Reviewer: Bargle5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2005 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Six: And all for the Want of a Horseshoe Nail

Very interesting. Butterfly Effect is indeed an appropriate title. Very believeable that Harry could have ended up in Ravenclaw in different circumstances. Good work with the 'Hagrid-speak'. I'm not enough of a nitpicker to say it's a 100% right, but there's nothing jarringly out of place. Looking forward to the rest of the story. How many more chapters do you have planned?

Author's Response: That was, in fact, the whole shebang. I think I went back and marked it complete (now I have to go back and check... ). Thanks, especially for the Hagrid-speak. It had darn well better be right, I did a sheer ton of research. You're brave, I don't think I'd try to do Filch-speak (more subtle).