This has always been one of my favourite pieces on Lumos. I'm a bit of a biker chick at heart (only a bit!) and I really liked the descriptions of Daytona. Also, the characterisation was spot-on. The development rolled at a steady pace and you managed to give a meaningful reason for what was otherwise an excuse to take a shy woman out of her environment and record her reactions. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I think this is brilliant :)
Great story and very original. Can't wait to read anything you write in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you. We've both published individually on various of SHex's sub-sites under author names Andrian and WiccaRowan - have a look around for our stuff (plug plug).
Awww... so cute. I was really annoyed that I pretty much missed out on DBBW this year... but a friend of mine who went gave me a ride on a purple Harley, so that was fun. (I lived in Orlando for three months beginning of this year.) Wouldn't mind a sequel, either... this Bear guy intrigues me. ;)
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing - we've had a pathetic amount of people read this story so it's nice someone liked it! Hope we were reasonably accurate with Bike Week, neither of us having been! There may well be a Bear-related sequel somewhere in the not-too-distant future.... x WiccaRowan