That was a beautifully written story about Dumbledore. I have never read a smut fic about Dumbledore, this was the first. The transition between past and present, the age and the memories, eighteen year old Dumbledore - beautifully written.
Oh I love this! Good job!
What a lovely and original story. This was nicely and sensitively written.
Aww! That was incredible! Dumbledore's quick wit and strange ways were exactly how one would expect. Of course, this is a definite compliment to your own wit! And, gawd, was that hot!!! I love Griselda's reservations, and final her giving in. Eighteen-year-old Dumbledore's frustration was well founded also! The chocolates were a nice touch. Brilliant
I think you captured a young Dumbledore very well. Loved the part about his being a virgin & the last where he left her a present under her pillow. Very nice & truly fluffy!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing it.
Charming!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Gosh... that was quite lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Jen
oh my goodness, how adorable :o) this makes me want to read more young!Albus stories. I especially like the detail of Griselda's clothes, I was starting to wonder myself, good god how much more??
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.
Jen
Fantastic! Fluffy and clever and hot and realistic. Young Dumbledore is love. Thanks so much for writing this!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. I really don't write much fluff, so I'm always concerned when I post it that I'm going to be a little too... cheesey I guess. Thanks for the comments!
Jen
Wonderful! I love Albus' eccentricities and his ready tongue.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun thinking about how the granfatherly headmaster would translate into a charming young man.
Jen
I really enjoyed this story. Your descriptions are great and the emotion was honest and believable. I thought I was the only one who liked imagining Albus as a young man. . . :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit that I like imagining all the characters in the most inappropriate situations ;)
Jen
Awww!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed
Jen
What a beautiful story with a real sexy young Albus. Thank you for it - it really was a pleasure to read!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and I appreciate your comments.
Jen
That was fabulous! Adorable.
Young!Albus is super-sexy.
What a wonderful idea.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. I had a lot of fun writing it.
Jen
It is such a good story! I love Dumbledore and it is nice to see him get a little play. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.
Jen
That was so much fun! I think you captured young Dumbledore perfectly here...charming, silly, and a little mysterious, but he's not all-knowing yet either.
Author's Response: Thank you! Those are exactly the things I was going for. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Jen
Razzberry, that was exceptional! You had me from the start as you wove your beautiful tale of two lovers. I was smiling at the poetic words of our dear Dumbledore, wow! You made me want to be her! Who wouldn't want to hear such flattery? LOL! The Victorian clothing--oh my! And I loved her response to why. Well done, Razz.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. I was a little worried that I was over-the-top with his flattery, but I kept piling it on. I decided that from my own perspective, one of those lines would be an eye-roller, but ten in rapid succession would probably start to make me giggle.
Jen
Oh my! I'm not entirely sure if I want to say..."Dang that was hot!" or "Awwww!!!"
Would you mind both? That was a really fun and sexy little one-shot. And I was really in the need for some non-angsty fluff, so merci beaucoup! :D Excellent piece! ~Aeryn
Author's Response: lol. Thank you! I love the dual reaction. I'm usually such an angst whore that it surprises me when I write something that doesn't have a word of angst in sight.
Jen
Creampuff? LOL!
A true delight! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I giggled as I wrote Creampuff. I have no idea where that came from, actually. Just happened, but I thought it sounded rather like a man who could tell Harry that his greatest wish was warm socks.
Jen
I'm not sure I've ever told you how much I adore the story. You've made me believe in Dumbledore sex!
~Lisa
Author's Response: Thank you! I had so much fun writing it that I think I might have to write another. Perhaps launch a new ship ;)
Thanks.
Jen