[Report This]Date: 06/08/2010 12:04 am Title: Perfect
I'm enjoying this story, even though I find your Severus to be OOC.
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2010 11:13 am Title: Remembering the True Enemy
Oh, please say you will finish this. I think it's a really good love story between them. I was thought they could have something more together.
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 09:48 pm Title: The Article
Please let us know if you think about going on with that story! I really like it! So is it worth to check from time to time for a new chapter or did you abandoned it? Sunny
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2005 11:11 am Title: Remembering the True Enemy
Interesting to think of how the events unfolding were Lucius' downfall, but somehow strengthened Severus' hand a bit. Will you continue this?
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2005 11:10 am Title: Perfect
It is possible at the time that the Cruciatus wasn't outlawed, maybe? I love your Lucius. Except that I don't think he'd really be the type to marry when he didn't want to, but it is a great plot twist, I agree with you on that. He defends Snape better than Snape defends himself.
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2005 11:08 am Title: Remembering the Enemy
I love the way you have him assessing the Marauders' qualities. Re Sirius: He probably could’ve made a girl orgasm just by looking her in the eyes. Yep, it would work for me. Sounds like he has a bit of a crush on all of them, save Peter.
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2005 11:06 am Title: Welcoming Loneliness
Those naughty Marauders! They were quite nasty to Snape, how scary to be buck-naked in front of a crowd. Lucius does seem to be quite the saviour, and at the same time, dominating. Very tantalizing.
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2005 11:04 am Title: The Article
I like how you write this short, tantalizing bit to introduce a longer chapter. Very clever. I am curious, though. I assume that you wrote this pre-HBP, and wonder about Snape making himself so cozy at Grimmauld Place.
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2005 01:53 pm Title: Remembering the Enemy
Now, how I see it: Lucius could make a girl orgasm just by looking her in the eyes. As a matter of fact, so could Severus. (Hey, Severus....look at me.) *snicker*
So when are we going to get to read about this party??
Author's Response: Oh, Im so sorry, I submitted the third chapter ages ago, but they said it was too "American" for the site. So I have to revise it, and like I said, I have been so intensely busy. But hey, tell you what. I will revise it tomorrow and TRY to send it in. We'll see if they accept it. But hey, if you want to do it the easy way, just go to harrypotterfanfiction.com and do a Search for jake epstein, kay? I have several several stories on that site. Late!
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2005 01:50 pm Title: Welcoming Loneliness
Wow. The tension. You have explored depths in slash that I have never attempted. Bravo.
Author's Response: Really? Wow, what an honour being told that by someone who is so intensely good at writing. Yay! *skips around in the glory of it all*
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2005 12:34 pm Title: The Article
Jake. You intrigued me with your review of my story, so I visited your profile and am now reading yours. There is a promise of slash, did you say? I can see where this may be going. Perhaps you would like to read a slash story of mine and let me know what you think? http://serpensortia.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=1110
Now, am I right in assuming that you are in the minority here? A male amongst females? (Just curious. I know another male who writes fanfic.) Jake is usually a boy's name...you don't have to answer if you don't want (or you can e-mail me for greater privacy).
This is supposed to be a review for this story, isn't it? It is a great start and I am going on to read the next chapter. You peaked my interest, you did. By the way, your profile mentions that you have posted stories elsewhere. Wanna divulge?
Author's Response: OH God! I am so intenselysorry that I haven't written in the longest time. Please accept my most intese apologies! But yes, if you wish, I shall email you, since you probably think I am an inconsiderate dungbomb for not responding. But I just moved from Arizona to California, so I have been MOST busy! Anyway, Iam going to check your other reviews, then email you, kay?
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2005 01:59 am Title: Welcoming Loneliness
It's good keep going you really have something
Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAAY! THANKS! YOU ROCK! I was beginning to wonder if my story is invisible or inaccessable or something! Keep reading, and I'll keep writing, pwomise!
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2005 03:59 am Title: The Article
OH, come on people! Let's get our groove on here and post some reviews... we're all authors here, are we really that dead on words? Pathetic!
Author's Response: I guess so.
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2005 01:56 pm Title: The Article
It's a really good story. Can you post an other chapter?
Author's Response: Yay! My first review! I love you! Oh, um, I did post another, it just needs to go through the regular processing and should be posted very soon. Thank you soooo soooooo much!