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Reviewer: wiccawitch Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2006 11:38 am Title: Chapter 23 - Epilogue

excellent story, and i love how you ended it. This was a good descrip of Snape and I liked your original character, I think that was really good.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: Drow_Crazy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2005 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Epilogue

waaaaahhhhh! I need a tissue! Such a sweet saddness...... Loved it though.

Author's Response: I'm really pleased you liked it... thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sunny9847 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Epilogue

Beautifully written. A lovely story. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this! I'm writing another story now, and I'll be posting in Occlumency. Hope to see you there!

Reviewer: greylady Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 01:26 am Title: Chapter 23 - Epilogue

What a beautiful story. I love the fact that Snape is both in character and sympathetic. The imagery of him falling in love was delicate and precise and perfect. I also like how you managed to weave a muggle into the magical world. It's always amazed me that there are so many people in the HP Universe who seem to delight in deluding themselves. Truly a wonderful story. Thank you.

Author's Response: What a great review! Thanks so much! It really made my day. I'm starting a new fic now, but it's just a skeleton so far.

Reviewer: maria_snape Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Epilogue

Sorry, too busy crying to write much. Loved it. Perfect.

Author's Response: LOL! What a great review, thanks!!

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 08:34 am Title: Chapter 23 - Epilogue

Had a tear in my eye - so sad bittersweet. Overall a wonderful story - Thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thanks so very much for your wonderful reviews! You're such a great reader... so encouraging. If you have the time, I invite you to read "INdebted to a Hufflepuff" in the Occlumancy section.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 08:24 am Title: Chapter 22 - Walk to the Lake

Ah so sweet but can't he say the words? lol

Author's Response: He's too proud to make declarations of love. It's so hard to make a romance wth him and keep him in character! Thanks so much for all the great reviews! I invite you to read my next Snape fic in Occlumancy ("Indebted to a Hufflepuff")

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 08:16 am Title: Chapter 21 - Triumph

Great chapter

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Date: 09/12/2004 08:11 am Title: Chapter 20 - Mercurial Orb

No why did he run away??? lol

Author's Response: He's a very proud man.

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Date: 09/12/2004 08:05 am Title: Chapter 19 - Diagon Alley

Great chapter again, didn't expect that twist - well done

Author's Response: Thanks! How do you like Loyola?

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 08:00 am Title: Chapter 18 - Christmas Gift Left Behind

Oh no she's leaving Nooo!

Author's Response: Don't worry! I'm a total romantic... I won't waste your time or mine with long separations and fillers.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:56 am Title: Chapter 17 - More Forceful

Liked the kink - Snape's got it bad - hasn't he?

Author's Response: Yes, he does. Glad you liked the lemmons. Like I said, it's not easy.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:45 am Title: Chapter 16 - Try Again

Cool, she's in lust but she's not completely blinded by it. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Unfortunately, she' in love. And she thinks that a Wizard could not possibly love a Muggle... least of all Snape.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:39 am Title: Chapter 15 - The Plan

So has Snape caught the love bug, without a potion? Will he admit he's turned on by a muggle lol

Author's Response: It's a hard thing to admit, but he knows himself well.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:29 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Night

Love the lemons but where can it go from here?

Author's Response: Thanks! Lemmons are not easy to write. So many quality lemmons can be found in this site alone. It's hard not to just churn out more of the same.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:18 am Title: Chapter 13 - The Offer

Ok he's trying - great chapter

Author's Response: Yes... he finally gave in.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:13 am Title: Chapter 12 - Creator of Potion

Great chapter, wow she has self control. I'm so glad they didn't just jump on each other.

Author's Response: They will... soon.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 07:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - Relentless Strain

Oh what are they going to do - my mind is working overtime on this so I'll just read on and find out

Author's Response: It can't last much longer...

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Date: 09/12/2004 07:01 am Title: Chapter 10 - Research Into Remedies

Ooh someone's got to help help prepferably Snape

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Date: 09/12/2004 06:55 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Strain of Composure

Hot!!!!!!!!

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Date: 09/12/2004 06:47 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Fair

Oh poor love. Things just keep getting worse still there are worse things than being in Lust with Sevvie

Author's Response: Hence this web site ;-)

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 06:41 am Title: Chapter 7 - School Starts

Great chapter as always nice to see Remus back at Hogwarts. And noticing Snape's eyes Hmm? lol

Author's Response: Well, I suppose a closed environment like that is like a sewing circle. Gossip is the main entertainment during the school year.

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Date: 09/12/2004 06:35 am Title: Chapter 6 - Summer with the Order

Oh I could stop laughing, I could really relate to that, I would want anyone wandering around in my body without...er...being dressed properly

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for thye reviews!

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 06:26 am Title: Chapter 5 - Magic Cancellation

Oh Snape watching her? Or is it someone else? And wah is Dumbledore going to do with the research. I can't wait to find out

Author's Response: Well, you've read it already, so I can tell you it's Snape watching.

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Date: 09/12/2004 06:21 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Tower

I love your OC. She's great gives as good as she get - must really wined Snape up.

Author's Response: She's not harsh, or cunning, but she has her moments.

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