[Report This]Date: 01/26/2010 06:56 pm Title: chapter 10 - Marauders
Wait what happened to the rest? I'm enthralled by this story. It's touching, heart warming and very well written.
[Report This]Date: 10/23/2007 01:26 am Title: chapter 10 - Marauders
Awww. This is so sweet. and interesting too. I hope there will be more.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2005 06:21 pm Title: chapter 10 - Marauders
What can I say? I just love the story. It is wonderful and I would love to know how it goes on *S*
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2004 10:28 pm Title: chapter 9 - Infirmary
Great story...you are an excellent writer, nd your ideas are quite novel. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2004 01:41 pm Title: Missing
detail is important but sometimes manipulation can be a beautiful thing, so hurry up already!!!! I'm feening!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2004 01:13 pm Title: Missing
"He had never kissed anyone before, but hoped he was doing it right" If this happened after fifth year, then it is a mistake. He has kissed someone. IF it is before fifth year, then it would make his experience in the fifth year (OotP) seem strange. Can't you change it to "He had never been this intimate with someone" or something like that?
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2004 12:59 pm Title: chapter 4 ~ Dreams
" 'He does now.' Professor Trisstt and Harry both stood and spun around to find Professor Snape standing behind them" This paragraph (tender gesters and kissing in front of a student... hated Potter, above all!) seems OOC for Snape. Can't he approach her when she's alone after having heard what she said?
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2004 12:55 pm Title: chapter 4 ~ Dreams
“She was quite fond of him really, and helped him with some class work, as he helped her with potions." This part is at odds with OotP. I don't know if you've read the fifth book, but the only part where Snape and Evans show up together, makes it difficult to believe that they would help each other in school work. Is it possible to have Snape have a crush on Evans without them studying together?
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2004 11:24 am Title: Missing
i love it when men fall completly under our power! such a high!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2004 01:14 am Title: Meeting
Ok, it was ok, but seriously, you must spell "Sirius"'s name correctly. It's getting annoying.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2004 12:10 pm Title: Chimera
How long has this been posted? I can't believe no one's reviewed. I like the story, and I'm very interested in seeing where this "shared dream" stuff is going. I thought at first that your Viviane might be somehow tied in with Viviane Chance, but yours is a much gentler creature. What in her past qualifies her to teach DADA? Please write more.
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2004 06:07 pm Title: Viviane 2
yay! can i have some more, please? i love when things from their past get brought up and though I do love Sirius, it's good to be reminded he was a right berk
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2004 02:59 pm Title: chapter 4 ~ Dreams
Very nice story so far. I like the different POVs. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2004 03:17 pm Title: Meeting
I'm certainly enjoying this story! Please update. I don't have any constructive criticism for you. I like the way you are alternating their points of view in each chapter though.