Beautiful! Exquisitely paced and with a delicate touch. I am on to Chapter Two.
Absolutely excellent! I can't think why you don's have more reviews than you do! It was so refreshing not to read a work steeped in smut. Thank you :)
Author's Response: And there you may have your answer! There does seem to be a preference for the erotic at this site, but that was not the story I was writing. Thank you for your kind review!
Wonderful first chapter. You've done a lovely job setting the scene!
I'm looking forward to seeing where your headed with this. I liked the first chapter.
This is a very interesting and great start! can't wait to see what Sev's full reaction to seeing Lily will be and where the room came from! Can't wait for more!!
Wow, what a great first chapter!! So is this the first time Lily's portrait has ever had visitors? It'll be fun seeing who you have Lily chat with.