Date: 03/28/2009 01:45 am Title: Chapter 14
I knew she was involved in someway other than how she was originally portrayed. Amazing job on this whole story. I'm so sad to see that it's over. Are you planning on doing a sequel or just leaving it here? Either option would be good.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Not a sequel, exactly, but something is planned :)
Thanks for reading!
Dari
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2009 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
*sniff, sniff* so...beautiful...
That was a very lovely ending! Can't wait for a sequel!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Thanks so much for reading my very first multi-chapter story. Everyone has been so lovely and encouraging, and I appreciate it more than words can say.
Dari
Date: 03/07/2009 01:56 am Title: Chapter 13
You like evil cliffies, don't you? Draco asks his question and you have him leave...not nice! Though I loved all of the non-verbal communication between the guys about Strommond's 'own sticky end.'
I was kind of surprised by the whole Warland Council and that Voldemort never went after him, I would've thought that Voldemort knew about the council and Warland before he went psycho. But who knows, well, you do, but that's beside the point.
Awesome job and please post more soon!
Author's Response:
Me?? Evil cliffies?? LOL Like you don't know the answer to that by now :)
I loved that line from the second movie, sticky end!
Warland ducked into the background when Voldemort started making waves. He was working from a different angle than Voldie, just as a lot of other purebloods were. It was enough that Warland just about disappeared, biding his time, I suppose :D
As always, thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Date: 02/23/2009 01:36 am Title: Chapter 12
*licks lips* Ooooooh, I LOVE yummy lemons! And that was a very yummy one! Awesome, awesome job. Though I have to agree with blondie_girl159, please post soon! Though I don't mind waiting at all. Keep up the amazing work.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
LOL, was it worth the wait?! I've another chapter being beta-ed as I write, and the LAST chapter is outlined. The end is near!
Thanks so much for letting me know what you think, I really appreciate it!
Dari
Date: 02/23/2009 01:18 am Title: Chapter 11
Finally! I'm so glad that Lucius and Narcissa are divorced! I loved the interaction between Draco and Lucius and I feel so sorry for Gobby! Awesome job and on to the next chapter.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
Yea for the divorce! Once Lucius makes up his mind, lol. One track mind. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story, more to come!
As always, thanks, Krystle for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
D: cliffie! no! update soon! (please)
Author's Response:
Gee Whiz! You say bring on the smut, I give you lots of lemons! Now you want another update! Sheesh!!!
LOL, you'll just have to wait with everyone else :D But I promise, it won't take too long ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2009 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
bring on the smutt!!!
Author's Response:
Oh dearie! Smut is sooooo on the way! Lots and lots of lovely lemons!!! Just had to do a bit of housecleaning first; you know, clean the bathroom, put fresh sheets on the bed, make a bowl of chocolate covered strawberries and chill a bottle of champagne ;)
Dari
Date: 02/12/2009 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like that the Lucius who viewed Severus' memory is more mature than the Lucius who actually walked in on Hermione and Severus. Amazing job on this chapter and I'm now even more curious to see what will happen between Hermione and Lucius and even Lucius and Severus now that Lucius has seen the memory. please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
What an intersting idea; Lucius walked out after seeing Hermione and Severus in bed. Lucius wrote about it in his journal, but he didn't write that he threatened him to a wizarding duel. In fact, he went back to talk to Severus and asked for the memory; thinking, perhaps that there was more to it than what he saw. Lots happens in the next chapter, and the end is only a couple chapters away!
As always, Krystle, thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Dari
Date: 02/06/2009 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
No fair! You can't just leave us hanging like that, it's not nice! Though I am very curious to see exactly what happened between Hermione and Severus. Great job and please post soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry for the cliffie! My muse tells me when I'm done, and it does me no good to try and write more. LOL, Hermione and Severus, everyone is so eager! Sure you want to know?? Next chapter. But don't say I didn't warn you... ;)
As always, thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review.
Dari
Date: 02/03/2009 12:22 am Title: Chapter 8
Well! I'm not sure what to say to most of the other than...amazing! I'm not shocked by Narcissa infidelity or Lucius 'turning' down Hermione a second time, though I wish he would have told that he didn't want her as just a lover, but more (I can see why he didn't though). Awesome job and please post more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks Krystle!! There is still a lot going on, lots more to uncover :) Hermione has not a lick of Slytherin in her, lol
As always, thank you for reading and leaving a review :D
Dari
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2009 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
this story is just getting better and better! update soon please!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a review, it means a lot!
Dari
Date: 01/29/2009 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, if you want to know what I think, then post more soon please! I really enjoy reading your story and I'm always excited to read it when I see that there is a post. Keel up the great work and let me know if you need at help with your story for any reason.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie, that is lovely of you! I try to post once a week, if the planets align and the third star to the left is twinkling, and, well... you know how it goes :)
Date: 01/27/2009 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well! You weren't kidding about the lemon! Amazing job and a couple more questions were answered. I'm curious to see what happens with Narcissa now that Lucius knows a) how she was during his trial and b) about his feelings for Hermione. Please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
LOTS more answers are on the way! The answers to Lucius' memory loss, what, or is, between Hermione and Severus, and Gobbert! Let's not forget about Gobbert! I like that little guy, lol.
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review, I truly appreciate it :) I'll be curious to find out what you think of the upcoming chapters, lol
Date: 01/22/2009 01:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Well, a few more questions answered, though Severus never quite answered Lucius' question about his use of Hermione's first name. Just by Lucius' reaction to that, shows that he's jealous on some level. I cannot wait to see what is in these journals that will answer more of Lucius' questions. Awesome job and please, please, please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
No, Severus didn't answer his questions, did he??
Another update is on the way, it will be in queue this weekend :)
Thank you so, so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review, I really appreciate it!
Dari
Date: 01/22/2009 12:58 am Title: Chapter 5
I thought I had left a review for this chapter, but apparently not! I feel so sorry for Lucius, for many things, but that the whole scene with Hermione in his bedroom being a dream was just plain mean! Though, I'm pretty sure that he'll live. I loved where she leaned into him by the window and him realizing that they had done that before. I'm very curious to see what happens with CelticMicro, love the name by-the-way, and to see what Lucius does now that he's pretty sure that Narcissa is trying to undermine him. Awesome job!
~Krystle Lynne~
PS: Off to the NEW chapter now!
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying the story :)
LOTS more story to come! Yes, Lucius will get over his time with Hermione being a dream. But there is a nice juicy lemon in the future, and this time, it's not a dream~
Thanks for reading and leaving a review, I appreciate it!
Dari
Date: 01/12/2009 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I feel so sorry for Lucius that it was only a dream and not real. I am glad to see that he had some of his questions answered and I'm curious to see what happens when he meets up with Severus. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Poor Lucius, only a dream, lol. Thanks for reading and taking the time to read a review, it means a lot! More answers and questions on the way :)
Date: 01/10/2009 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
As good as the other chapters, but something went wrong while uploading (I think), it's just one slab of text, and the italics aren't working. I didn't want to wait, so I read it the way it is now, but that's kinda hard...
Apart from that little hick-up, I love it... :)
Author's Response:
First, I'm so sorry you had trouble reading the chapter, how disappointing. I think it has been corrected. I hope so, at least~
In spite of that, you still left a wonderful review, so thank you very much! I am so glad you are enjoying the story. More to come!
Dari
Date: 01/06/2009 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well, this chapter answered a couple of questions. I hope more will be answered soon. Great job on this chapter and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
More answers are on the way, and a nice, big lemon, too ;)
Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Dari
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2008 12:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Of COURSE you need to talk! He'd be crazy to go to anyone else, other than his son, to figure this out. I'm curious to how Hermione fits into all of this, especially her just waltzing right into Malfoy Manor. Great job.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
LOL Poor Lucius is treading carefully, but going slightly crazy, that's for sure. How will he respond to the answers he receives, though? Hmm... I guess we'll find out over the next few chapters :D
Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Dari
[Report This]Date: 12/28/2008 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am very curious to see how this plans out and what exactly happened to Lucius to cause his large memory lapse. Great job and please post more soon.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
More questions and answers are on the way. Thanks for taking the time to read and review! Hope you had a lovely holiday.
Dari
Date: 12/16/2008 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am intrigued - can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. More questions and answers on the way :)