[Report This]Date: 09/26/2009 03:31 am Title: Chapter 17 - Breakfast
I don't like tea either, when I was young a was sick most of the time.
And my mother was believing that tea is good for you. I hate tea now, I hope that james can mixed it in another drink.
Iám looking forward for the interaction from ron and severus.
Author's Response: Yes, he can mix it with something else. You will see soon. :) Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 08/20/2009 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 16 – Problems Again
I have really been enjoying this story. I loved the bathroom that kept track of what the children did and didn't do. If you could invent one parents everywhere would pay lots of money to own one. BG! What I like most about this story is how it shows Snape in an entirely different light, it's a well written story. Awaiting further updates
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it! Sunny
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2009 06:23 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
This story is getting beter and better each time i read it :)
Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad that more than one person is reading this story here. Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 08/09/2009 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
Hello! I just registered with Sycophant Hex, and found your story today. I just love AU tales where Harry becomes part of Severus' family and I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyd what I read today. I find your OCs very interesting and believeable, and I particularly like the twins!
If you are no longer updating this story to this site, would you please let me know where you will be posting the rest of it in the future? I really would like to see what happens next!
Thanks for an enjoyable few hours of reading!
Author's Response: You can find this story (many chapters ahead) on fanfiction(dot)net. I use the same name there. Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2009 02:22 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
I find this story deligtful, and Iám always sorry that your upload is not freqeunt. But Iám normaly not a reviever because my writing is not that good. Please give us more
Author's Response: It is way to complicated for me to upload here because I need more than three betas to make a chapter ready for this site. Otherwise my chapters got rejected. Therefore I can only update as fast as my last beta is and that is very slow because she betaes for many poeple. :( Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2009 02:22 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
I find this story deligtful, and Iám always sorry that your upload is not freqeunt. But Iám normaly not a reviever because my writing is not that good. Please give us more
Date: 07/16/2009 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II
Poor guy, doesn't know what to do with all the space in his new room. I loved hearing what the twins' room looked like. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: To be honest I only post my story here for you. You seem to be the only one interested in it. If you ever stop reviewing I will stop posting. It's so much work for me to get the chapters ready to be accepted here. I had 5 betas on it and it didn't get accepted and only one beta is capable of correcting it so that it is accepted after some changes. It's frustrating. This beta is a very busy on and so I get a new chapter after weeks. I upload them as soon as I get them back from my beta. I only can remind you again that on fanfiction(dot)net you can find more chapters. Thank you very much for your reviews!
Date: 06/26/2009 01:04 am Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I
Kind of a filler chapter, but not in a bad way. It was nice to see how their chambers were laid out and to hear about who is guarding each of the offices. I love that Harry has an interest in Potions. I'm very curious to see where that leads to. Great job.
~Krystle Lynne~
PS: I'll check out fanfiction when I get a chance this weekend.
Date: 06/16/2009 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home
YAY!!! Harry's there safely...though I do feel very bad for Severus for all of the manipulating that Albus and Ivy are doing. Although, he's supposed to be in bed. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
PS: Where else do you post?
Author's Response: I post on fanfiction.net under the same name! There are many more stories of me and this story has much more chapters over there!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2009 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 12 – Harry's New Home
I must say I'm really enjoying this story. Thank god Harry's in a safe home now. Looking foward to see how Harry handles being a big brother.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2009 06:24 am Title: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress
really good :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 05/31/2009 01:27 am Title: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress
He's out of the hospital wing at least. I'm very curious to see how the conversations between Harry and Remus and Severus go. Great job and please post more soon.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: I'm just updating it here because of you! Otherwise I wouldn't do it any longer as nobody else seems to be interested. So as long as you let me know you are still reading I will post the chapters as soon as my second beta has corrected them. Thank you very much!
Date: 05/26/2009 01:34 am Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown
Ivy and James should not be in the same room at the same time again...too much manipulation going on at once! I really wasn't surprised by Ron's reaction, just would have been nice if he could have been a little bit more tactful, but that's Ron for you. Great job and please post more soon.
Author's Response: I really like Ron, but I think he speaks before he thinks. He is still Harry's best friend! Thanks for your review!
Date: 05/21/2009 12:40 am Title: Chapter 9 -- The Talk with Albus
FINALLY!!!! A post!! Just giving you a hard time.
This will sound weird, but this was a sweet chapter...not because someone finally had to get it through Harry's head that he's going to have to go through therapy (though I agree that Dumbledore was the one to tell him), but because of the way that Albus treated the situation. I know he is a very kind and gentle man and has an even softer spot for Harry, but he made me smile.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: I will be able to upload the next chapter soon! Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2009 06:09 am Title: Chapter 8 – Best Friends
Cant wait for the next one.
Really enjoying this story
Author's Response: Thanks for still reading. My second beta needs some time to correct the chapters. I'm sorry. On fanfiction(dot)net it is already at chapter 25, but unfortunately with a lot of mistakes.
Date: 04/20/2009 01:04 am Title: Chapter 8 – Best Friends
He ALMOST got to tell, but not quite. I loved Hermione's comment about Harry still looking bad. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Thanks for still reading. My second beta needs some time to correct the chapters. I'm sorry. On fanfiction(dot)net it is already at chapter 25, but unfortunately with a lot of mistakes.
Date: 03/28/2009 01:56 am Title: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape
I like Severus' wife, she's a very nice lady, although I would like to know a little bit more about her other than being nice, Severus' wife, and Dumbledore's daughter. I'm a detail oriented person and I'm just curious to know more about her.
Great job and I'm very much looking forward to Harry's conversation with Hermione and Ron.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Their will come more about her in later chapters! If you want to know something special, contact me over my profile on fanfiction(dot)net. You can push the message button on the top of my profile there.
Date: 03/09/2009 12:38 am Title: Chapter 6 – The Examination Part Two
Oh gosh, poor Harry! Though I am curious as to what is wrong with Severus. Awesome job and keep up the great work. Please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: You will see soon! Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/22/2009 11:40 am Title: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One
I really like your story, can't wait for more!
Update soon! Please!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 02/22/2009 01:37 am Title: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One
At the end of the chapter, I don't know who to feel more sorry for, Harry or Severus. Great job and please post more when you can.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2009 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 5 – The Examination, Part One
awww, poor harry...update soon? please?
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I still have problems getting my stories to the validation system, but I hope I can update soon!
Date: 02/09/2009 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey
Who has showed up to help that caused Harry to back away and Severus to stand up the way he did? I'm very curious to see who it is. Great job!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: I still have problems to come throught the validation system and so can't tell when I can manage to update here. :(
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2009 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey
...poor harry! D: update soon please I love this story so much
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I still have problems with validation of my story, so I can't say when I will be possible to submit the next chapter! I have to find another beta first!
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2009 10:58 am Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey
Brilliant! Cant wait for the next one to come out!
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Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I still have problems with validation of my story, so I can't say when I will be possible to submit the next chapter! I have to find another beta first!
Date: 01/26/2009 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation
Loved it :) update again soon.
Author's Response: I have problems to get my chapters validated here. I'm still looking for another qualified beta to check them.
Thanks for your review!