[Report This]Date: 09/12/2008 03:21 am Title: Chapter 19: The Truth Will Set You Free
I have really enjoyed reading this story. It's so much a American's PoV. "Look, stop strategizing, stop agonizing, find the snake faced bastard, kill him - then let's have a steak - rare."
But I kept thinking that it was completed. Please do write more.
I really like Kyle and would like to know more about the Elysian Kingdom.
I am anticipating a few of the Queen's soldiers taking on the Death Eaters, kicking butt and giving Harry his chance at the foul Riddle. But perhaps you have other plans. Let's see!
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 18: Ambush the Ambushers
This is a great story.
How many more chapters will ther be?
Author's Response: Not quite sure.
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2007 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 17: The Black Knight
Excellent story. Not enough people introduce an original character. It is refreshing. I'm impatiently waiting for more.
Author's Response: More chapters are coming.
[Report This]Date: 07/14/2006 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
ood story, can't wait to see more.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 07:51 am Title: Chapter 15: Change in Scheduling
Very nice. I loved it. Harry so loves Ginny lol :P <3
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2005 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 10: Quidditch Try-outs
hmm, this is starting off as an interesting school year. can't wait to see what's up next............
Author's Response: Thanks. I must apologize for how long it's taken to update. However my hard drive recently went down the drain, and I was unable to remember this site's address. Updates will be happening much faster I promise.
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 5: Bill and Fleur's Wedding
Ginny sure seems smitten doesn't she? Sounds like Kyle might have his hands full. Hope Harry's toes don't suffer too bad.....he might needs his agility later on. :)
Author's Response: I leave that up to the readers imagination. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2005 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 4: Diagon Alley
I'm always a bit skeptical of OC's, but this is good. Keep it up! I was a bit confused, though, when his last name changed from Peterson to Hanshaw.
Author's Response: Thanks for catching that mistake. The OC's name is Kyle Peterson, I went through a number of different names. Thought I had gotten rid of all the other names.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2005 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 4: Diagon Alley
you're doing a good job. keep working at it!
[Report This]Date: 09/08/2005 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
You have a promising start to what I anticipate to be a good story. Keep at it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2005 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
Wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it! Update soon.
Author's Response: I've got two Chapters waiting to get approved.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2005 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
ohhh so far so good! a bit confusing there at first trying to figure out who is who in the zoo,,, but all good so far! The age issue should be interesting to figure out .. cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 08/29/2005 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
So far so good! Looking forward to seeing where you're taking this.
Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2007 10:48 am Title: Chapter 22: Nothing's That Simple
Wow, this story is truly amazing. I was captivated from the first sentance. I love how you're making sport of they way the Ministry runs things. I truly enjoy reading this, although there are a few things I don't approve of.
1) I don't like how fickle Ginny seems to be, professing her love for Kyle, than turning around and making out with Harry, then back to Kyle agan.
2) Is it just me or does Kyle seem to be the master of all things? Combat, gentlemen, a plethora of wisdom, high ranking military officer, extremley charming, very friendly, and he seems to have just fallen into the teaching bit.
I simply love this story so far. I dearly hope you continue.
P.S. Kyle needs to teach them to improvise, if a soldier doesn't adapt, said soldier dies. Also, they must learn to not rely on magic so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for the support and I'll answer your questions in order. 1) Ginny doesn't switch back any more, she's staying with Kyle. 2) A Captain in the Army isn't that high of a rank, and teaching is something combat vets do to replacement troops. I am going to continue the story and why he's teaching them manly magic will be revealed latter on.
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2006 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 21: The Plan
dat was kool,cant wait till ur done!
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2006 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
its kool so far.
Author's Response: Sorry, RL issues came up, anyway quick answers, yes it's going to be long. How long, I really don't know. Thanks for all the positive feed-back.
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2006 07:41 am Title: Chapter 21: The Plan
hey! very good chapter indeed though long expected hope to read you soon
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2006 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 20: Glad We Wear Red
like the story are you planning on it being a really long one? (so much better than short ones) cant wait for next one
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2006 08:03 am Title: Chapter 20: Glad We Wear Red
hey you. I like your story a lot and i am anticipating next chapter. :) keep writing :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Secret Orders
hey i love this first chapter and i am going to read on I'll review more later
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2006 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 19: The Truth Will Set You Free
I really just have to tell you how much I love Narcissa's parting line. I don't think I mentioned it before but I should have.
~Clara
Author's Response: Thank you. Please keep the reviews coming.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 11: Hogsmeade
kyle doesnt deserve ginny tough!!!! give her to harry!!!! good story tough
Author's Response: What is it with Harry Ginny fans? :) I'm sorry to say this isn't a Harry/Ginny fic. Harry does find somebody, and we'll find out later who it is. Just try to remember, Kyle is a dashing military officer, he seems to draw women to him.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Harry Arrives
like the part about ron and hermione.. there good match. didnt even read this but i think think this will be really good.. good job so far!
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 04:34 am Title: Chapter 9: Enemy Defined
It's me. Third paragraph from bottom - Ginny addresses him as Captain Hanshaw
Author's Response: All right got those, as well. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 04:32 am Title: Chapter 8: That's Going to Leave a Mark
Hey! I'm glad to know I'm not crazy! Shackelbolt calls Kyle Hanshaw after he stuns him in this chapter. I'll let you know if I see any others!
Author's Response: Thanks I made the change.