[Report This]Date: 11/02/2004 08:34 am Title: Chapter 7 A High Price
nice foreshadowing
[Report This]Date: 11/02/2004 08:28 am Title: Chapter 5 All That Glitters
I feel sorry for poor Gustov. I wondered at first why they were both in Slytherin when neither really wanted to be there. I guess the Sorting Hat thought Gustov and Lucius could change the attitudes of the house.
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2004 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 8. Bereft
Poor Lucius, consumed by anger, grief, and the glamour he uses to protect him. Goodbye humanity!
[Report This]Date: 08/07/2004 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 7 A High Price
Splendid new chapter. And a splendid new beginning for Lucius, as well. And the price? Oh, I think you're going to let us know what _that_ will be...
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2004 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 Paris, Encore Une Fois
You've got a fantastic, classical style, it puts the whole story into really interesting frame. I love your story, please keep writing!
Author's Response: Hello, Atropa! I'm not as quick to update this fic, but it will be updated soon! Blessings, Niamh
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2004 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 6 Paris, Encore Une Fois
Wow! Steamy stuff, eh? I really like this story, its interesting, and poigniant. I'd love to read more soon! Estriel xx
[Report This]Date: 06/27/2004 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1 Overture
Just to add--though normally I avoid fics with rape/incest, I can see how in this case it builds a valuable back-story. You depict the child's brutalising by his father with great stylistic restraint and compassion. ~~D'Arcy
[Report This]Date: 06/26/2004 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 6 Paris, Encore Une Fois
You write beautifully and have created a rich and intriguing back-story for Lucius. If you're not careful, we're going to stop thinking of him as a villain and start to fall in love with him! Cheers, D'Arcy
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2004 12:00 am Title: Chapter 6 Paris, Encore Une Fois
I can't believe that you're not getting more reviews for this. This story is fantastic! Please continue!!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2004 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 Overture
Really well written, I thought it was good, but is it seriously rated G?
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2004 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 4 Hogwarts
Oops! You completely fooled me! Well done; your pronouns are a work of art. (bows to the master)
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2004 10:18 am Title: Chapter 4 Hogwarts
Well well, what a clever lady you are! There was I, like many others I hope, assuming this poor abused child was young Severus. Wonderfully descriptive story, very lyrical. Please keep writing. I will be your devoted slave.
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2004 12:49 am Title: Chapter Three Sanctuary
And GotSnape calls ME the Queen of Pronouns....But I am certain I know who this small child is. This is a wonderful start to a promising story. I cannot wait for more. I love the rich bckground you are giving - the lineage, the legacy. Marvelous!
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2004 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 Overture
Ooh. What a gorgeous depiction of the young Severus. More, please?