[Report This]Date: 10/10/2010 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Reasons
Waiting to read more.
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2010 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 29 – Talk about Punishment
Very good. Interested in reading more.
[Report This]Date: 08/05/2010 12:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train
Still waiting on the next chapter. Dying to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: I have to work this weekend(Fr-Su), but I try to upload a new chapter this evenening. Otherwise it will be added next monday. Sorry for the wait!
Sunny
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2010 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - On the Train
When do you thinbk you will be uploading the next chapter. I'm dying to know what happens next. I tried going on the other site but it made my computer crash.
Author's Response: I will upload the next chapter on sunday night, just for you. So it should show up at monday if the admins are fast. :)
I'm sorry you had problems going on fanfiction(dot)net.
Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/08/2010 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble
This is the first time I've reviewed your story. In fact, it might please you to know that I registered with Lumos just to review your story. :) I find your story utterly fascinating and apparently am not beyond shameless begging in hopes that you will continue the story. The character interactions, especially between Severus and Harry are absolutely fascinating and completely believable. Though when I first started reading, I found your timeline/express plot (Voldemort/horcruxes/final battle during second year) quite jarring but soon was able to appreciate the plot and character interactions for the rightness it was.
Please, please continue. I hope that this review helps to alleviate some of that depression from no feedback. Keep up the good work!
;) michanne
Author's Response: Thank you very much for that encouraging review! I will try to upload the next chapter this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2010 02:41 am Title: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble
More. More. More. I would love to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I will try to upload the next chapter this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2010 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble
I think your storyline is really good and I'm intriques as to what is going to happen next :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I will try to upload the next chapter this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2010 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 28 – Getting Into Trouble
Ooh, cliffhanger... Nice plot you have going, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I will try to upload the next chapter this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2010 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 27 - The Twins
I'm still here waiting for updates. Haven't been on recently yet I always look to see if there has been an update when I am.
This is a really good story and I enjoy reading and rereading it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2010 11:34 am Title: Chapter 27 - The Twins
Yeah, since I first saw the story I have followed it closely and it is fantastic. I have never seen such a good fan fiction, please keep posting!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2010 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 27 - The Twins
Oh, no, you must keep posting! This story is a rare one, in that most HP fanfic has the 'done to death' sort of plots, and this one is an original plot concept. Please keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 06:16 am Title: Chapter 24 – The Shopping
This series is really great. I csn't wait till you have more posted.
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2010 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 23 – Stupid Ron
I love the ending to this chapter and can't wait for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2010 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit
When do you think you will have the next chapter uploaded?
Author's Response: I will try to upload in the next two days. I have to work this weekend, so I don't know for sure when I can upload. If you read on fanfiction(dot)net as well, you could go on reading there because I'm very much ahead there! Thank you very much for the interest.
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2010 01:40 am Title: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit
So far this is a really good story. I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 03/16/2010 06:49 am Title: Chapter 22 – Remus' Visit
Hey!
Really enjoying this. You said that English isn't your first language, and whilst that isn't noticeable, it perhaps gives your posting a slightly more 'child like' voice - which works really well.
Keep posting!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 02/06/2010 04:50 am Title: Chapter 21 – Hard to Accept
It's great so far. Please keep updating. That bathroom is a very interesting idea. And it's nice to see Snape in a different light.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2010 03:47 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
I'm reading too, so keep it here please. It's a very good story, and the twins are cute. Your English is very good. Some of the dialogue is kinda awkward, but that will improve, because you are still learning. Overall I think you are well on your way to becoming a great writer. Thanks for writing this.
Alexsandria
Author's Response: Yes, I know some dialogs are awkward and I often write word repeats. I try to work on that problems, but I only had five years of English in school. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2010 07:50 am Title: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione
I think this is a good story.
The psychological effects are played out very well in this novel so far
x
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/23/2009 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Decorating
Oh please update with more soon. I am in love with this story after just finding it today!
Becca
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/30/2009 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Decorating
lol who on earth would want a doorknob that looked like Profesor Trelawney? I love the story!
Author's Response: Nobody would want one, ecept you want it to annoy other people. :) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2009 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 18 - James
Brilliant cant wait to view the next one
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad that there are still people interested in it! I will upload the next chapter in the next days.
Date: 10/25/2009 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 18 - James
I like how you have James encouraging Harry and convincing him to have therapy. It will take time but I think more time spent in a healthy environment with the Snapes will only help him. Very good story and I enjoy each update
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! So it is still worth to post here.
Date: 09/30/2009 10:45 am Title: Chapter 17 - Breakfast
Please continue with this story, you have me hooked! It's a pleasant change to see Harry getting along with Snape and him being part of his family. I will stay with it as long as you update!
Author's Response: I don't stop writing this story I just think about not posting on this side any longer, but as long as there are people who review, I will post. otherwise you just have to go to my FF account and read there. It's far ahead there.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2009 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Breakfast
I think it is a great story. Its unique and very different to all the stories out there.
Keep it up :D xx
Author's Response: I don't stop writing this story. I just think about not posting on this side any longer, but as long as there are people who review, I will post. Otherwise you just have to go to my FF account and read there. The story is far ahead there.