Wow, it took my breath away... Its great the way it is. The style, the length. Normally I prefer long stories over one shots, but if it would have been a long story it would have spoiled the "thing" from this story. How I feel when I read it, the darkness, the... "thing"... Sorry I cant be more specific. Keep up the good work!
loved it and hated it all at once. I applaud you and boo at you at the same time.
that was the best one I've read so far. Wow. How old are you? I can't write like that. I'm crying right now. Not very happy. Maybe you should some happy things too. It's just so SSAAAAAAAAAAAAD but in a good way. But not really. But IT was good...I lOVED IT!
Wow.... it made me want to cry. That was so .... wow. They were just so hopeless and helpless. It was all so sad. I love your writing, you´re definetly good at it. keep up the good fics. (smiles)
Wow I need a tissue! Thanks for sharing this fic...I enjoyed reading it....gonna go cry now...