[Report This]Date: 08/12/2005 11:44 pm Title: Act II: The Warehouse
Wow! This is good. Great retelling of Shakespeare's Othello.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2005 11:37 am Title: Act II: The Warehouse
Oh, just what is our evil Remus setting up here? Whoever would have guessed he could be such a scheming bastard ;)
"Moody’s got a stash of firewhisky at the back of this cupboard, I know he does, but he’s Transfigured it to look like air." *dies*
The new parents among this tale’s gentle readers may sympathise with the difficulties of attending to one’s carnal desires when one is up half the night calming an upset infant, not to mention when one’s wife is suffering from chafed nipples and has the sex drive of an elderly Flobberworm.
LOL! I think you hit the nail right on the head with that one!
Author's Response: Aha! I thought you might note that line! One of my betas read that and noted, "This makes me wonder what the sex drive of a *young* Flobberworm is like..." :) Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 06/28/2005 07:31 am Title: Act II: The Warehouse
This is getting better and better! I especially enjoyed the part when Remus set up Sirius. And as to icky het - dear, you wrote it really, really well. I am a het reader so I can tell. This was nice and pleasant and very much ineteresting study of James' inner working. I loved this chapter (or act?) and can't wait to see more. More. More...
Author's Response: Thanks, Novinha, that's very nice to hear! In my head, this story is so weird that I'm a bit concerned about reader response to it, so I do appreciate your enthusiasm! Act III coming soon... :)