Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous.
umm im astonished wow its a great story
please finish this ... i know that it already is... or perhaps it seems like it.. buut there are many many many more good things u can put... welll i liked it
I read this when you posted it elsewhere, and liked it then. I've just found it again here, and couldn't do anything else other than read it again. The setting, tone and hopeful future at the end are great. That the arc goes from dark, self-pity to fruitful happiness is just great. I could actually see Ron being so hateful to Hermione out of blustering anger.
I liked it very much... except the end.
Well, I loved the story right up until the ending. The whole Hermione-having-a-baby thing was too soon for my liking. However, I did like the premise of the fic, and it was well-written.
I liked this. I thought that your damaged Draco was more redeemable than others I've read. Good job.