- Tumbling Stones
This story is fabulous! I didn't noticed that it wasn't un-beta'd: it was that good. Please continue with this wonderful story because you've got something good with this.