Clever....very clever and rather charming.......I hope you continue
Wonderfully funny a breath of fresh air in dealing with miss mary sue. Please do some more.
OMG!! Loved this very fun. Thinking of doing any more??? Please.
What a great concept. Very imaginative and .......personal!
That is so cool!!! I'm going back in to do it again!! Kisses GrrArrg
Very, very smart! Bravo!
This is fantastic. It matches so many of my personal daydreams -- you should see the grin on my face. :) A small note: you might want to change your form to say "name of a *female* friend."
I think I'll have to have this grin surgically removed from my face. That was the most fun I've had in days! :-)
that was brilliant!!! PWP's are fun... but finally, I'm the co-star with Severus instead of dear Hermione. *dies happy* You need to do another one of these. Please?
Whee. I am such a klutz, I put in a male friend's name and lapsed into giggles when he was Miss Smith - so now you know why I don't write - I can't even fill in the blacks correctly. Oh and it was great to have choices for hair, eyes, etc. Who'd have thought our Severus would have a thing for lavender hair and pink eyes. Thanks for the ride; it was fun.
That was brillant, the perfect MarySue and a great writing. And The best is Snape is finally MINE ;-))) Thank you for this funny pice of work linthal
Tee-hee, that was fun... especially that I had written 'Severus Snape' as the guy I wanted to date... "Boy is a imbecile", oh yes :) Great work, Ferv, and thank you for the laugh in the dribble! Ys
"OMG. That was like, so kewl! I mean, he was all sweet, and of couse the girl had my name and everything! And it was HOT and I mean, like, it really rocks, you know? Cuz it was so kewl!!!" *grin* Seriously Ferv, that was really funny. It had so many of the classic elements of a Mary Sue - the cliches, the bad writing style, the OOC-ness... Very fun - thanks for the laughs. ~ LS
Oh, gogs, this is hysterical! Well done!
great, just great...you've achieved what others have only hinted at in their fanfics. Bravo!!!
Oh Thank You!!! I can die happy now!!!!!!
That was amazing! So cool...you are genius
.... If there were a higher rating, I would have given you a 100... I loved it! ^_^
Oh gods. Fervesco, you are a genious! A bloody genious! That is brilliant. Are you planning another? If you were- Mmm! Thank you, that made my day!
I can't beleive that you gave me a go with Severus!! Really, that was brilliant! I laughed my ass off!
You know I love it... I was one of your test victimes :P Last night I was a little short with words... too sleepy. I loved to be a Mary Sue and have Severus! I'm going to send the link to the poor friend I used as a dunderhead so she can have her revenge making me the stupid one... And it was funny to read that Severus said "Boy is an imbecile" about Draco :P Great work Ferv!
Ferv, this is absolutely clever. I had a lot of fun filling with the absolute most rediculous answer for each option. Thanks for the fun. Mwahahahahahahaha
That was fun. You should get MM to make a permanent link for it here!
Ah, I can finally get Severus! LOL! Now I have to go back and make myself have violet eyes and silver hair... then I can be the ULTIMATE Mary Sue!! Loved it - this was great - and I sent the link to my friend so she can make me be the dunderhead instead ;).
That's bloody fantastic. In the form, however, it says to choose your house but there's nothing to choose. I didn't notice any blanks in the story it generated so I'm assuming you started to use it, decided not to and forgot to remove the option from the form. Otherwise. it's loads of fun. I actually wrote a short story last week for a friend who had to do the exact thing for an assignment. Your story is ever so much better.