[Report This]Date: 09/09/2007 09:28 pm Title: Day Six
This has always been one of my favourite pieces on Lumos. I'm a bit of a biker chick at heart (only a bit!) and I really liked the descriptions of Daytona. Also, the characterisation was spot-on. The development rolled at a steady pace and you managed to give a meaningful reason for what was otherwise an excuse to take a shy woman out of her environment and record her reactions. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I think this is brilliant :)
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2005 06:18 am Title: Day Six
Absolutely fab. The mix of Americanism and Brit language wsa so well balanced. I really love this and the disclaimer comments had me laughing every time!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2005 06:21 pm Title: Day Six
So cute!!! Seriously, good job. You made me love Sybill and ... well, almost like Sirius (just kidding Andrian!) Bravo!
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 06:34 pm Title: Day Six
Wow! I really liked it! Great job to you both! It flowed well & was extremely well written!
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2004 07:39 pm Title: Day Six
Great story and very original. Can't wait to read anything you write in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you. We've both published individually on various of SHex's sub-sites under author names Andrian and WiccaRowan - have a look around for our stuff (plug plug).
[Report This]Date: 09/25/2004 11:59 am Title: Day Six
Awww... so cute. I was really annoyed that I pretty much missed out on DBBW this year... but a friend of mine who went gave me a ride on a purple Harley, so that was fun. (I lived in Orlando for three months beginning of this year.) Wouldn't mind a sequel, either... this Bear guy intrigues me. ;)
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing - we've had a pathetic amount of people read this story so it's nice someone liked it! Hope we were reasonably accurate with Bike Week, neither of us having been! There may well be a Bear-related sequel somewhere in the not-too-distant future.... x WiccaRowan