Bravissima!
Absoloutely brilliant! This is the most original fanfic I have ever read. I love it and can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your interest!
I can easily see this Lily growing into the Lily we know from the books; passionate, intelligent, strong-minded and -willed. She and Hermione are certainly soul-sisters. I'm looking forward to the first meeting between Lily and Harry. I'd also like to see Hermione stick up for Harry a little more. She knows that Harry isn't the way Lily is describing James. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (Is the chapter title indicative of what will happen? A judgement?)
Amazing! I love the idea of the painting Lilly can't leave and the counterspell is ingenious. I'm also glad that you've give Hermione some doubts about it all. I mean, a spell that invovles blood could be 'construed as dark magic'. I'm loving it. Keep updating please. You've got a brillant plot going here.
I'm with Hermione ... what's going to go wrong?? And brewing a potion - Snape has got to find out about this. And what is he going to think? I do hope Lily comes to like Harry, though. Poor kid. He's had it pretty rough. Okay, defintiely looking forward to an update! :-) Thanks for writing. Best, Sophie