hehe. that last comment by mrs. black was hilarious! so good!
Loved it! And I love that last paragraph...classic!
Whoo! Three cheers for slash, I guess - I've never been a big fan of this genre, but you certainly have a knack for making it... well, interesting! Ah, yes- very interesting, very hot, and very funny. Besides, I'm a sucker for werewolves in leather. ;) Great writing. Cheers.
This was so funny, I'll admit. And fun. Gay Remus. Rawr. Keep writing! Kingsley was hilarious in this story.
Waaaaaahhahahaha! Love it! Butch/leather!Kingsley is too hot for words. I never saw him as gay before, but I shall never see him as straight after this! And Bill's make-up... and nipple rings... and Snitch tattoo... gah. Too hot. Poor Mrs Black. Poor poker table. I'm glad Remus figured out what he wanted. ;-)
wow that was great .. i love it .. later for now angel
Hey great story love the last part with Mrs black very funny
Wow. That was excellent! Brilliant even. Very very hot.
That was amazing! "At least you could do it out here where I could see!” lol That was great.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed :D
Haha, that rocked! Hmmm....Bill....Eye-liner....Nice touch! ::Thumbs Up::
Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked.
Gah. That was freakin' HOT. "Do it out here where I could see!" HAHAHAHAHA
Author's Response: Hee!!! Mrs. Black, secret perv :D
That was hot! Bill as a transvestite or semi-drag queen is delicious. I also love the subtle humor in the banter between the men and that bit at the end with Mrs. Black; kinky voyeur. Awesome ficlette.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
*bows to the almighty LeoGryffin.* We're not worthy! We're not worthy!
Author's Response: Awww, this was such a sweet thing to say!
damn thats hilarious....but really Bill the bi?? OK now im concerned...... i think i'll stick to non gay pwp...... *shudder*
There is definitely a gay bloke inside me trying to get out!!! *Trots off to screw the hubby!*
last line, hella funny, thats pretty unique, lol Im definetly laughing my aff off, Kinsley watchign... Ms.Black's commnet is goifg to forever be etched into my brain
Brilliantly written story I could actually picturing everything happening!! Who cares bout the little thing with the dragon hide boots being chalrie/bill. Bloddy brilliant writing!!! Love it! YUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
“Horrible blood traitors, half-bloods, and monsters! In my house! At least you could do it out here where I could see!” Mrs. Black cried, but no one heard her this time. ****That is the best part of the story imho. No, I don't mean that the story was bad cause it wasn't. It was freakin' awesome. Just, that last part made it wonderful. Very nice.
this iste is turning me into a homosexual, I notice i get off more on the gay pornos, IM SCARED I AM SUPPOSED TO LIKE WOMEN!!!!
What a horrible story, loved the ending. There was only one problem in the story.... well, two. After you said that thing about Bill having blush on, I imagined a drag-queen all the way throughout the entire story. Second, the one with the Dragon-Hide boots is not Bill, that would be Charlie, who handles Dragons. Bill works at the Gringotts Bank. He is the one who resembles Percy in most respects. But this was indeed a good story for the most part, especially if you are a guy...
i really injoyed the stoy! i like the pairing i never realy placed them together in my head it's difficult to find stories that grasp Remus's character properly especially during sex (i wonder how he would act?) Damn Bills hot!