What an arresting image you painted, of her wearing nothing but a snake and a diamond! Very potent image, indeed. (Although strictly speaking, it was a snake, a diamond and an apple;-) Thanks for an intense little fic!
oh.....well i didnt really expect that to go anywhere to be honest ( no offense ) but after reading that....holy shit thats coolies XD i reckon shes tonks. coz she was talking about remus.... but thats jst a guess. good work.
Dude-! Who is she? I gotta know!
This is so well-written, so evocative and full of description. You have a knack for describing bodily senses and the thoughts that accompany them. Just lovely, I'd say, any time of the year.
I have read this a couple of times and I am dying to know who the woman is. She is obviously a staff member but which one? I have some ideas but the hair color is wrong.
ooooooooooooo i liked this!!! are you going to finish it???? pretty please???
Snape. Is. Fucking. Hot. God, that made me so hot. XD
Wow! That's not only very well written, but very hot too. I loved it a lot.
WOW!!! Where do I get a snake painting??? I would be Severus's pet any day, HA-HA!!!! Great story!
wow that was some story. Severus Snapes character rang clear and true for me all the way through it. Great work.
A delightful little bit of hot Snapishness...
Wow! Terrific...!
God! You are EVIL! This needed a towel warning!
Whew! *fans self with mouse mat* Why doesn't my man buy me diamonds for my belly button? Why doesn't SNAPE buy me diamonds for my belly button? This is a very lovely little PWP but it could easily be worked into a plot... you could write a whole story with this woman. Go on, you know you want to.
JUST what I needed before bed!