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Reviewer: Emily Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 05:23 pm Title: Dreams Realized

its a great intro to a story! but it does need work. if u need help i can help. ive been writing for a while.

Reviewer: Beulah_Page Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2005 11:21 pm Title: Dreams Realized

This was adorable! I can see this happening, given the context. And who knows, Dumbledore's the sort to introduce odd customs.

Reviewer: hpfanforever Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 04:55 am Title: Dreams Realized

cool

Reviewer: imgingins Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 08:11 pm Title: Dreams Realized

WHAT?! I thought it was a great story!

Reviewer: morgan Anonymous star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2005 06:55 pm Title: Dreams Realized

Things wrong in the story: To short- good stories are at least a chapter Corny- This made me feel like barfing Things Good: pairing- This was really good pairing Advice: Try better next time

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