Date: 06/10/2012 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
different type of story. you might want to re-do chapter 5 because it came through as two long paragraphs making it hard to read.
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2011 10:59 am Title: Chapter 5
This is really interesting - a plausible alternative with some great character development & promising new characters too! It says complete though and it seems to be left hanging at chpt 5? I hope you finish it, would really enjoy reading the rest. You have a wonderful writing style.
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2010 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 4: Many Meetings
This is great so far, but it doesn't seem finished. Is there more?
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2008 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: Flights of Fancy
This is a very interesting start - I liked your take on Petunia, and the new characters. I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Lots more to come...
Date: 11/26/2008 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Calm
Dude,
Where's the rest of the story?
Author's Response: It's coming... there are 49 chapters. I can only post so much at one time!