I have really enjoyed reading this story. It's so much a American's PoV. "Look, stop strategizing, stop agonizing, find the snake faced bastard, kill him - then let's have a steak - rare."
But I kept thinking that it was completed. Please do write more.
I really like Kyle and would like to know more about the Elysian Kingdom.
I am anticipating a few of the Queen's soldiers taking on the Death Eaters, kicking butt and giving Harry his chance at the foul Riddle. But perhaps you have other plans. Let's see!
Author's Response: Thank you.
This is a great story.
How many more chapters will ther be?
Author's Response: Not quite sure.
Excellent story. Not enough people introduce an original character. It is refreshing. I'm impatiently waiting for more.
Author's Response: More chapters are coming.
ood story, can't wait to see more.
Very nice. I loved it. Harry so loves Ginny lol :P <3
hmm, this is starting off as an interesting school year. can't wait to see what's up next............
Author's Response: Thanks. I must apologize for how long it's taken to update. However my hard drive recently went down the drain, and I was unable to remember this site's address. Updates will be happening much faster I promise.
Ginny sure seems smitten doesn't she? Sounds like Kyle might have his hands full. Hope Harry's toes don't suffer too bad.....he might needs his agility later on. :)
Author's Response: I leave that up to the readers imagination. ;)
I'm always a bit skeptical of OC's, but this is good. Keep it up! I was a bit confused, though, when his last name changed from Peterson to Hanshaw.
Author's Response: Thanks for catching that mistake. The OC's name is Kyle Peterson, I went through a number of different names. Thought I had gotten rid of all the other names.
you're doing a good job. keep working at it!
You have a promising start to what I anticipate to be a good story. Keep at it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it! Update soon.
Author's Response: I've got two Chapters waiting to get approved.
ohhh so far so good! a bit confusing there at first trying to figure out who is who in the zoo,,, but all good so far! The age issue should be interesting to figure out .. cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
So far so good! Looking forward to seeing where you're taking this.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wow, this story is truly amazing. I was captivated from the first sentance. I love how you're making sport of they way the Ministry runs things. I truly enjoy reading this, although there are a few things I don't approve of.
1) I don't like how fickle Ginny seems to be, professing her love for Kyle, than turning around and making out with Harry, then back to Kyle agan.
2) Is it just me or does Kyle seem to be the master of all things? Combat, gentlemen, a plethora of wisdom, high ranking military officer, extremley charming, very friendly, and he seems to have just fallen into the teaching bit.
I simply love this story so far. I dearly hope you continue.
P.S. Kyle needs to teach them to improvise, if a soldier doesn't adapt, said soldier dies. Also, they must learn to not rely on magic so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for the support and I'll answer your questions in order. 1) Ginny doesn't switch back any more, she's staying with Kyle. 2) A Captain in the Army isn't that high of a rank, and teaching is something combat vets do to replacement troops. I am going to continue the story and why he's teaching them manly magic will be revealed latter on.
I really just have to tell you how much I love Narcissa's parting line. I don't think I mentioned it before but I should have.
Author's Response: Thank you. Please keep the reviews coming.
kyle doesnt deserve ginny tough!!!! give her to harry!!!! good story tough
Author's Response: What is it with Harry Ginny fans? :) I'm sorry to say this isn't a Harry/Ginny fic. Harry does find somebody, and we'll find out later who it is. Just try to remember, Kyle is a dashing military officer, he seems to draw women to him.