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Reviewer: crazymarie111 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2010 11:34 am Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

Well, this was a pretty amazing story, that kept me up reading till the wee hours of the morning. My husband was worried I wasn't comming to bed! I hope you're working on the sequel. I would love to read more of your work.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that you liked my story so much!!! I've been busy for a long time because of my thesis (that I must defend this week), but I really will write the sequel. I actually wrote a few passages, but didn't find a moment to continue. So it's just a question of time, but I certainly won't give up! I miss Katarina and Severus! :) They'll be back for sure!!!

Reviewer: crazymarie111 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2009 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

Wonderful! I will now go look for all other stories you've written.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! Well, this was the only story I wrote, but I'm currently writing a sequel for Swept from the Past. Maybe I'll be able to post a chapter in a couple of months, when I find time to write more! :) So be patient, Severus and Katarina will be back soon! ;)

Reviewer: Sweety Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2007 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 18: Weasleys’ Wizarding Wheezes and Snowballs

This is one of the best fanfics i have ever read!!!! Im getting so absorbed in it!!! I LOVE Professor Burns' Character... shez awesome!! ... but im dying to know about her past ..... and desperately waiting for the rest of the story!!!! :D

Author's Response: ^^ Hi! Hehe... Well, thank you!!! ^_^ The reviews feed my imagination and my motivation! Glad that you LOVE Professor Burns! *Big smile* I'll try to tell more about Burns' past in the sequel. I had thought I could include elements from her past; from your comment, I should really go further in this idea... *think, think* For the moment, I've written almost one complete chapter, so that's a start! I'll keep working! ^^

Reviewer: Lelle Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2007 05:02 am Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

This was an amazing and exhilarating read! Katarina was an amazing character; you really brought a non cannon character to the plate and did her justice. Severus was fabulous. I especially loved how you wrote the story, from a multitude of perspectives; I really enjoyed reading your Harry, which is rare for me, so often Harry just gets tossed and made rather annoying. GREAT job again, and I hope you'll write more fanfic, selfishly, of course. Good luck with writing, and thanks again for a wonderful read. It's been a ride!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for this kind review!!! ^___^ It will highlight my day! It's been a long time since I last posted a comment here, and I'm glad to do it. I have started a sequel for "Swept From the Past", but the events in my life have prevented me from writing more seriously. But this is a sequel that I absolutely want to keep writing. Your comment really encourages me! I had forgotten the sensation of receiving reviews, and it's truly awsome! It reminds me of very good things linked to this story (the whole atmosphere of the writing experience). So I'll try to use this sensation to motivate me again! Thanks! ^^

Reviewer: tilakbenith Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 10:05 am Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

Nice. You could make a fortune if you could print & sell this.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks a lot... ^^ That's a shame I can't do that, do at least I can keep writing... (And I will ^^).

Author's Response: "But at least..." I fumble with the words now... lol

Reviewer: sefoo Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

heey..its been along time since the last time i wrote a review.... any way u did agreat job on this stiry i knw its not complete yet but its one of my favorite stories ever ..^_^ i like how now kat and snap now together and i hope in the next chapter you'll tell us wt happened to harry & the others ...and also keep up the good work and i'm chearing u for ur effort *chear*:P so hope u all the best & good luck

Author's Response: Hi! Actually, the story is complete now, lol. I'm thinking of the sequel (something like "Swept From the Past II"), but I have very little time to write it. You'll have to be very patient, lol! ^^ Thanks for the kind review and glad to see you back! ^^ ~Arwen999~

Reviewer: Malchior Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

I started reading your story yesterday morning and I haven’t been able to do anything other than read this fanfic. It was so utterly mesmerizing and its safe to say (mind the pun) I was completely spellbound. You revealed a side of Snape that I don’t think any has ever seen before, you also managed to give a very good excuse as to why he turned traitor to Voldermort. Katarina Burns is such an amazing character, I loved her to death. She seemed to come alive in this story and I truly felt the pain she held in her heart. I admit there were times I was teary eyed, (Halloween night for one) and I felt so depressed when she revealed her pain. I loved the character development and they way you could bring them so close, only to have them be ripped apart. Although, I wish you hadn’t left the cliff hanger with Ron/Hemione and Harry/Ginny; I know you got them together, but I (personally) would have liked to have see more development with them. You are an amazing writer; let no other tell you different, less they be fools. Regardless of what anyone tells you, keep writing; you have a gift that should not be contained.

Author's Response: Hi! And thanks for this nice comment! ^^ Since I've moved in another town, I've felt depressed; and I often have internal questions like "can I really become a writer?" Well, your review encourages me not to lose hope. I'm glad that you love Katarina so much ^^ and that you discovered a new side of Snape. My story was of course, focused on Katarina's and Severus' relationship and I'm happy you loved the evolution of both characters. Concerning Ron/Hermione and Harry/Ginny (especially Harry/Ginny), yes, their relationship was probably not as detailed as it could have been. Probably because I was completely fascinated by Snape/Burns, lol. But I tried not to skip the scenes with the two other couples. For example, I enjoyed writing the scene where Hermione is searching for Ron after the ceiling had collapsed, and all the scenes where Ron reacts like a cretin (which often happens, lol). And I liked torturing Harry with his "Ginny in love with Alphonso and always talking about him", lol. But maybe I could think of new scenes for the sequel. After all, the story is not over... ^^ I have actually started to write this sequel I keep talking about, but I write it very slowly. The scenes must appear clearly in my mind first, and I don't want to forget about little (but important) details. ^^

Reviewer: Serpendipity Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2007 11:56 am Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

I Loved your story:o) It has kept me occupied at work........... for many weeks. Its the slow season.... Im sorry I didnt write more reviews, I just thought since the story was written so long ago you wouldnt even recieve them. The Universe you created was fantastic! I never thought Id find myself sympathizing and dare I say even liking snape a little bit. Nad Burns was such an amaxing and original charater. This was a story that I can say I got lost in, the first harry potter fan fic that I was able to read from start to finish. I look forward to an update on burns and snapes relationship. I have so many questions.......... the main one being will burns adopt Harry now ? I know hes almost 17 but still..... Snape would freak out! Any way you definitly have a talent and I hope to read more from you in the future!

Author's Response: Well, thanks for your kind review! I won't give up my story and I'll keep receiving (and checking) the reviews! This fic is too important for me! ^^ I'm glad that you liked the Universe I created, Burns, and even Snape (a little bit, lol). For the moment, I still haven't written the sequel, but it keeps developing in my mind. Will Burns adopt Harry now? Well, good question. I hadn't really thought of it, since Harry is almost 17, but it could be something to discuss... lol And I'm sure that Snape would have many things to say... ^^ Hmmm, I'll think of it... ^^ Be patient! I'll be back soon! ^^ I may be late, but I'll be back!

Reviewer: Blagder Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 02:52 am Title: Chapter 2: Back to Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place

hmm.. long and good! Great story!

Author's Response: Hehe... thanks for the review! ^_^ ~Arwen~

Reviewer: 047698667 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

.......Gah! Holy Sweet Jesus! Very well done. I must admit, that I can't give such a wonderful review as the last...lengthly one, however this will do, i guess. As i said before, it could very well stand on it's own, and i applaud your efforts into creating such a wonderful read! Since I finished it, I've shown it to a few close friends, who also agree it is a wonderful read (thus far). Indeed, you have talent for creating wonders! And do please take it to heart when I say, You deserve the words I've written!

Author's Response: Well, thanks a lot! ^^ I'll take your words to heart and I'll keep writing! I often doubt of myself, but I'll keep thinking of all the nice reviews I got to give myself courage when I feel discouraged. Thanks for all the support! ^^ Severus and Katarina will be back!

Reviewer: shewitch Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 09:52 am Title: Chapter 60: The Emerald’s Heart –– part thirteen

*clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap**clap**clap* applause for a wonderful story being finished! And for our great author who was tired and busy and still managed to post this so "aaaaaaah" chapter. :) You rock Arwen!!!!! anyhow, i think we will allow you to take a little well earned rest but you better be back before we notice it. I adore this chapter, and i just love the whole story as you already know. With loads of support, just keep up the good work, and don't forget to let me know when you write something new..... Shewitch

Author's Response: ^____^ Well, thanks for the review and the claps, lol! I am: ^____^ (I can't describe it otherwise, lol). I'll try to be back as soon as possible ^^, but for the moment I'll have to focus on the huge boxes I must fill with my things to move in another flat in a far away town (it will be a huge change). But I'll keep Katarina's and Severus' story in mind. And of course I'll let you know about the sequel! ^^ My "Swept From the Past II" (or something like that) is not mature yet. My child must grow up a bit, lol. But I'll keep feeding it with ideas, and soon... Anyway, I won't forget to tell you about my progress! ^^ ~Arwen~

Reviewer: 047698667 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 59: The Emerald’s Heart –– part twelve

I can't find anything on that site you provided....it's a bloody mess.....any chance on a link?.....good chapter, by the way (y)

Author's Response: Hello, Argh, I thought chapter 60 would have appeared here quickly. *damned* Here is the address on fictionalley: http://www.fictionalley.org/authors...999/SFTP59.html Happy reading! ^^

Author's Response: Oops, not the correct address. The right one is here: http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/arwen999/SFTP59.html That's luck I checked before... ^^'

Reviewer: 047698667 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 58: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eleven

Incredible! So far it not only could stand on its own, but it could also fit as a replacement for the Half-Blood Prince! Extraordinarily written, and very captivating. I await tentively for the next chapter, and urge you to write faster. Very well done. I bow to your talent. It has, thus far, completely blown me away. I do hope it will continue to do so!

Author's Response: Well, thanks a lot for your very nice comment... *blush* *don't know what to say* I'll try to post the next chapter very soon and of course, I'll keep writing! Your comment will definitely make my day (and my week, lol) ^_____^. *blush again*

Author's Response: Even after a few minutes, I still don't know what to say... lol

Reviewer: safsaf Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 58: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eleven

12-17-2006 20:00 Rated 10

heey great story
i liked it alot and specially kat and snap happy they got together .
i didnt read it from the beginig but i'll work in it
any ways hope u'll post the new chapter soon ^^ dont leave us wondring about wt is going to happened like the last time
keep the good work :D:D
~*~SEFO~*~

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! ^^ No, I won't let you wait as long as the previous time. I'll post the next chapter in January. Finishing it is hard, because although I'm thinking of a sequel, it will be the last chapter (and words) for this fic. It's not a farewell, just a goodbye, but it squeezes my heart...

Reviewer: shewitch Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 58: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eleven

11-22-2006 14:46

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see the sequel.. Love, shewitch

Author's Response: Oh, a review! I'm so glad you reviewed, shewitch! The new system didn't mention any comment! I thought no one had read anything... So thanks a lot for this review *huge tears of joy*

So... In the chapter, I had mentioned more author notes on the review page. But unfortunately, I can't comment my own story, which means I have to put the (long) notes here (they didn't want me to post them on the chapter page, grrr!).

AUTHOR NOTES: The new system on Sycophant Hex is really disturbing. I almost fell from my chair when I discovered the site had changed so much. And I feared for a moment that all my work and your reviews here had disappeared... Oo *Heart beating, heart beating* *Almost died in shock* You don’t know how much I enjoyed (and still do) reading your reviews! You can’t imagine what a single review does when you’re not feeling well...

Anyway, let’s talk about the story... As you have guessed, there is another chapter after this one... ^^ I haven’t finished it yet, but I’m working on it. Before closing this book (maybe [surely?] there will be a second book... ^^), I still have things to write in Chapter 59. So be patient and enjoy Chapter 58! You can’t imagine how difficult it is for me to write the last two chapters. Frightening! Especially since it’s not finished at all in my mind. Difficult to put a full stop to an endless story... (okay, I know, that’s what sequels are for... lol [and like I said, I’m thinking of it ^^]).

Oh, and please don't forget to post a comment! I live for reviews!

Reviewer: Rebelipuff Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

10-25-2006 23:16 Rated 10

Great story....though I missed all of my classes today to finish reading it....whoops.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for this rewiew! I hadn't seen it until now, so you put a huge smile on my face! Like that: ^_______^
*happy*

Reviewer: LunaSnape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 51: The Emerald’s Heart –– part four

03-12-2007 02:50 Rated 10

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I am possibly the stupidest person in the world! Ever since chapter 40 I have been going to the other site to look for updates but I didn't have an account so I couldn't review and I felt really bad because I feel that if the author writes as well as you do he/she deserves to be thanked so I had a brilliant idea after another 20 chapters that I was going to leave a review here on the corresponding chapter if you updated this one as far. *deep breath* I AM SO SORRY THAT I DIDN'T REVIEW BETWEEN CHAPTERS 40 AND 51!!! It didn't occur to me that you would update them both, and you deserve a better fan than me lol. But now that I see that you have it on this archive I will not only faithfully leave a review for each new chapter but I will go chapter by chapter from this one and give a review ;) once again I am sorry I neglected to use my brain ;)
*LunaSnape*

Author's Response: Hi again! Thanks for all that you said! These times, I felt really discouraged by Sycophant Hex, so I didn't take the time to post Chapter 59 here (I wasn't motivated). So now I'm really glad to have reviews from a reader! ^^ I thought the readers had all forgotten about me here, lol. I'll post the next chapter very soon. And I'll try to pay attention to all your reviews. On the awful Sychophant Hex System, I didn't get an alert to warn me that somone had posted a comment. That's luck they came back to the Lumos form... I miss my previous readers so much!

Reviewer: Vampire_Princess Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 17: Lupin’s spell –– part two

02-22-2007 13:50 Rated 9

Only only chapter 17 but enjoying it so far. Really unique story!

I don't usually like stories with new characters, but this one is interesting. You've made her a tough female, which the books don't really have.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your nice comment! I've just received an alert to tell me about the reviews on Lumos! ^^ *smiles* I hope you'll like the rest of my book! ^^

Reviewer: SevSnogger Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

I am still overwhelmed by the story....I just love it....and no matter that you were late with updates...I always will wait because good things are always worth the wait ya know :>) Did I say it before? This is truly a masterpiece. Thanks so much for always brightening my day with your story. You will never know how much it had cheered me up during the bad time I had. Thanks for all the tears and laughter!!!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks a lot for your comment! ^___^ I'm really glad that you liked my story and that it helped you during the bad time you had. Truly, writing it also helped me when I wasn't feeling well. So I'm glad to hear (well, read) that it had somehow the same effect on other people, lol. I suppose that's why I have so much trouble to finish my fic, although I'm thinking of a sequel. Full stops are so scary! Anyway, you highlighted my day (well, night, now) with your comment! That's really encouraging! ^_____^ P.S. I'm still writing the last two chapters, and it's really hard!

Author's Response: P.P.S. Did I write that you "highlighted my day"? I meant "enlightened", lol.

Reviewer: drow_princess Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2006 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 35: Pancakes, letters, and babies

I love your stories! I especially love how you put so much emotion into Katarina, it makes me relate to her pain. Please dont stop writing your wonderful stories. Dont ever be discouraged or upset when other people are malicious, it usually means they're jealous. Au revoir. drow_princess ~An Admiring fan~

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks a lot for your review! ^^ I'll try not to be discouraged by mean people and I'll keep writing. For the moment, I'm very late in writing my fic, but I won't stop. Just need time to rest, because I'm really exhausted. A bientôt! ^^

Reviewer: hellfireangel Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2006 02:56 am Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

Just wanted to say that i think you are doing a fantastic job on this and i hope you continue writing!!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review and the compliment! Yes, I'll keep writing! Slower (because I'm really tired and because I'll be leaving during several weeks for the holidays), but I won't stop! ^^

Reviewer: sefoo Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2006 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

oooooooow i'm happy for kat and snape ^^ i'm glad they r magicly married to each other {coz i think kar wont ever trust snap for long time} any ways cant wait to read the new chapter i hope it will be finished befor the 27th of june thaaanx *hugz*

Author's Response: Hi! Unfortunately, no, the chapter wasn't finished before the 27th of June. I was too exhausted to keep writing these last weeks. I even had to stop writing my thesis for a few weeks. Really needed to rest (writing while the weather was very hot was too difficult). I'll keep writing, but I'll be slower. I'm really sorry. Be patient! ^^

Reviewer: sefoo Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

heey finally i finished the exams . any way good work this chapter is very nice and i chear u for the hard work *hugz* lool .. and i didnt finished it but iam working on finishing reading so hope u the best*hugz* and hope that the story wont end coz it is so cool^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! No, the story won't end! ^^

Reviewer: lemltd98 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2006 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

Glad that Bellatrix got her due at last. Whip - Zoom - Severus and Kat are again a couple, WOW wish all misunderstandings could happen that fast! :) Bet this event will turn a few heads. You've done a great job throughout the entire story. You deserve more than several pats on the back. Here's to you!

Author's Response: Hi! I've just realised I had forgotten to reply to you. *blush* Thanks for the pats on my back... lol That's great to know you liked my work! I wish I could write more. I haven't written the next chapter yet, but I'm thinking of it. And it will be "a bit" difficult for Katarina to tell everyone she and Severus are together again. lol I don't know exactly how I'll write it, but my brains are working on it... ^^ Thanks for the review! ^^

Reviewer: sefoo Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 08:34 am Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten

heey i'll start this chaptet but maybe it will take a long time to review coz i've got a final exams wish me luck ^_^

Author's Response: Hi! Good luck for your exams! And don't forget to review when they're over! ^^ See you soon! ^^

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