OMG!!!!!! That was so HOT!!!!!! I wouldn't say no to a Malfoy either. lolol
good but was wwwwwwwway to short
Author's Response: sometimes short is sweet!
Hmm.
Not bad, but terribly fast-paced. You should have drawn out the sex more, love.
Author's Response: I'm not a drawn out sort of person... I like it fast paced!
~*~My Sweet Jesus ~*~ That was beautiful... I need to go talk to my boyfriend ~lol~ But seriously that was wonderful.. though it was under "porn without point" or whatever it had one!! At least good enough for me!!!!
~*~ Da OtTeR ~*~
Author's Response: Why thank you!
~*~My Sweet Jesus ~*~ That was beautiful... I need to go talk to my boyfriend ~lol~ But seriously that was wonderful.. though it was under "porn without point" or whatever it had one!! At least good enough for me!!!!
~*~ Da OtTeR ~*~
Author's Response: Why thank you!
XDD OH, that was good! <3
Author's Response: Tanks!
I liked it, but it could have been longer and more detailed. A few things were mentioned there that were brushed over or not really part of the story - like Draco questioning his fathers beliefs. But I liked that you keepd Draco as a cold, egotisical prat - rather than like some stories where he is a warm and fuzzy pansy! (no pun intended) :) Good start to a smut writing career!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I have some good character skills!
wow, that was awesome!
Author's Response: :D
wow, that was awesome!
Author's Response: ;)
Short but I like it, non the less. Good job and good luck with any future stories...SSR
Author's Response: Tanks!
Shame on you Draco! Didn't you at least tell her why you had her hot and moaning against a brick wall? You did brilliantly with keeping the characters in canon Tophera, my compliments.
Author's Response: Great! Thank you so much!! I thought it would be an interesting pairing, and of course, Draco is more concerned with himself than explaining himself to others... ;)