excellent story, and i love how you ended it. This was a good descrip of Snape and I liked your original character, I think that was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it
waaaaahhhhh! I need a tissue! Such a sweet saddness......
Loved it though.
Author's Response: I'm really pleased you liked it... thanks for the review!
Beautifully written. A lovely story. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this! I'm writing another story now, and I'll be posting in Occlumency. Hope to see you there!
What a beautiful story. I love the fact that Snape is both in character and sympathetic. The imagery of him falling in love was delicate and precise and perfect.
I also like how you managed to weave a muggle into the magical world. It's always amazed me that there are so many people in the HP Universe who seem to delight in deluding themselves.
Truly a wonderful story. Thank you.
Author's Response: What a great review! Thanks so much! It really made my day. I'm starting a new fic now, but it's just a skeleton so far.
Sorry, too busy crying to write much. Loved it. Perfect.
Author's Response: LOL! What a great review, thanks!!
Had a tear in my eye - so sad bittersweet.
Overall a wonderful story - Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks so very much for your wonderful reviews! You're such a great reader... so encouraging. If you have the time, I invite you to read "INdebted to a Hufflepuff" in the Occlumancy section.
Ah so sweet but can't he say the words? lol
Author's Response: He's too proud to make declarations of love. It's so hard to make a romance wth him and keep him in character! Thanks so much for all the great reviews! I invite you to read my next Snape fic in Occlumancy ("Indebted to a Hufflepuff")
Great chapter
No why did he run away??? lol
Author's Response: He's a very proud man.
Great chapter again, didn't expect that twist - well done
Author's Response: Thanks! How do you like Loyola?
Oh no she's leaving Nooo!
Author's Response: Don't worry! I'm a total romantic... I won't waste your time or mine with long separations and fillers.
Liked the kink - Snape's got it bad - hasn't he?
Author's Response: Yes, he does. Glad you liked the lemmons. Like I said, it's not easy.
Cool, she's in lust but she's not completely blinded by it. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, she' in love. And she thinks that a Wizard could not possibly love a Muggle... least of all Snape.
So has Snape caught the love bug, without a potion? Will he admit he's turned on by a muggle lol
Author's Response: It's a hard thing to admit, but he knows himself well.
Love the lemons but where can it go from here?
Author's Response: Thanks! Lemmons are not easy to write. So many quality lemmons can be found in this site alone. It's hard not to just churn out more of the same.
Ok he's trying - great chapter
Author's Response: Yes... he finally gave in.
Great chapter, wow she has self control. I'm so glad they didn't just jump on each other.
Author's Response: They will... soon.
Oh what are they going to do - my mind is working overtime on this so I'll just read on and find out
Author's Response: It can't last much longer...
Ooh someone's got to help help prepferably Snape
Hot!!!!!!!!
Oh poor love. Things just keep getting worse still there are worse things than being in Lust with Sevvie
Author's Response: Hence this web site ;-)
Great chapter as always nice to see Remus back at Hogwarts. And noticing Snape's eyes Hmm? lol
Author's Response: Well, I suppose a closed environment like that is like a sewing circle. Gossip is the main entertainment during the school year.
Oh I could stop laughing, I could really relate to that, I would want anyone wandering around in my body without...er...being dressed properly
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for thye reviews!
Oh Snape watching her? Or is it someone else? And wah is Dumbledore going to do with the research. I can't wait to find out
Author's Response: Well, you've read it already, so I can tell you it's Snape watching.
I love your OC. She's great gives as good as she get - must really wined Snape up.
Author's Response: She's not harsh, or cunning, but she has her moments.