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Reviewer: fly_chickadee Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 07:25 pm Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

I think my brain died laughing. Amen to that. I've never seen such creative rhymes. I loved it! (and if you anyone didn't pick Snape, they're just stupid.)

Reviewer: haraheart Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 01:23 pm Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

What a classic piece of poetry! It was rude and it was crude, but I loved every second. Of course, I would go for Snape too.

Author's Response: Excellent choice. Classic poetry, eh? Thank you.

Reviewer: Preseli Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 12:31 pm Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

hahahahahahahahaha! I say amen to that!

Author's Response: Amen!

Reviewer: aaden Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2005 03:26 am Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

Aww, this is so cute. I love your little rhyme scheme. Very nice.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! I am glad you enjoyed reading it. I must say that out of the fanfiction I have written, this is my favorite.

Reviewer: LittleNavyGirl Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 12:00 am Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

I must agree Snape is the one
one heck of a shag and most delightful in bed.

Author's Response: Indeed, Snape is the choice! Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Snapesforte Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 03:00 am Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

Snape. ;) Thanks for making me laugh. Very amusing, and well-composed.

Author's Response: I'm glad this gave you a chuckle. It was a joy to write.

Reviewer: Rainbow Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 05:07 pm Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

Snape! Do you really need to ask?

Author's Response: Hehe! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Excellent choice of a lover, indeed!
I fancy Snape as a sex hungry steed.

Reviewer: Vocalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 03:15 pm Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

I must agree that Snape is the one. A shag with a stag? Not nearly as fun. Potter's a prat; that much is quite clear. He may be a stag, but Snape is a dear!

Author's Response: Oh, mydear lady, how I love your prose!
We both would pick Snape with the large, crooked nose.
The stag would be boring, not really my style.
It's Severus Snape that makes you and I smile!

Reviewer: MagicMaker Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 06:57 pm Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

If I were in the mood for shagging, the Gryffindor Stag I would be bagging To bad our dear Lily did not feel the same, for her the brave gryffindor was a mere game. Alas, James did win her lusty heart, tis over now together forever never to be part.

Author's Response: Alas, my dear lady, I do not concur Though James, it would seem, was the right man for her,
For I would have chosen the Slytherin snake
A great evil shag would dear Severus make!
I prefer naughty to nice, any day
So I have not a choice, it is Snape all the way!

Reviewer: LariLee Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 12:14 am Title: Lily's Worst Mistake

A Slytherin master has more to offer
(A slithery member doth he proffer)
than a Gryffindor stag--always 'horny'
I'd write more but it'd only be corny.

Dearly love this!
~Lisa

Author's Response: You little devil you! You came all the way over from Occlumency just to make night! Thank you for the lovely prose. Alas, I have nothing in my brain at the moment or I would return the favor!

#Liz

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