Sexy, very strong Hermione. Good job.
Wow! Very well done! I like your style of writing, it's very descriptive. : ) First time I read something about this pairing and I really liked it. I enjoyed Harry being submissive. There's so much power in Hermione - authors should more often give her that kind of part you gave her. Great job. Hope you write more!
hehe, submissive harry. yumm
Very nicely done! I'm working on my own little Harry/Hermione smutlet (that I hope to have up here soon) ... so I was entranced with the pairing. Great job!
*groan*...wow...now THERE's the Hermione I like! Wow. The erotic scenes are very well written. Although I have the slight peculiar suspiscion that she's a little too Mary Sue...but that's just me, and overall, it was a wonderful and worth it 20 minutes. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: I think Hermione would be an awesome Dominatrix! Um, actually if there is a Mary-sue in that story it would be Harry and that is all i'm going to say.
Hermione is such a bad ass. Well written.
Author's Response: Thank you soo very much!!!