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Reviewer: Lavinia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2004 02:57 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Clever....very clever and rather charming.......I hope you continue

Reviewer: madamshark Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2004 02:54 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Wonderfully funny a breath of fresh air in dealing with miss mary sue. Please do some more.

Reviewer: Fi Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2004 12:33 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

OMG!! Loved this very fun. Thinking of doing any more??? Please.

Reviewer: MadAboutHarry Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 08:25 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

What a great concept. Very imaginative and .......personal!

Reviewer: GrrArrg Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 07:13 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

That is so cool!!! I'm going back in to do it again!! Kisses GrrArrg

Reviewer: Clare Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 05:40 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Very, very smart! Bravo!

Reviewer: Peri Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 01:42 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

This is fantastic. It matches so many of my personal daydreams -- you should see the grin on my face. :) A small note: you might want to change your form to say "name of a *female* friend."

Reviewer: innerfeline Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 12:48 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

I think I'll have to have this grin surgically removed from my face. That was the most fun I've had in days! :-)

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 09:10 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

that was brilliant!!! PWP's are fun... but finally, I'm the co-star with Severus instead of dear Hermione. *dies happy* You need to do another one of these. Please?

Reviewer: Estrilda Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 08:17 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Whee. I am such a klutz, I put in a male friend's name and lapsed into giggles when he was Miss Smith - so now you know why I don't write - I can't even fill in the blacks correctly. Oh and it was great to have choices for hair, eyes, etc. Who'd have thought our Severus would have a thing for lavender hair and pink eyes. Thanks for the ride; it was fun.

Reviewer: linthal Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 08:12 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

That was brillant, the perfect MarySue and a great writing. And The best is Snape is finally MINE ;-))) Thank you for this funny pice of work linthal

Reviewer: Ys Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 04:55 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Tee-hee, that was fun... especially that I had written 'Severus Snape' as the guy I wanted to date... "Boy is a imbecile", oh yes :) Great work, Ferv, and thank you for the laugh in the dribble! Ys

Reviewer: Lorena Snape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 03:00 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

"OMG. That was like, so kewl! I mean, he was all sweet, and of couse the girl had my name and everything! And it was HOT and I mean, like, it really rocks, you know? Cuz it was so kewl!!!" *grin* Seriously Ferv, that was really funny. It had so many of the classic elements of a Mary Sue - the cliches, the bad writing style, the OOC-ness... Very fun - thanks for the laughs. ~ LS

Reviewer: Heksje Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 02:18 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Oh, gogs, this is hysterical! Well done!

Reviewer: Linda Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 12:18 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

great, just great...you've achieved what others have only hinted at in their fanfics. Bravo!!!

Reviewer: Desa Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2004 12:02 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Oh Thank You!!! I can die happy now!!!!!!

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 10:16 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

That was amazing! So cool...you are genius

Reviewer: Astra Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 09:06 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

.... If there were a higher rating, I would have given you a 100... I loved it! ^_^

Reviewer: Saradas Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 08:51 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Oh gods. Fervesco, you are a genious! A bloody genious! That is brilliant. Are you planning another? If you were- Mmm! Thank you, that made my day!

Reviewer: jkrazed Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 06:03 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

I can't beleive that you gave me a go with Severus!! Really, that was brilliant! I laughed my ass off!

Reviewer: Maddy Riddle Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 05:26 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

You know I love it... I was one of your test victimes :P Last night I was a little short with words... too sleepy. I loved to be a Mary Sue and have Severus! I'm going to send the link to the poor friend I used as a dunderhead so she can have her revenge making me the stupid one... And it was funny to read that Severus said "Boy is an imbecile" about Draco :P Great work Ferv!

Reviewer: nicklebagoffunk, KOW Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 04:27 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Ferv, this is absolutely clever. I had a lot of fun filling with the absolute most rediculous answer for each option. Thanks for the fun. Mwahahahahahahaha

Reviewer: amethyst Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 03:35 pm Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

That was fun. You should get MM to make a permanent link for it here!

Reviewer: WendyNat Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 11:13 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

Ah, I can finally get Severus! LOL! Now I have to go back and make myself have violet eyes and silver hair... then I can be the ULTIMATE Mary Sue!! Loved it - this was great - and I sent the link to my friend so she can make me be the dunderhead instead ;).

Reviewer: librarianhawk Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2004 10:31 am Title: Ferv's Ultimate Mary Sue

That's bloody fantastic. In the form, however, it says to choose your house but there's nothing to choose. I didn't notice any blanks in the story it generated so I'm assuming you started to use it, decided not to and forgot to remove the option from the form. Otherwise. it's loads of fun. I actually wrote a short story last week for a friend who had to do the exact thing for an assignment. Your story is ever so much better.

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