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Reviewer: lunafish Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2005 12:58 am Title: Moments

A fascinating look at the other, good half of the Black family. I can easily believe that this is how Tonks' parents began their courtship. Little Dora was perfect. And excellent job introducing The young Sirius is a proper rogue, and I love your conclusion with Remus--very subtle!

Reviewer: jadeddiva Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2005 09:51 am Title: Moments

Very original, and I love how it ended!

Reviewer: redvelvetcanopy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2005 03:50 pm Title: Moments

I think that Ted was Muggle-born, and I do agree with you that Andromeda would have been Slytherin. Doesn't mean she could't fall for a Gryffindor, right? That being said, this is a lovely story! I love the idea that Tonks gets her "grace" from her father. I could just picture it! And working the bit it about Sirius was very clever. He WOULD be the type to use a little girl as bait to snag a woman! Well done! Where is Dumbdore's Secret archived?

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 07:48 pm Title: Moments

Oh, I like this very much! I really like Tonks and never really thought much about her background. I especially liked the Sirius moments! Well done, Sophie!

Reviewer: Arwen999 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 02:45 am Title: Moments

Oh God...How difficult to rate a fic... Anyway, it's the first time I read something about Tonks' parents and her daughter's link with Sirius Black. So here are my first impressions: "“You, from school,” he said, his bloody, cracked lips trying desperately to form a smile." I like this sentence and the fact that Ted doesn't confuses her with her sister. Some of Andie's reactions really correspond those of a "Black" and a Slytherin (in the first fourth parts), although she's much more gentle than another Black or Slytherin would be. I find the relation between Sirius and Dora very touching and totally in the character. Sirius couldn't be more Sirius than in the fifth part (^^) and Dora's reaction to the article is moving ("“Why does Sirius look so mean?” she asked, scooting away from her father and pointing at the picture.") Truth comes from children's mouthes. A sad passage. Seventh part: Dora is definitely her father's daughter (that's exactly what I thought before reading the last sentence of the seventh part). And her letter was very funny! Eight part: sniff, touching again! I'm glad they found each other after so long! Part nine: I love Tonks reaction to Mrs. Black's insults. "She wrinkled her nose at his use of her full name, then turned her attention to Remus. Meeting his warm, gray eyes, she felt something inexplicable tug at her gut." Well... definitely Ted's daugther!^^ Interesting meeting! Very good job! P.S. Don't be bothered by my mistakes. I'm French!

Reviewer: Vocalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2005 06:30 pm Title: Moments

Very nice, and this ties in well with your other story at Occlumency. I especially liked Tonks' letter to her parents. You created a believable backstory for her.

Reviewer: Hawklaw Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2005 02:37 pm Title: Moments

That was absolutely wonderful! I loved it, and it just seemed to fit the characters. You've created a very plausible backstory for characters (Andromeda and Ted) that I hope will appear in the future books. Thank you for writing such a charming piece!

Reviewer: ShagsTheDustmop Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 05:07 pm Title: Moments

I liked this, it was a plausible backstory for the characters. Your canon assessments are correct; we have no knowledge of Andromeda Black's house. In the RP I used to do we had her in Ravenclaw, so I tend to think of her that way but it certainly isn't canon. And Ted is indeed a Muggleborn.

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